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Avoid qualiers
Qualiers are words that intentionally weaken the meaning of a sentence.
Although they may give the author a feeling that he is being more honest.
It’s better to simply say what you believe and let the reader decide if it’s
true.
Delete qualiers
She was quite an ugly woman.
Instead of:
She was an ugly woman.
She was an ugly woman.
Write:
Delete qualiers
It was pretty kind of her to bake a cake for a man who had only two weeks earlier caused her to
loose her job.
Instead of:
It was kind of her to bake a cake for a man who had only two weeks earlier caused her to loose
her job.
It was kind of her to bake a cake for a man who had only two weeks earlier caused her to loose
her job.
Write:
Delete qualiers
Words and phrases like kind of, a little, pretty much, a bit, and quite make
your sentences longer and more complex but they don’t make the
meaning clearer. Delete them .
About author
Hans Anderson
2007-Present: Lecturer at FPT Greenwich Programmes, FPT University.