The bar below shows scotlands exports to the rest of the UK and the world for the year 2014

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Brainstorming:
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Cách 1: Chia the UK và the World
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Introduction:
- Paraphrase
Overview:
- Những lĩnh vực nào the UK cao hơn the world ?
- Lĩnh vực nào chiếm cao nhất ở cả 2 nơi ?
Details:
a. Body 1: The World
- Business cao nhất, theo sau bởi Chemicals và
Wholesale
- Manufacture: gần bằng Other
- Còn lại dưới 3
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Body 2: the UK
Chemicals cao nhất,
Manufacture thứ hai
Electrical lớn hơn the World
Còn lại xấp xỉ từ 0.5 đến 2.5

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Cách 2: Chia theo mức độ chênh lệch

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Introduction:
- Paraphrase
Overview:
- Những lĩnh vực nào the UK cao hơn the world ?
- Lĩnh vực nào chiếm cao nhất ở cả 2 nơi ?
Details:
a. Body 1: Chênh lệch nhiều
- Business
- Wholesale
- Chemicals

- Other
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Body 2: Chênh lệch ít
Các ngành cịn lại

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Bài mẫu:

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CÁCH 1 : Chia the UK và the World
The provided graph illustrates the information about the exportation of different
fields in Scotland to other areas in Britain and the globe in the year of 2014.

Taken as a whole, most of the categories of the world were superior to the data
of the UK, aparting from Electrical & Instrument Engineering. In addition, the
amount of money earned from Business Services & Finance, Hotels &
Restaurant Services of the remainers of the globe made up the highest over the
period shown.

Concerning the exportation to the rest of the world, being 13.8 billion, the first
position was represented to Business Services & Finance, Hotels & Restaurant
Services. This followed by 9.5 of Chemicals & Mineral Products and 8.2 of
Wholesale & Retail. At the same time, Scotland witnessed comparable figures
for Food & Drink and Other Manufacturing, at around 5.9 billion. By

comparison, Scotland recorded a trough about the statistics of Agriculture,
Forestry, Fishing & Mining, Metals, Mechanical & Transport Equipment,
Electrical & Instrument Engineering and Other Services, at under 3 billion.

Regarding Scotland's exports to the other sections in the UK, despite the
predominance of Chemicals & Mineral Products with 5 billion, this field was
just about a half of that of the world. The number of billions received from
Manufacturing of Food and Drink, furthermore, was dwarfed by the previous
( 4.4 ). The figure for Electrical & Instrument Engineering was similar and
became the only area which outnumbered the world. By contrast, there was a
significant gap between Metals, Mechanical & Transport Equipment, Electrical
& Instrument Engineering and the mentioned sectors, at 2.1 billion. In the
interim, the others were seen the similar data, which occupied less than 2 billion
of Scotland.

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CÁCH 2 : Chia theo mức độ chênh lệch ( Body 1 : Chênh
lệch ít - Body 2 : Chênh lệch nhiều )
The supplied diagram compares data on the imports of British and global
remainers from Scotland in the year of 2014.

Taken as a whole, most of the categories of the world were superior to the data
of the UK, aparting from Electrical & Instrument Engineering. The amount of
money earned from Business Services & Finance, Hotels & Restaurant Services
of ROW, in addition, made up the highest over the period shown.

Scotland experienced similar levels in the Metals, Mechanical & Transport
Equipment’s export to the rest of the UK and the world, at around 2.4 billion. In
terms of Manufacturing of Food and Drink, about 5.8 billion was received from
the global exportation, compared to 4.4 billion of Britain. At the same time,
there was a slight difference of 1.7 billion in the statistics of money obtained
from international and British import Electrical & Instrument Engineering as
the only area that the former was subordinate to the latter. Likewise, the
comparable disparity was seen in the figures for Agriculture, Forestry, Fishing
& Mining ( 0.6 and 2.4 billion ), which stood at the bottom in both 2 mentioned
locations in 2014.

In stark contrast to this, ranked the first in ROW with 13.8 billion, the value of
Scotland’s export of the field called Business Services & Finance, Hotels &
Restaurant Services was more than 8 times as high as that of Britain. By
comparison, the volume of the global Wholesale & Retail import was
approximately 8.2 billion. The figure of the UK was considerably lower, at only
1.1 billion. Regarding Other Manufacturing and Services, the gap between the
expenditure for import in the world and the UK was narrowed, with 4,5 and 2,1
billion in turn.

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