Expository essay outline

Narrative Essay
How Losing a Swim Meet Made Me a Better Swimmer
Introduction
Introduce the subject of your narrative essay using a thesis statement and a plan
of development (POD).
Thesis: The first time I participated in a competitive swim meet, I finished in
last place. With more focused training and coaching, I was able to finish 2nd in
the State Championship meet.
Plan of development:  I was very disappointed in my results from the first
meet, so I improved my training and fitness. This helped me swim better and
faster, which helped me to greatly improve my results.
Body Paragraph 1
Set the scene and provide supporting details.
Topic Sentence:  I was embarrassed at finishing last in my first competitive
swim meet, so I began working on ways to improve my performance.
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Detail Sentence 1:  I spent extra time with my coach and the team
captains learning how to improve my technique.

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Detail Sentence 2:  I started running and lifting weights to increase my
overall fitness level.

Body Paragraph 2
Provide additional supporting details, descriptions, and experiences.
Topic Sentence:  Over time, my results began to improve and I was able to
qualify for the state championship meet.
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Detail Sentence 1:  My technique and fitness level made me faster and
able to swim longer distances.

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Detail Sentence 2:  I steadily got better, and I began winning or placing
in the top 3 at most of my meets.

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Detail Sentence 3:  My results improved to the point that I was able to
qualify for the state championship meet.



Body Paragraph 3
Provide additional supporting details, descriptions, and experiences.
Topic Sentence:  With my new confidence, techniques, and fitness level, I was
able to finish 2nd at the state championship meet.
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Detail Sentence 1:  I was able to swim well against a higher level of
competition due to my training and technique.

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Detail Sentence 2:  I was no longer embarrassed about my last-place
finish, and was able to use it as motivation!

Conclusion

Conclude the essay with a recap of the events described or a reflection on the
lesson learned in the story.
Concluding Sentence:  I used my last-place finish in my first competitive swim
meet as motivation to improve my performance.