Vstep writing task 2

ADVANTAGES & DISADVANTAGES

‘Topic’ has become an integral part of the rising debate in the present world, including
Vietnam. While components of the argument are in favor. However, opponents completely
agaisnt the relevance of the ‘Topic’. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of
such a situation and draw a conclusion.

To commence with ‘Topic’ has many good sides. The most prominent one is
that……...Another good point would be that……….Last but not least……..

On the other hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant disadvantages
of the ‘Essay topic_keywords’ is that…….Another problem is that……The final demerit is
that…….

To conclude, there are two sides to everything and this situation is not an exception.
‘Topic’ has become a crucial part of our life. Therefore, efficient use of ‘Topic_keywords’
should be promoted. However, its misuse should be condemned.

-Phát triển thêm ý: In addition, Additionally, Besides, Moreover, However, Furthermore,
What is more
-Giải thích, chỉ ra rõ kết quả, quan điểm cụ thể: As a result, Because, Because of, In fact,
Especially, Obviously, Therefore, To illustrate, More especially, Thus, For example, For
instance, Consequently, As a consequence, To be more specific,…

PROBLEM – SOLUTION
Causes (reasons) / Effects (problems, consequences) and solution essay
 Cause & Solution (từ khóa ‘the cause of.....and suggest some possible solutions,
discuss the reasons for....and suggest some solutions)
Para 1:
In this day and age, ‘Topic’ has become an integral part of the rising debate in the present
world, including VN. (This phenomenon has negative impacts on human life).(Specifically, it

is shown that ‘Topic’ rate among young people is on the rise, which is a worrying issue).
Discussed below are factors leading to ‘Topic’ and solution to this alarming problem.
Para 2:
There are several factors resulting in ‘Topic’. One of the most obvious causes is
that......Another cause is that.......The second reason is that....The last cause is that....
Para 3:

There are some effective methods which could be taken to address this problem. The first way
to mention is that……The last measure is that…….
Para 4:
All things considered, the above-mentioned facts have outlined the reasons as well as the
measures of this issue. The presented suggestions would be very good steps towards solving
them. People should have further consideration on this issue.

 Cause & Effect
Para 1:
In this day and age, many people prefer to.....instead of....(the number of ‘young people/
women,...’ who....has been on the rise).
However, this trend also has obvious effects on their life. (A growing numer of individuals
taday express concern over the effects of ‘Topic’)
This essay will clarify reasons for this worrying trend and examine some of its
consequences.
Para 2:
There are several reasons why people ‘.....’. The first reason is....What is more (Another point
I would like to make is that).....The last cause is that......
Para 3:
There are many serious effects of this issue. One primary effect would be
that.......Furthermore......In addition.....
Para 4:
All things considered, the above-mentioned facts have outlined the reasons and its impacts

are various/ the effects of this trend are severe. Its causes and effects should be taken into
account. People should have further consideration on this issue. (They should take this matter
into account and raise awareness of the risks of…..).

Dạng effects ảnh hưởng tích cực và tiêu cực
Para 3: ‘Topic’ has both positive and negative impacts on people. A good side of this trend
is......Concerning negative sides,........

 Effects & Solutions
Para 1:
In this day and age, ‘Topic’ has become a more popular problem which has negative impacts
on human’s live. The obbjective of this essay is to examine consequence of this issue and
recommened several measures to deal with it.
Para 2:

There are various potential impacts of ‘Topic’. The most obvious effesct is that….In
addition,….Last but not least,….

Para 3:

There are various measures which could be taken to release……The first soulution to
mention is that…..Another alternative is that……The final method to escape from ‘Topic’ is
that…..

Para 4:

All things considered, although negative effect of ‘Topic’ are various, there are effective
measures that……could take to deal with it. Children/People should….in a proper way to take
advantage of its benefits.

 Effect

Para 1:

The advancement of….become more convenient than ever before. While many people support
that…., others argue that this trend has some negative effects. This essay aims to examine
both sides of this issue.

Para 2:

On the one hand, ‘Topic’ is beneficial to….in several ways. In the first place,….In addition,…
The final merit is that…..

Para 3:

On the other hand, ‘Topic’ brings people some drawbacks. The first one is that,…Moreover,
….Last but not least,……

Para 4:

All things considered, although ‘Topic’ has some bad impacts on people, it plays an
important part in human’s life. It is advisible that people use it in a proper way to make use of
its merits.

 Causes (discuss the reasons)

Para 1:

In this day and age, the world has witnessed a massive rise in the number of ‘Topic’. (This
trend is a positive development to the growth of many fields, especially tourism industry). My

essay will examine factors that lead to the increase in….

Para 2:

The first and foremost cause is that…..Besides,…

Para 3:

The second reason for the trend of ‘Topic’ is that….It means that….Moreover,..

Para 4:

The last reason…..

Para 5: (kết bài)
All things considered, it is obvious that there are …. factors that contribute to rising……

OPINION
(Bảo vệ quan điểm A or B) Agree/ Disagree
Thiên về một phía positive development: This development/ trend is positive thanks to the
benefits which have been brought to human life.
Thiên về một phía negative development: This development/ trend is negative due to the
drawbacks which have been brought to human life.
Cân bằng cả hai phía: This development/ trend has introduced both positive and negative
aspects because of the benefits and drawbacks which have been brought to human life.

 1 phía
Para 1:
In this day and age, ‘Topic’ has become an integral part of the rising debate in the present
world, including VN. It is widely debated whether……. Personally, I strongly agree that……

This essay will provide some reasons and relevent examples to support my arguments.

Whether…..or not is a controversial topic. Some people suoppose that…..However, I believe
that ……because of some reasons as follows.
Para 2:
First and foremost, it should be recognized that…..This clearly demonstrates that ‘Topic’ has
positive/ negative impact on…..
To begin with,…….
Para 3:
Another interesting point is that…..
In the second place,…..
Para 4:
Last but not least,……
Para 5:
All things considered, this essay argued that [viết lại quan điểm của bạn]. However,
everything has two sides, and this situation is not exception. Therefore, the efficient use of
‘Topic’ should be promoted, however, its misuse should be condemned.
All things considered, the above mentioned facts have created a dilemma when people
evaluate the impact of this issue, and it is still a controversial issue. As far as I am concerned,

I put more highlight on the idea that......People should have further consideration on this
issue.

 Cân bằng
Para 1:
In this day and age, ‘Topic’ has become an integral part of the rising debate in the present
world, including VN.While many people prefer…….the opponents think that…..From my
point of view, both…are equally important because of reasons as follows. (Discussed below
are several reasons in favor of my perspectives).

Para 2:
On the one hand,….is of great important to people. To begin with,…….Another merit is that,
…..
Para 3:
On the other hand,….plays a crucial role in people’s life. First and foremost,….What is more
(Hơn thế nữa),……Last but not least,…..
Para 4:
All things considered, the above mentioned facts have created a dilemma when people
evaluate the impact of this issue, and it is still a controversial issue. As far as I am concerned,
it could have both positive and negative impacts. People should have further consideration on
this issue.

DISCUSSION
2 phía
Para 1:
In this day and age, ‘Topic’ has/have attracted the interest of many people, especially
children. While I accept that ‘Topic’ have positive impacts on (children, people,....), I also
believe that (kids’ lives,...) might be ruined by ‘Topic’.
In this day and age, ‘Topic’. has become an integral part of the rising debate in the present
world, including VN. While it is claimed that......, some people argue that......My essay will
shed light on both perspectives and give my personal opinion.
Para 2:
On the one hand, ‘topic’ offers (people, children....) great advantages. The most obvious one
is that......In the second place,......Last but not least,........

Para 3:
On the other hand, there are some negative consequences of ‘Topic’. First and
foremost,....Moreover,.....The final negative side is that,.......
Para 4:
All things considered, it is undeniable that ‘Topic’ have both beneficial and negative sides;

however, their cons far outweight their pros. Therefore/ In my opinion, it is advisiable that......

*Mở bài:
-Whether....or not has been a controversial topic
-It is obvious that there is an increasing....
-There is an increasing number of....