unit 6 Write English 9

WARMER :

Friday
Friday
,January 22nd, 2010.
,January 22nd, 2010.

I.Vocabulary:
- smell : (n) mùi - (v) ngửi
sự nghỉ ngơi- refreshment(n):
- (to) prohibit: ngăn cấm
- (to) fine: phạt tiền
- (to) float:
- complaint(n) :
nổi, trôi lềnh bềnh
( n ) (to) complain
lời than phiền  (to) complain

Checking vocabulary : WHAT AND WHERE
fine
complaint
refreshment
float
smell
prohibit


The Director
L& P Transport Company

431 Le Loi Boulevard
HCMC
Dear Sir / Madam,
26 Tran Phu Street


Ha Noi

October 9, 2003
I would suggest that your company should tell your drivers to clear
up all the trash on the ground before leaving.
I am writing to you about the short stop of your trucks around my
house on their way to the north.
I look forward to hearing from you and seeing good response from
your company.
When the trucks of your company have a short break on the streets
around my house , the drivers have left lots of garbage on the ground
after their refreshment.When the trucks leave the place,the ground is
covered with trash and a few minutes later there is smell and flies.
Yours faithfully,
Tran Vu Nhat.

Situation states the reason for writing.
(nói lý do viết thư )
Complication mentions the problem
(đề cập đến vấn đề cần viết )
Resolution makes a suggestion
(đưa ra lời đề nghị )
Action talks about future action
(đề cập đến hành động trong tương lai )

Politeness ends the letter politely
( kết thúc lá thư một cách lịch sự )
II.Format: A complaint letter has five sections ( S C R A P )

I am writing to you about the short stop of your trucks around my
house on their way to the north.
I look forward to hearing from you and seeing good response from
your company.
When the trucks of your company have a short break on the streets
around my house , the drivers have left lots of garbage on the ground
after their refreshment.When the trucks leave the place,the ground is
covered with trash and a few minutes later there is smell and flies.
Yours faithfully,
Tran Vu Nhat.
III. Matching:
R ( Makes a suggestion )
A (Talks about future action)
P ( Ends the letter politely )
S ( States the reason )
C ( Mentions the problem )
I would suggest that your company should tell your drivers to clear
up all the trash on the ground before leaving.
Dear Sir/Madam ,
2
3
4
5
R
S
A

C
P
1

The Director
L& P Transport Company
431 Le Loi Boulevard
HCMC
26 Tran Phu Street

Ha Noi

October 9, 2003
I would suggest that your company should tell your drivers to clear
up all the trash on the ground before leaving.
I am writing to you about the short stop of your trucks around my
house on their way to the north.
When the trucks of your company have a short break on the streets
around my house , the drivers have left lots of garbage on the ground
after their refreshment.When the trucks leave the place,the ground is
covered with trash and a few minutes later there is smell and flies.
I look forward to hearing from you and seeing good response from
your company.
Yours faithfully,
Tran Vu Nhat.
S
C
R
A
P

S
C
R
S
C
A
R
S
C
A
R
S
C
Dear Sir/Madam,

IV. Write:
These days, many people begin to catch
fish in the lake behind your house.
What makes you worried most is they use
electricity to catch fish .
A lot of small fish died and floated on the
water surface.
Other animals such as frogs, toads and
even birds also died from electricity
shock waves.
You think that local authorities should
prohibit and fine heavily anyone catching
fish in this way.
Situation :

Dear Mr. President,
I am writing to you about the problem of fish catching in
the lake behind my house.
Write a complaint letter. Begin with:
I am very worried because people don’t use fishing rod or
net but use electricity to catch fish .After a short time they
leave the lake,a lot of small fish die and float on the water
surface other animals such as frogs,toads,and even birds
have also died from electric shock waves.
I would suggest the local authorities should prohibit and
fine heavily anyone using this way of catching fish.
I look forward to hearing from you and seeing the
protection of environment from the local authority.
Sincerely,
Nguyen Van A
S
C
R
A
P

III.Post - writing:
These days, many people begin to catch fish
in the lake behind your house.
What makes you worried most is they use
electricity to catch fish .
A lot of small fish died and floated on the water
surface.
Other animals such as frogs, toads and even
birds also died from electricity shock waves

You think that local authorities should prohibit
and fine heavily anyone catching fish in this
way.
Situation :

Dear Mr. President,
I am writing to you about the problem of fish catching in
the lake behind my house.
Write a complaint letter. Begin with:
I am very worried because people don’t use fishing rod or
net but use electricity to catch fish .After a short time they
leave the lake,a lot of small fish die and float on the water
surface Other animals such as frogs,toads,and even birds
have also died from electric shock waves.
I would suggest the local authorities should prohibit and
fine heavily anyone using this way of catching fish.
I look forward to hearing from you and seeing the
protection of environment from the local authority.
Sincerely,
Nguyen Van A
S
C
R
A
P

V.Consolidation:
What should you do to keep your
school or your house clean?

1, Learn vocabulary by heart .
2, Write the letter in your notebook.
3, Prepare Language focus (P.53-56)