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people.
Some people who study in college or university want to make more friends and increase their
interpersonal skills. They enjoy their lives in university or college and tend to socialize a lot. They
can meet more people who have the similar interests with themselves. They can go to uni ball
after school and make more friends who they trust.
The people who graduate from college seem more confident in our community. These people are
more respected by society. Many people want to be respected and to be important by family,
friends, their bosses, and others in their lives. They find that most of them can confidently talk and
do their jobs as they are more educated. Therefore, most people want to get the confidence
through the university or college study.
In today's society, people need more knowledge and skills to be adapted. The university and
college study is a good way to achieve this.
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In China, more and more people try their best to attend college or university. What are the
reasons that make people long for it?
First of all, in my opinion, the most important reason is to gain competence to live a better life in
the future. Competition of our days has become more and more drastic, and even a very simple
job or low position will attract hundreds of candidates to apply for it. Only those who have a good
education and general knowledge can gain better work. So, we should attend college or university
for better competence.
Second, attending college or university can change our life. For example, to myself, I am a student
from countryside. I am one of the few people who can attend college or university. Most of those
who have not studied in college or university go to work early in a small factory in a small town or
on a farm in their hometown. Just because I have taken higher education, I can get better chances
to study or work in the capital of our country where a lot of people want to go to. Why? Good
education gives me chances to change my life.
The third reason for attending a college is to increase knowledge. Study is a so interesting thing

that it make our life rich and colorful. It expands our eyesight by informing us with lots of new
things what we cannot gain from our common life or experience. On the other hand, by attending
college or university, you can learn the knowledge or skill necessary for your future work.
People attend college or university for various reasons. Some may attend for new experiences,
and others may think about other things. What I have mentioned is just very few of them.
(Essay ID: 404. This is a 5 point essay)
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Mr.Taoxingzhi, the most famous educator in China, once said: the biggest misfortune in one’s life
is that one does not receive a uniniversiy education. Needless to say, a university degree often
helps a person achieve his goal with more ease. However, do we attend university just in pursuit
of a degree? Does a university only provide us nothing benefieial besides a paper-made diploma?
As far as I am concerned, we enjoy a university education in the following aspects which
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attribulates us to a university education:
Firstly, with the knowledge learned in a university,we will have a deep understanding with our
society. It is ture that genuine knowledge comes from practice, but it can not be denied that
genuine knowledge, tells us how to practise. A thorough study in a college or university, of course,
enables us to realize how the society works and how to cope with certain problems arising from it
in a more efficiently, more skillful way.
Second, an university education usually make it possible that we acquire a decent job. Because of
an accomplishment of a four-year study, it is not difficult for us to find a good job in most cases.
How can we imagine that a graduate majoring in astronomy has to be a vendor in the street!
Undoubtfully, he/she should sit in his/her labortory, making a reseach on aircraft on a
computor.Obviously, a university education assures him/her a decent job.
Last, but not the least, we can help others much better if puttiing what we learn in a university
into use. A university education corrects our values, enhance our skills, and broad our horizons.
With those, we are moe capable of giving a hand to those who are in need of help than before.
“Knowledge is power”.When achieving a degree in a university, we can get a better

understanding of the society, find a decent job in an easy way, and help others better. All of those
are due to the knowledge learned in a university.
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People attend a college or a university for the following reasons, to acquire knowledge which is
necessary for a career, to contribute to the society, and to experience life.
Firstly college education is a necessary step for a person who wants to start a career in science
and technology areas. If a student wants to become a scientist, it is important for him to go to a
science school; if he wants to be an engineer, an engineering school is the best place for him.
There is no other place than a college where a student can get sophisticated education in order to
be qualified to become a professional in a specific area.
Secondly, a college education can benefit both the society and the student. By attending college
one can get himself prepared for and contribute to the society, which seems to demand advanced
knowledge more and more. One the other hand, as knowledge plays a very important role in
today’s economy, it has also become the capital and asset of the person who owns it: a college
education can bring wealth not only to the society, but also benefit the individual who processes
it.
In addition, college education is a wonderful experience in one’s life. Only in a college one can be
taught by the finest scholars and meet with the most intelligent people in the nation. Education
can also bring happiness to the student. When a student has conquered a difficult mathematical
problem, he savors the joy which learning has brought to him, and feels that he is the happiest
man in the world.
Of course, learning in a campus does not mean as much for everybody, but it does mean a lot to
me. I was brought up in a knowledge-respecting family. My farther is an engineer and my mother
is a teacher in a primary school. They are both university graduates. My father, being the most
influential person in my life and the son of a poor Chinese farmer, did change the destiny of his
own by learning hard to earn a university degree. Therefore he firmly believes that “knowledge
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can change one’s destiny and university is the best place to achieve one’s goal”. Of course this
influenced me. I strongly believe that attending university is the best choice for me. I do not have
a bit of hesitation to attend a university.
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Why do people need to attend colleges or universities? Different people have different answers to
this question. I believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have
new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.
Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the
primary reason to go to college. They know that the job market is competitive. At college, they
can learn new skill for careers with a lot of opportunities. This means careers, such as information
technology, that are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.
Also, students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences. This often means having
the opportunity to meet people different from those in their hometowns. For most students, going
to college is the first time they've been away from home by themselves. In addition, this is the first
time they've bad to make decisions on their own. Making these decisions increases their
knowledge of themselves.
Besides looking for self-knowledge, people also attend a university or college to expand their
knowledge in subjects they find interesting. For many, this will he their last chance for a long time
to learn about something that doesn't relate to their career.
I would recommend that people not be so focused on a career. They should go to college to have
new experiences and learn about themselves and the world they live in.
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Now days, more and more people are trying to attend college or university. Different people do so
for different reasons. Some typical reasons are new experiences, career preparation and increased
knowledge. In my opinion, it is the fast developement, almost explosion, of our world that make
people to consider attending college or university.

People would usually get bored when they focus on one field for a long time. For this reason, they
go to college to pursue experiences in new areas. We often hear that an electrical engineer went
to a university to study art or music. With the new experiences, they expand their ken. Maybe
some good ideas would jump out during their daily work.
As for the young, they attend college for career preparation. Not only could they get knowledge
needed for their future work, they could learn how to think and how to solve questions. The
projects students attended are very like their future work.
Some people, who have been graduated from universities for years, are also planning to go back to
school. Most of them reattend universities to increase their knowledge. Techlogy is developing so
fast that people could not keep up with them unless they keep increasing their knowledge.
All in all, people, who attend college or university, are preparing for their better futures.
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(Essay ID: 238. This is a 5 point essay)
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College is a place that the students can learn more and new knowledge and experience in it. Of
course, different people have different reason to study in college. For example, some people want
to be to go on a further study after they graduate from the college; some people hope to find a
good job after their studying in the college and also some people wish to exchange their present
situation through studying in the college. In my opinion, no matter what reason people study in the
college for, studying in the college is just a preparation for their future life.
First of all, students can learn new knowledge and experiences from the studying in the college.
There are many teachers, professors with abundant teaching experience who teach students lots of
new knowledge and help them to solve the problems in their study. With their help, student can
learn a lot of useful basic and professional knowledge which is very helpful for their future work.
and study. After they finish their study in the college, students go to work in the society and
contribute to the different fields.
Secondly, students can learn how to arrange their own time reasonably. Before their studying in
college, their life often arranged by their parents and their study often arranged by their teachers.

It is very different for them to live and study in college, because students studying in college have
to arrange their life and study by themselves. They have right to arrange their part time, such as
when to get up, when is the sport-time, when to finish the assignment etc. This is very important
experience for students' work and life in the future.
Secondly, studying in the college make students having opportunity to live with other student and
learn how to cooperate with other people. Usually, people often have uncomfortable feeling to
live with a stranger, because they do not know each other and perhaps their habit and personality
are different. But for the long run, it is good for them. They have to cooperate with each other and
solve a lot of problems they will face together. Gradually, they can learn how to care and
understand other people. It is a preparation for students to go to cooperate with other people in
the society.
All in all, students not only can learn lots of new knowledge from the books but also can learn
much more necessary experience such as how to arrange time and how to cooperate with other
people. It is ver important for their future work and life.
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Today more and more people attend college or university. But why? As a student of a key
university, I want to give my opinion.
Of course, we attend university to increase knowledge. University provides some basic knowledge
for our research or our career in the following years. It provides basic information about the major
we chose, such as what it research in. If you find that you are not interested in that major, u can
change it, till u find one u are interested in. It also provides knowledge for all majors, such as
advanced mathematic, English, physics, basic chemistry. Teacher there can help you to decide
what you do in the future, to enter a graduate school or to take a job. We must do a lot of
experiment during the school years, that makes us quite capable. We visit a factory in the second
year to get a general idea about the work our major do. And we have a internship in the third year
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to do the real work.

Then, you can get new experience from university. You can join the student union or join a club.
You can learn a lot from it. First, you can learn how to communicate with the different people.
And u can learn how to organize a meeting or a party.
And also you can prepare for your career. There are lots of programs to let the students be trained
for a job. University runs the program by cooperating with some very large company, some
manager from the company will give us some courses which teach us how to run a company, how
to lead your group to finish the work, how to cope with some problem, and how to be more
confident. And they also tell us which kind of employee they want in the company. These things
are quite useful for us, especially for those who want to get a job after graduation.
Now you know that university is quite useful, but the most important thing it teaches us is not the
knowledge nor the experience, it is how to think and how to learn.
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Nowadays, more and more young people attend the universities for different reasons. According
to the survey, the main goal of what most of them do so is for career preparation.
There are many reasons to demonstrate it. The most primary reason is that is that university are
the most suitable spot to absorb knowledge, which mostly determines your career development.
With the development of the society, "knowledge is power" has been a rule: the more knowledge
one possesses, the more easily he succeeds in his career. For instance, it is often reported that
MBA graduates in famous universities, such as Harvard, will acquire high start payment when the
companies employ them for the first time. After several works, abundant working experience and
solid knowledge base will make them further develop in the manager class.
Another reason is that universities will provide one with not only knowledge but also many other
abilities, including communication ability, corporation ability, and independency ability etc, which
are beneficial to future career. At the same time, he can make friends with his schoolmates and
deals with all kinds of people, who often become his colleagues or business partner in the future.
Furthermore, in this way, his view will be widened and abilities will be improved. When he goes
off the campus, he always has stronger competition ability than those who do not go to the
universities.

Last but not the least one is that in contrast, history illustrates that people refused by the
universities have few opportunities to succeed in their career development. Because of their low
educational level, most companies would rather employ them as physical workers than mental
workers. in this way, the development of technology and science will fall them into disuse. Such
as in many manufacturing factories now, there are automatic machines as substitute for workers.
In a word, of many reasons for people to go to universities, career preparation has been the most
primary. When education background becomes more important in career development, it will
attract more people to do so for a long period.
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There are many people want to go to university or college every year and they decide to do so for
many different reasons. I believe there are three common reasons are to prepare for career,
increase their knowledge and get new experience.
Prepare for career is very important for young people nowadays. In a competitive society, if they
have not a good educational background, they will not get a good opportunity in their career or
even cannot find a job, so college and university can provide them new skills to meet the
requirements of career.
Also, students attend to university or college can increase their knowledge in subjects they
interested, for many people, this is maybe the primary reason to go to college. There are many
excellent professors and experts can give us a plenty of knowledge which including many areas.
For many people this maybe their last chance for a long time to get knowledge that don't relate to
their career.
Besides looking for knowledge, some people want to go to college or university because they
decide to live a new life. University can support young people an environment where they can
intercommunicate about many topics such as literature, goal of life, art and emotions which are
hard to talked about after their university lives, so it is a special experience for young people to
live and study in college or university.

All in a word, I prefer increase knowledge and get a special experience to prepare for career in
university because getting good opportunities in career is partly depend on your knowledge and
experiences on diverse areas.
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Who teaches you to walk? Who teaches you to speak? It is your parents who teach you to do
these basic things in your life. So don't you think that parents are the best teachers!
Firstly, parents know us very much. Parents give us life, and I think that we will spend large
amount of time with them. So they know our merit and demerit in details. Meanwhile, they will
help us to get rid of our demerit.
Furthermore, parents possessed many experiences. Since they are older than us, they have
experienced many things. Sometimes, they are just like our models. And as the saying goes:
"Example is better than precept." So we will unconsciously copy some of our parents' habits and
styles of behavior, i.e. we can learn many things from them.
Finally, parents will teach us everything. Since schoolteachers can just teach us knowledge from
the books, our parents can teach us everything. For example, I learn knitting, cooking and make-
up from my mother, while learn fixing leaky faucet from my father. They are the persons who
love me most, so they will teach me everything without reservations.
Just as the saying goes: "There is no place like home." And I think there is no teacher like our
parents. They are the best teachers in our life.
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