Mẫu đoạn văn hỗ trợ thi đại học môn tiếng anh THPT Quốc Gia có viết luận 2016
Chào các bạn, năm 2015 theo mẫu đề minh họa của BGD là các em 12 phải thi viết và phần
viết đoạn paragraph chiếm 1,5 điểm. Các bạn hãy phân tích kĩ hơn về đề minh họa của BDG
và sẽ thấy chỉ là viết 1 đoạn văn (paragraph) chứ không phải viết cả bài văn (essay). Là viết
paragraph chứ không phải viết essay theo như 1 số trường THPT và 1 số tài liệu gần đây đã
hướng dẫn. Độ dài 1 paragraph khoảng 150 từ. Và lưu ý khi viết paragraph các chúng ta
không được xuống dòng, không được tách làm 3 phần như viết essay, vì paragraph là “đoạn
văn” mà. Vẫn có 1 câu dẫn đề, 3-4 câu thân bài, 1 câu kết. Bố cục phải mạch lạc, sử dụng
đúng từ nối. Dưới đây là 1 số từ nối và 1 số đoạn văn mẫu, là đoạn văn (paragraph) chứ
không phải bài văn (essay) các bạn nhé.
1) cho ví dụ
-For example,
-For instance,
such as
2) nêu ý kiến
-In my opinion,
(đã in my opinion thì ko dùng I think nữa)
- Personally,
-From my point of view,
- From my perspective,
It seems to me that
3) đưa ý kiến đối lập
-However,
=Nevertheless = Nonetheless
-Although
4) Thêm vào ý
-Moreover,
-Furthermore,
- Additionally
= In additional,
- Besides,
-Also,
-What's more,
5)đưa ra kết wa
- As a result,
- Therefore,
- Thus,
- so
- Consequently,
6) Liệt kê thứ tự
-First / Firstly,
-Second / Secondly,
- Third / Thirdly,
- Final / Finally,
7) In other words : nói cách khác
Specifically, Nói 1 cách cụ thể
8) kết luận:
- In short,
- In summary,
- In conclusion,
-To conclude,
- To summarize,
WRITING
1 In about 140 words, write about possible measures that should
be taken to protect our natural environment.
Nowadays, some species are in danger of extinction and I think we should join
hands to protect them. Firstly, I think we shouldn't use herbicides and pesticides
because they are in fact hazardous pollutants that have bad effects on wildlife.
Some animals can be harmed if they eat these pollutants. Secondly, I suppose the
government should introduce laws to prohibit the killing of endangered animals
and the destruction of the environment where the endangered species live. Thirdly,
we should tell our friends, relatives or families not to purchase products made from
body parts of endangered species. We should avoid supporting the market in illegal
wildlife including: tortoise shell, ivory, coral, ect. Finally, we should protect
wildlife habitat because the greatest threat that faces many species is the
widespread destruction of habitat. All in all, endangered species should be
protected so that the Earth will be a happy planet for us to live on.
2 In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the person who
has great influence on your life.
The person who has great influence on my life is my mother. She is 42 years
old. She is not beautiful but she is a wonderful woman after all. My mother
has an oval face with big black eyes and full lips. She has long black hair, a
slim build and a fair complexion but the thing I admire most is her character.
She is always kind to all of us. She never gets angry with anyone. She is a
simple person so she does not like wearing expensive clothes or jewels.
Also, she is a busy woman. She works from the early morning till the
evening in the market to sell clothes. Furthermore, she has to get up early
everyday to prepare breakfast for the family. I love my mother very much. I
will try to study hard to please her. I wish she would live with me forever.
3 In about 140 words, write about the changes that information
technology brings to your life.
Over the last two decades, information technology has been responsible for
creating amazing resources which put all the information we need right at our
fingertips and has dramatically changed our day-to-day lives. The first change
is that information technology has killed the greeting cards because we are now
using an e-card or email to greet others. The next change I want to mention is
that teenagers now tend to use the internet to prepare an online dating with
strangers they have never met yet. The way of sharing information is also
changed. Social network like internet or Smartphone now allow us to share
information anytime and anywhere. Then information technology also change
the way we relax. These days, people often spend their free time watching TV,
connecting Facebook or playing video games . More importantly, the way we
communicate with others is also changed a lot. Smartphone and Internet have
replaced the traditional chats with others. All in all, information technology has
been changing our lives in many ways and I think we should use it with caution.
4 In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the most
memorable experience in your life.
The most memorable experience in my life happened three years ago but now I
could recall this event very clearly. On the final day of my 9-grade years at
secondary school, my father gave me VND 200 for the good grades I had scored in
my final exam. To enjoy it, I invited some of my closest friends to a restaurant for
a meal. At the restaurant, I asked my friends to order as much as they liked. The
food was delicious and we began to eat. We ate, talked and laughed at the jokes we
made in school. After we had finished our food, the waiter brought us the bill. I
opened my purse to take out the money. To my surprise, I found my money
missing. Only then I realized that I had left the money at home. I wanted to borrow
the money from my friends, but they had brought only enough money for bus fare.
I told the waiter and he lent me his phone to call my sister and told her to bring the
money to the restaurant. Ever since that day I have stopped coming near that
restaurant because I am afraid that some of the waiters might recognize my face.
5 In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the advantages
and disadvantages of computer
Computer plays an important part in our life. However, while bringing certain
advantages, this high-tech device has its own limitations. First of all, computer is a
useful tool and an intelligent device in every aspect of life. What’s more, new
constructive materials, new robots, and new fuels are all made with the help of
information technology. That is to say computer has made our life become modern,
more convenient and civilized. However, a computer also has its own
disadvantages because the users take its advantage for negative purposes. Some
people use computers to do nothing but playing games, chitchat, spam, create dirty
information on the Net. In addition, sitting in front of the screen for long hours can
lead to obesity, backache, and short-sightedness. Besides, people paying too much
attention to online activities may become passive in real life because of their lacks
of communication. In short, everything has its two sides, so does computer.
Therefore, it is necessary that we use it for right purposes.
6 Why do people learn English? Write a paragraph about 150
words
English is an international language which plays an important part in many field of
our society and all of us have to learn English for some reasons. The first reason is
that English is one of the major subjects which are taught at schools and
universities. If you want to get high grades and pass the exams, there is no way but
learning English. The second and the main reason is to get a high – paying job. We
all know that English is required in many jobs concerning languages. As it is an
international language native and second language so it is easy for you to
communicate with foreigners if you know English. In brief, people learn English
because it is a useful tool in many important fields and one of the main keys to
succeed in modern society.
7 In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the benefits of
exercise.
Health is considered to be the most valuable thing we have and the most
effective way to better one’s health is doing regular exercise. One advantage of
doing exercise is to reduce stress. People who exercise are likely to feel more
relaxed and healthier. Doing regular exercise helps the body produce happy
chemicals that make the exercisers reduce the worries. Another benefit
exercising brings us is that we will feel more energetic to overcome our daily
difficulties. Doing exercise also helps us reduce the possibilities of being ill,
protects us from some fatal diseases as heart disease, cancers and diabetes.
Controlling our weight is another value. Fats are burnt during our practicing
exercise, which helps us to keep fit. To sum up, doing exercise enables people
to have good body-buildings, keep fit and brings exercisers many benefits to
have a longer, healthier and happier life.
8 In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the sport that
you often play in your free time after school and give some
reasons why you like it.
My favorite sport is football and I often play it in my free time after school or
on every Sunday afternoon. Because it is my favorite, I can tell something
special about football. In America, people called it soccer but I like to call it
football. I liked playing football when I was ten years old and it has become my
favorite since then. I often play footballs with my brother after school or on
every Sunday afternoon. The first reason why I like playing football is that it is
an easy sport to play just with a right ball. Not only men but also women can
play it. And the second reason is to be healthy and happier. Practicing sports
especially football can help relax and be energetic so we will feel more healthy
and cheerful. The last reason is that football is an attractive sport included in the
World Cup taking place every four years. I dream of being a famous footballer
playing in the international match someday. To sum up, football is an easy and
useful sport for me and all of you to take up so I like it very much.
9 In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the kind of job
you would like to do after you finish your education
I really love teaching children and I would like to become a teacher in the future.
The first reason is that both my father and my mother are teachers. They are my
good examples of being a teacher. Most of my siblings become teachers too. The
second reason is that I love children and I would like to teach them how to read,
how to write. I would like to input my knowledge into students’ mind. The third
reason is that teaching is a noble career which is highly respected in our society. A
teacher is the one who helps to produce the future masters of the country. He is
really regarded as a “mind engineer”. In order to become a good teacher, I must
have good knowledge, basic qualifications of a typical teacher such as patience,
honesty, kindness and a deep love for children. I will try my best to pass the
National Examination to let my dream come true.
10. topic: Having a successful career does not necessarily mean
making a lot of money
"Many people think that a successful career is a job making a lot of money but I
strongly disagree with this idea. First of all, In know some people who are very
successful in their careers don't have a lot of money but they know what they are
good at and get to show their talents in what they do. Besides, people having
successful careers will show their passion when working. It means that they have
motivation to work every day. What's more, a successful career also has its own
true value which is very important to everyone. For instance, a volunteer to finance
a charity campaign is considered to have a successful career although he doesn't
get a high salary. To conclude, a successful career is not necessarily defined as a
high-paying job but it depends on the way we think about it.
11) Write about the following topic:
Some universities require students to take the entrance examination with the
English subject. Other universities do not. Which is better? Use specific reasons
and examples to support your answer.
In my opinion, it is better if universities in VN require students to take the entrance
examination with the English subject because E is an international language which
is very useful in many fields. First of all, university students are the ones who have
many good opportunities to get good jobs which often enquire E knowledge. E is
the main language used in business, international contracts, and so on. Therefore,
knowing E is the key to success of many students in the future. What's more, there
are over 700 million people speak E as their native or second language so students
have to know E to communicate with foreigners to overcome all communication
barrier and get success. Additionally, knowing E gives students chances to get
access to knowledge like the Internet because the incredible amount of information
on the Internet is in E. And searching Internet is a major skill for students to enrich
their knowledge. To summarize, it is necessary for universities to require E as a
major subject in the entrance examination due to the reasons i have mentioned
12) Write a paragraph to discuss about the idea “Should Facebook
be banned?”
No matter how popular Facebook is with its users worldwide, I strongly believe it
should be banned. The first reason to support this ban is Facebook has many
negative impacts on the study of a lot of students. Many pupils use Facebook in
class. It will distract their attention from more important things that teachers give
them. This is the main reason why students nowadays usually get bad grades in
tests. The second reason is that Facebook is very addictive. Some people check
Facebook all the time without working, exercising, playing sports, ect. They even
do not talk to their friends although they are very close. Consequently, they lose
both health and many relations. Finally, using Facebook regularly will make you
inactive. When you go with a group of friends, they will feel extremely exhausted
as you always look at your phone to check Facebook. You will be lazy of joining
in activities, and the result is you will become introverted. Without a doubt,
Facebook should be banned, for it has more useless thing than useful thing.
13)
Write a paragraph to express you wish to work for an international
organization, giving the reasons why you choose the organization.
Since I was a little girl, I have harboured the dream to work for the World Health
Organization (WHO) for a number of reasons as following. First, working for the
World Health Organization (WHO) gives me opportunities to live abroad, to use
English at work, and to have high salary. I am an active and dynamic person so
I think it will be an interesting life to have chance to travel far and wide to meet
different people of different personalities and nationalities. Second, I will be able
to further my biology knowledge by doing numerous medical researchers. I can
also understand more about life mechanism, the reactions of the bodies to the
changes of the surroundings. Working for the World Health Organization (WHO)
will offer me occasions to meet, to have talks with well-known people worldwide.
To conclude, working as an official of the World Health Organization (WHO)
helps me to be more aware of the value of life so I will try my best to have my
dream come true some day in the future.
14) In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the advantages of
using public transportation
As we see, The public transportation brings us a number of benefits in term of
individual as well as society. First of all, That many people travel by public
vehicles helps reduce the environment pollution. That's because the amount of fuel
( which turns into exhaust after that) used to carry the number of people in a bus is
less than that of many individual vehicles . Moreover, Traffic jam will no longer be
our long- lasting obsession if most everybody chooses public vehicles as daily
means of transportation. Congestion only turns up when so many people's own
cars, motorbikes spread out every corner of streets. Last but not least, We can save
money by using buses to travel or electric trains to commute .The tickets of public
transportation are often cheap because it serves the big number of customers. As
these above advantages of public transportation, I strongly suggest that we should
use public transportation as main means of transportation.
15) Do you agree with the idea that marriage should be based on
love or not and why? (write a paragraph about 140 words).
Nowadays, almost all of people experience love and then reach marriage.
However, I partly agree with the idea that marriage should be based on love
because only love is not enough. Here the following reasons are. First, there is no
denial that love makes people happy in life and helps them overcome severe
difficulties and build a warm family. It is love that joins a man and a woman
together. When these above supposed things become true, I call it true love, in
other words, forgiveness and sacrifice contribute to true love. Moreover, future
home’s finance also affects the family happiness. For example, your child can’t
study at school without money, you even have no wonderful moment when both of
wife and husband "s inconsistency related to money turns up and so on. In
conclusion, marriage should be built on love and serious attitude of two sides who
accept specific characters each other and fulfill the gap’s spouses.
16) In about 140 words, write a paragraph about your hobby
Of all the interesting free time activities as well as entertainments; I like reading
book most because it brings to me many good aspects. First and foremost, reading
book not only helps widen my knowledge but also makes me love my life more.
As you know reference books provide us with a lot of information of every field of
our life. Besides, novels, stories which contain many romantic and touching plots
controlling my feeling a great deal. I often feel relaxed and love my life after read a
romantic story book. Moreover, enjoying books regularly gives me a good habit as
I am more and more patient. Especially, my ability to express words fluently is
better and better. Therefore, I will be confident of communicating with others.
In short, reading books is my main hobby and I will make best use of its
advantages to have a happy lifestyle.
17) In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the kind of book
you like best
I am usually in habit of reading books. Addition to books that offer me much
useful information, I also like comic book. I am in fond of it for some following
reasons. To begin with, Comic books bring me a great deal of relaxation. One of
them is Doremon story, which tells many funny short stories about 2 main
characters, Doremon and Nobita, Who are close friends. The author of that comic
creates so many amusing situations among characters that I can’t help laughing.
It’s actually a hard-to-put-down book. It attracts not only children but also adults
as me. Another good point of it I want to mention about is creative imagination. I
mean children need to have imaginative mindset, which helps them be more active
in life. By and large, comic book is worth reading after hard work. It is nice for
everyone.
18)
Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or
university. What are some of the important qualities of a good
roommate? Write a paragraph about 140 to express your idea.
While living away from home in an apartment for a flat to study at a university,
you have to learn how to be a good roommate to live with other students. Firstly,
you should know how to respect people and your roommates, respect their
religions and cultures. Do not laugh at ethnic people or racism. Besides, you have
to respect your roommates' privacy because everyone has rights to have their
secrets. So, you mustn’t read your mates’ messages or letters if you aren’t
permitted. In addition, you should take your duty and responsibility. In general,
you should help to cleaning, put litter bags to dust heap, put things back after you
used. Furthermore, you should try to share your ideas, experience of study and life,
your happiness etc. And you listen to your mates experience as well. All in all, as
long as you enjoy your dormitory life, get well with your friends, and then you
should be a good roommate. Whatever what you experiences, those of them will be
a beautiful memorial of your rest of life.
19) Write a paragraph to introduce a beauty spot in Viet Nam.
Coming to Vietnam, foreign visitors can’t forget the ancient town of Hoi An,
30 km south of Da Nang, lying on the banks of the Thu Bon River. Occupied by
early western traders, Hoi An was one of the major trading centers of Southeast
Asia in the 16th century. Hoi An has a distinct Chinese atmosphere with low, tile-
roofed houses and narrow streets; the original structure of some of these streets still
remains almost intact. All the houses were made of rare wood, decorated with
lacquered boards and panels engraved with Chinese characters. Pillars were also
carved with ornamental designs. There is no shortage of bacon in town, but cao lầu
is the dish that one simply cannot miss. Prices and service are rightfully on par
with the latest venues in major cities like Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh. People are very
friendly in Hoi An. Over the last few years, Hoi An has become a very popular
tourist destination in Vietnam.
20) Students should take a part- time job. Do you agree or
disagree with the statement? Write a paragraph to justify your
answer
Part time job is the best way to absorb knowledge, learn experience for one’s
career and earn his living. Therefore, I strongly agree with the idea that students
should take a part-time job. First of all, students taking a part-time job can get
more experience for their future jobs. For example, pedagogic students take part
time jobs as tutors can have chances to practice to be teachers in the future. In
addition, when doing a part-time job, students can practice the lessons they got
from classes. For instance, taking a job requiring a good demand of English can
improve your English because you can practice English with foreigners. Finally,
when doing part-time jobs, students can earn money on their own so they can grow
up. Those who do not have to work hard hardly know its value. To sum up, I think
doing a part-time job does students good for the reasons I have mentioned. They
can get more experience for future job, practice the lessons they got from classes
and grow up.
21) Write a paragraph about which is your ideal world you'd like to
live in 2050 ( about 140 words)
.
According to the incredible development of our society, I predict that in 2050, We
will witness the positive changes of economic, peace, education and technology.
First of all, I hope good finance status of all countries around the world will be
constantly stable and crises will no longer exist. Besides, terrorism, war will
disappear forever, which is a big happiness of all people all over the world.
Moreover, When economic is in the heyday, education should be open and free to
everyone in order that both the rich and the poor can be provided with professional
knowledge to lead a promising life. I also image robots can replace workers with
hardship in dangerous construction sites to reduce the increasing number of labor
accidents nowadays. All in all, there is no doubt that no one can deny the
wonderful world like that, all of us wish for that real dream !
22) In about 150 words, write a paragraph to discuss about the
difficulties that women encounter in modern society.
Women in modern society are still limited in some roles and encounter many
problems that we should join hands to solve. First of all, many people in the past
believed that women's natural roles were as mothers and wives and this thought
still remains these days. These people considered women to be better suited for
childbearing and homemaking rather than for involvement in the public life of
business or politics. Besides, women nowadays still have to do housework, take
care of their children, fulfill their social tasks and also get their career
achievements. It’s very unequal and quite hard for them to complete these tasks at
the sometime. Furthermore, women, especially in third world nations, have to
suffer from domestic violence, gender discrimination in work places. Women are
an integral part of our world, as it is said that “men build the house and women
make it home”. Therefore, let get started to protect them
23) Do you agree with the idea that married women shouldn’t go to
work?
Should women be housewives or career women? In my opinion, married working
women should be encouraged to leave their jobs to be full-time housewives. The
first benefit of being full-time mothers is that their children will be well taken care
of. Working mothers will find it hard to both work outside and look after their
children and families. Having chances to raise their children to masters is the
second main reason why married women shouldn’t go to work. When women
aren’t under a lot of working pressure, they will spend time staying with her
children to teach them the bad and the good. Their children will feel comfortable
and not lonely. The third reason of mine is that the risk of both parents dying and
leaving children orphaned is reduced. Today there are many accidents outside so I
think one of parents should stay at home to be safe if bad things happen. In
general, I strongly believe that men should go out to bring money and caring the
whole family is women’s responsibility.
24) Describe your ideal house.
I often dream of a modern and comfortable house by the sea. There will be a
garden in front of the house with a lot of beautiful flowers. To the right of the
garden, I will have a garage built to park my car. To the left of the garden, there
will be a fresh well for my family to get water. There will be twelve rooms in my
house: five bedrooms, two living rooms, one study, two bathrooms, one dining
room and one kitchen. The front windows will look to the sea and the back
windows will look to the mountains. In the living room, there will be a fireplace to
keep warm in the winter. In my study, there will be a computer for me to surf the
Internet. In my bedroom, there will be a cable TV and a hi-fi stereo. I will also
have a robot to do the cleaning and the cooking. This is my ideal house and I hope
I will have it in the future.
CẤU TRÚC VIẾT LẠI CÂU
-Mr.Idea-
1. S + be + adj + N = S + V + adv
2. S + V + adv = S + V + with + N
3. S + remember + to do Sth = S + don’t forget + to do Sth
4. S + be + adj = What + a + adj + N!
5. S + V + adv = How + adj + S + be
6. S + V + adv = How + adv + S + V!
7. S + be + ing-adj = S + be +ed-adj
8. S + V = S + be + ed-adj
9. S + V + Khoảng thời gian = It + take + (sb) + Khoảng thời gian + to + V
10. S + be + too + adj + to + V = S + be + so + adj + that + S + can’t + V
11. S + V + too + adv + to + V = S + V + so + adv + that + S + can’t + V
12. S + be + so + adj + that + S + V = S + be + not + adj + enough + to + V
13. S + be + too + adj + to + V = S + be + not + adj + enough + to + V
14. S + V + so + adv + that + S + V = S + do/does/did + not + V + adv + enough +
to + V
15. Because + clause = Because of + noun/gerund
16. Although + clause = In spite of + Nound/gerund
17. Although + clause = Despite + Nound/gerund
18. S + V + N = S + be + adj
19. S + be + adj = S + V + O
20. S + be accustomed to + Ving = S + be used to +Ving /N
21. S + often + V = S + be used to +Ving /N
22. This is the first time + S + have + PII = S+be + not used to + Ving/N
23. S + would prefer = S + would rather S + Past subjunctive (lối cầu khẩn)
24. S + like better than = S + would than
25. S + prefer = S + would rather + V
26. S + V + O = S + find + it (unreal objective) + adj + to + V
27. It’s one’s duty to do sth = S + be + supposed to do sth
28. S + be + PII + to + V = S + be + supposed to do sth
29. Imperative verb (mệnh lệnh) = S + should (not) + be + PII
30. Imperative verb (mệnh lệnh) = S + should (not) + do sth