IELTS WRITING 19 03 2016

Bài mẫu Band 8.0 cho đề thi ngày 19/3/2016
Topic
People in community now could buy cheaper consumer goods. Do the advantages
outweigh the disadvantages?
Bài mẫu band 8.0 của thầy TOÀN ZIM.
(1) At the contemporary market, buyers have a wider range of choices for more affordable
commodities. (2) Although some benefits can be seen from the phenomenon, the drawbacks
are more significant.
(3) The provision of cheaper goods presents several advantages. (4) Regarding individual
economical merits, customers now can enjoy inexpensive purchases of diverse types of
goods, which is particularly favorable for the households with limited incomes. (5) On the
societal level, the affordability of consumer products promotes people’s purchasing power,
which contributes to the development of the economy. (6) It is common knowledge that
the market’s demand for products increases when commodities’ exorbitant prices are
reduced. (7) Therefore, people will be attracted to buying these products on a large scale,
fostering the general prosperity of a country’s economy.
(8) However, those advantages above still cannot overshadow the disadvantages. (9) As the
goods’ prices are inexpensive and the quantity is huge to satisfy the market’s need , yet
businesses still have to balance their capital and generate more profit , the quality of
commodities might be taken for granted. (10) In the long term, without quality products ,
customers will gradually lose their trust in those products’ manufacturers, which
directly jeopardizes the economy . (11) Another repercussion worth mentioning is that the
environment may suffer. (12) In order to meet the enormous demand from buyers,
companies have to expand their factories and accelerate their production process , which
causes much harm to the surrounding due to their toxic waste and exhaust .
(13) In conclusion, the benefits of cheapening modern goods should not be overrated as the
disadvantages are greater.
(250 words)
Essay analysis
Ideas:
Advantages:

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Customers now can enjoy inexpensive purchases of diverse types of goods, which is particularly favorable for the
households with limited incomes

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The affordability of consumer products promotes people’s purchasing power, which contributes to the
development of the economy.

Disadvantages:
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The quality of commodities might be taken for granted.
The environment may suffer.

Vocabulary:
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The contemporary market: thị trường đương đại

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Affordable commodities: mặt hàng giá rẻ

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Purchasing power: sức mua

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The market’s demand: nhu cầu của thị trường

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Commodities’ exorbitant price: giá cả đắt đỏ của hàng hóa

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Quality products: hàng chất lượng

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Toxic waste and exhaust: chất khí thải độc hại

Sentence construction:
1. Câu đơn
2. Câu phức
3. Câu đơn
4. Câu đơn mở rộng thành phần
5. Câu đơn mở rộng thành phần
6. Câu phức
7. Câu đơn mở rộng thành phần
8. Câu đơn

9. Câu phức-ghép
10.Câu đơn mở rộng thành phần
11.Câu đơn
12.Câu đơn mở rộng thành phần
13.Câu phức

ZIM ACADEMY
Room 2501, Ocean Group Building, 19 Nguyen Trai, Thanh Xuan Dist, Hanoi