IELTS WRITING 23 1 2016

IELTS WRITING 23/1/2016
Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will
remain the most important source of news for the majority of people.
Do you agree or disagree.
Bài mẫu band 8.5++
Some people believe that despite the spreading popularity of the online media, traditional
newspaper will still hold the most vital position among news readers. In my opinion, this idea is
rather absurd as the Internet has become increasingly dominant due to the benefits it offers.
The first thing that attracts people to reading news on the online sources is their easy access .
With the presence of the Internet around almost every corner of the world, people with a
portable device such as a mobile phone can access huge storage of news. In fact, latest events,
for example IS Terrorist attacks, would be updated immediately on CNN or New York Times. By
contrast, with prolonging procedures including editting and printing, traditional newspaper
might not be able to compete with the Internet in terms of the updating speed.
Another benefit with which the Internet can, from my point of view, take over the position of
printed newspaper is the new experience it brings to readers. One limitation of newspaper is
that it cannot convey visual messages to the people who read news on a regular basis.
Meanwhile, non-stop progress of the technology industry has unfolded the possibility to upload
videos and voice records on various online websites. For instance, soccer fans these days can
rewatch their favorite matches anytime they want with only a laptop connected to the Internet,
which a mere paper cannot do.
In conclusion, I disagree that printed newspaper would continue to be the most crucial source
of information because more and more people will be drawn to use the Internet.
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