IELTS Writing Task 1 Writing Letter

IELTS Writing Task 1 (General Training) - Writing Letter (Band 7)
You have successful passed a job interview. You are expected to start on
November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: write a letter to
your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and
suggesting a solution.

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Hoang Thi Thanh, I have recently passed the job interview for Personal
Financial Consultant position and I was expected to start at work from next week,
November 15 as our agreement. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am not
able to present myself on that date due to an urgent issue and request for one week
delaying.
During the interview I estimated that I will able to begin after 10 days, however,
there was an unexpected problem which happened to my 5 years old daughter
yesterday. She suddenly got flu seriously and had to go to the hospital. After health
checking, doctors said she needs at least 1 week staying at the hospital in order to
find the disease causes and the best solution for her medical treatment.
I would appreciate it if you could give me one more week before beginning of my
work or allow me to work at home during next week. I promise to complete my
requirement tasks and send report to you via email every day.
I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience and thank you for your understanding.
Faithfully,
Thanh