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Exploring concession and contrast
In this post we look at the difference between concession and simple contrast, and at
the various words and expressions we can use to express concession and contrast. As
well as information about these, there are ten exercises to give you plenty of practice
in using them.
Words and expressions used to express concession
The Basics

although, though, even though

despite, in spite of
Getting more advanced

while, whilst, whereas

nevertheless, however, even so, all the same

much as

no matter how / what etc

however, whatever, whoever etc

adjective + as / though

but still, but even so, but all the same

(and) yet
Even more exotic

when, if, albeit



may ... but

Contrastive emphasis with auxiliaries
We'll also look briefly at 'reducing' concession clauses, at fronting concession clauses
and at something called Yes, But arguing.

Introduction - the difference between contrast and concession.
Look at these two sentences

Mary prefers coffee, but Peter prefers tea

Although Mary usually prefers coffee, today she's drinking tea.


In the first example we have a simple contrast. There's no reason why Peter should
prefer coffee just because Mary does.
But in the second example, we have something a little unexpected, something slightly
surprising. Because Mary prefers coffee, we might expect her to be drinking coffee
today, but no, she's decided to have tea instead.
The second sentence is an example of concession, when something unexpected
happens - Mary's drinking tea today - even though we have conceded something else that is to admit that something else is true - that Mary usually prefers coffee.
Note - with simple contrast, we are usually comparing a similar aspect of two different
people, things or situations. With concession, we are often contrasting two different
aspects of the same person, thing or situation.


Ex 0 - introductory exercise - Contrast or concession?
Whether something expresses concession or contrast is open to interpretation, so the
answers in this first exercise reflect my ideas, not necessarily some golden rule.

Simple Concession
Contrast
1. Sally is blonde, but her sister is brunette.
2.

Although Sally originally wanted to become a lawyer,
she finally decided on a career in medicine.
3. This plan is fraught with problems. Nevertheless, I think
we should go ahead with it.
4. Mark's idea would be quite expensive. Sandy's,
however, sounds relatively cheap.
5. In spite of the crisis, this sector of the economy has
been doing quite well.
6. The South of England is relatively flat. The North, on the
other hand, is much hillier.
7. He's not the greatest conversationalist. Mind you, he is
rather good-looking.
8. In Geneva, most people speak French, whereas in Zurich
they mainly speak German.
9. Recent sales have been disappointing. However, this
month is looking rather better.
10. Much as I trust your judgement, this time In think we'll
do it my way.

Contrast clause or concession clause (aka Concessive clause)? A short note.
Look at these two example sentences adapted from a grammar book:

Although everyone was tired, they kept going until it got dark.
(= concession - their action is slightly surprising given their tiredness)


Although they accepted some of his recommendations, they rejected others.
(= contrast - between accepting some recommendation and rejecting others)
Some books for learners would call the first clause in both of these sentences
concession clauses. Others would call them both contrast clauses. This particular book
calls the first one a concession clause and the second a contrast clause, but not many
books make that distinction.
There is not a big difference between contrast and concession, and a lot of the
examples we'll be looking at express both concession and contrast to varying degrees.
It's an area where even linguists have problems: in one academic paper, the writer
calls concession a 'fuzzy' (not clear, confused) concept, so it's not worth getting too
worried about the difference.


Section 1 - the basics
1a. Expressing concession with although, though, even though
The usual way of talking about concession is to have a clause starting with although,
though and even though, which are are (subordinating) conjunctions (sometimes called
subordinators). The concession clause can come before or after the main clause.

Although Mary usually prefers coffee, today she's drinking tea.

Mary's drinking tea today although she usually prefers coffee.
Although and though are synonymous, but although is probably more common in
writing while though is thought to be more informal.

Although/though it had started to rain, we decided to go for a walk.

He said he'd be on time although/though I doubt it, knowing him.
Even though is stronger and more emphatic than though and although, and is usually
stressed when speaking.


Even though I knew I shouldn't, I had another of her delicious cakes.

They were late even though they had taken a taxi.
Sometimes it only makes sense to use although etc with only one part of the sentence.
It must make sense for the main clause to logically follow on from the concession
clause:

Although I was rather tired, I decided to stay up to see the late movie.
I was rather tired, although I decided to stay up to see the late movie.
But sometimes you have a choice, depending on your point of view:

Although the film was a bit long, it was quite enjoyable.
Although the film was quite enjoyable, it was a bit long.
Though as an adverb.
Note that we can also use though (but not although and even though) as an adverb, to
mean 'however'. In this use it can also come at the end of the sentence

That's what she says, but what she really thinks, though, I have no idea.

We'd better be going. - We've still got plenty of time, though.

Exercise 1a

Complete the sentences
Use although + a sentence from the box, as in the example.

we don't know them very well

we'd never met before


there was a light on upstairs

I really like her

they still lost

I've never met him

we live in the country

she never went to university

we took a taxi


Eg. Although we took a taxi , we were still late.
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.

, he sounds really interesting.
, life is never dull.
Nobody seemed to be at home


.

We asked them round for dinner

.

, we clicked immediately.
She's very bright
They played really well

.
.

, she can be a bit distant sometimes.

1b. Expressing concession with despite, in spite of

These have a similar meaning to although and also express concession. But they are
prepositions, so they can be only be followed by:

a noun or noun phrase
In spite of the bad weather, we had a great time

a pronoun
Everything seemed to go wrong, but we had a really good time in spite of it all.

an -ing form (gerund) or gerund phrase Despite telling him three times, he still forgot.
If we want to follow them with a full clause (that's to say, subject + verb), we need to
add 'the fact that',


the fact that + clause

In spite of the fact that she was pregnant, she kept working till the last
moment.

Despite the fact that it was raining, we went for a walk anyway.
But this is rather formal and long-winded, and it's usually better to
use although instead:

Although she was pregnant, she kept working till the last moment.

Although it was raining, we went for a walk anyway.
There is no difference in meaning between despite and in spite of, but some people
prefer to usedespite in writing, probably because it is shorter. This Ngram graph
shows how the use of despite is increasing in popularity in books, both British and
American:


Exercise 1b
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.

Choose the best option
Click on your preferred option to underline it


Although / Despite the rain, it was a great afternoon.
We had a great time though / in spite of it rained a bit.
She passed her test easily although / despite not doing much revision.
Although / Despite the salary wasn't great, she took the job.
Although / Despite coming first, she felt she could have done better.
Although / In spite of coming first isn't everything, it sure helps.
I managed to get tickets although / despite the queue was rather long.
I didn't manage to get very good seats although / , though.

Exercise 1c - Convert from although to despite
Rewrite the sections in italics using despite and an -ing form
1. Although he was a director, he didn't play a strong role in the company.
, he didn't play a strong role in the company.
2. She always seemed to be short of cash, although she had plenty of money in the
bank.
She always seemed to be short of cash,
3. Although he talked a lot, he didn't often come up with any useful ideas.
, he didn't often come up with any useful ideas.
Rewrite the sections in italics using despite and his/her/its + noun
4. Although she was beautiful, she was quite shy.
, she was quite shy
5. We're going to buy this anyway, although it is expensive.
We're going to buy this anyway,
6. Although he promised to call me back, he never did.
, he never did.

Section 2 - more advanced
2a. While, (whilst) and whereas
The conjunction while is not only used to talk about time.

As a conjunction, while is usually used to talk about a time relationship between two
events:

He washed up the dishes while she put the children to bed.

While he was washing up the dishes, the front doorbell rang.


But while also has two other uses:
1.




It can be used to express a contrast, especially when comparing the same aspect
of two different people, things or situations, etc. The while-clause can come first
or second, but most commonly seems to appear second.
Italy is in the south of Europe, while Sweden is in the north.
While Sally has blue eyes, her sister has brown ones.

2. We can also use while to express concession, when it can usually be replaced
by although. In this meaning the while-clause always comes first. (See note at end).

While I understand your point of view, I'm afraid I have to disagree with you.

While results have been pretty good so far, we shouldn't get too complacent
Note - We need to make sure when using while for contrast or concession that there
isn't any confusion with the time meaning:

While Peterson scored the first two goals, the third was headed in by

Jennings.
- This could be ambiguous - were all three goals scored at the same time? So we could
either change it slightly:

While it was Peterson who scored the first two goals, the third was headed in
by Jennings.
- This makes the sense of contrast, rather than time, clearer. Or we could
avoid whilealtogether:

Peterson scored the first two goals and/but the third was headed in by
Jennings.

Whilst
In British English, we occasionally use whilst instead of while, but it is considered
rather formal. In American English, whilst is considered old fashioned or pretentious.
There is no real need for foreign learners to use it.

Whereas
To some extent whereas has a similar meaning to while, but is a bit more formal and
is more common in written texts. However, its use is more restricted than that
of while, in that it must always express a direct contrast between two situations.
Although we can put the whereas / while-clause first or second in this meaning, in
the vast majority of examples I've found it comes second (see note at end), when it
means something like but or 'when on the other hand'.

I believe in the Loch Ness monster, whereas / while my brother doesn't.

Whereas / While she likes jazz, I prefer opera.

He is quite tall, while / whereas his brother is rather short.

Although whereas is always used to express a direct contrast between two
situations, sometimes this contrast can be surprising or unexpected in the context, in
which case whereas can also be said to have a concessive function. In these cases
the whereas-clause usually comes first.


This seems to be especially true when we contrast something that goes against the
norm, against the majority, or against the trend, or when we point out a negative
contrast. In these cases, the whereas-clause often comes first:

Whereas (While) more than ninety percent of British children go to state
schools, a recent study has shown that as many as 50% of the top jobs in the country
are held by people who were educated at elite 'independent' (i.e. private) schools.

Whereas (While) most of the party's MPs support the government on this
issue, a small handful are determined to vote against the party line.

Whereas (While) sales have been excellent for most of the summer, for some
reason we're not sure about, they declined in August.

Whereas (While) most patients recover from this illness fairly quickly, a few
develop complications, which can cause the illness to linger.

Comparing although, while and whereas.
1. Although
This is the most versatile of the three: on the one hand it can convey concession with
almost no idea of contrast:

Although I'd already eaten, I decided to go with some friends for a sushi
anyway.

On the other, it can refer to simple contrast with very little idea of concession:

Although I get on well with Peter, I don't like his brother very much.
2. While
Although while is usually used for simple contrast, we can often also use it in a very
similar way toalthough. When used with a concessive meaning like this, it should
express some sort of contrast, but that contrast can be very soft, and not necessarily
comparing two similar things.

While/Although we've only known each other a short time, we get on really
well.
Brian Garner, in Garner's Modern American Usage, calls while 'a more relaxed and
conversational term than although or whereas'.
3. Whereas
Whereas is the most restricted of the three, used to express a strong contrast
between two people, things or situations. It can only be used to express concession
when this strong contrast also exists:

Whereas / While I've only known Mark for a short time, I've known his
brother for much longer.
In this sentence, we are directly comparing two similar situations (how long I've
known Mark compared with how long I've known his brother), so whereas is
possible. There is a slight element of concession in that you might possibly expect me
to have known his brother for much the same time as I've known him.

While / Whereas we've only known each other a short time, we get on really
well.


But in this second sentence, we are talking about concession without any real idea of

contrasting, and especially not of contrasting like with like, so whereas wouldn't
work here.
4. Summary




although - mainly used for concession, with some overlap into contrast.
whereas - mainly for strong contrast, with some overlap into concession.
while - can usually be used for both concession and contrast.
Concesson

Contrast

although
whereas
while
There isn't a lot of information available about the exact differences in the use
of although, while andwhereas, so the answers in this exercise reflects my own
interpretation of the differences between them. You can read my comments after
you've done the exercise.


Exercise 2

1.

Choose the word that fits best by clicking on it. Sometimes both
answers are possible, so try and decide which the sentence expresses
more strongly - concession (although / while), or contrast (whereas /

while).
I see what you're getting at, I don't necessarily agree with you.
Whereas - While

2.

France is quite centralised, Germany is more federal in nature.
although - whereas

3.

she's only lived here a few years, she speaks English fluently.
Although - Whereas

4.

The elder daughter is training to be an engineer, her sister is studying
medicine.
whereas - while

5.

the climate on the west coast is relatively warm and wet, on the east coast it's
colder and drier.
Although - While

6.

She's usually right about these things this time I think she's mistaken.
although - while


7.

I got completely lost, I'd been there a couple of times before.
although - whereas

8.

in the past this type of information was only available to a few, now it is
available to anyone with an internet connection.
Although - Whereas

9.

Most first year students live in student residences, those in their second and
third years tend to prefer living in flats.
although - while

10. The Prime Minister has announced early elections nobody really knows quite
why.
although - while
11. United have won five out of their six matches so far, City have only managed to
win one.
although - whereas
12.

the company haven't made an official announcement, many commentators
expect them to launch the long-awaited new model next week.
Whereas - While



If using while for concession, remember to put the while-clause first, but if it simply
expressed contrast, I'd put it second.
Tip
Both while and whereas would be good words to work into your written work
(whereas is in the Academic Word List, for example). But until you get really familiar
with it, I'd reserve whereas for pure contrast, and put the whereas-clause second.
3. Even though and even if
As we've seen, even though is a stronger version of although and means despite the
fact that. Even if, however, introduces a condition, and is more like whether or not.

Even though he's busy, I think you should ask him.
= Despite the fact that he's busy, ...
I know that he's busy - we know that the information in the concessive clause is true.

Even if he's busy, I think you should ask him.
= Whether or not he's busy, ...
I don't know for sure whether he's busy or not - the information in the concessive
clause may be true, but we don't know for certain.

Exercise 3
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.


even though or even if - choose the best option
Click on your preferred option to underline it

She stayed out late even though / even if I told her to be back early.
Even though / Even if they win, they can't get through the next round.
He agreed to meet them even though / even if he knew that it was pointless.
I really enjoyed the film, even though / even if I don't usually like Westerns.
It's worth going for the interview, even though / even if they turn you down.
We're going for a walk later even though / even if it doesn't clear up.
Even though / Even if we've met a few times, I don't know him very well.
Even though / Even if we did turn up a bit late, it wouldn't really matter.

4. Other ways of introducing an unexpected contrast
4a. Conjunctive adverbs and adverbials
We can also express contrast and concession with adverbs and adverbial
expressions. In writing, these adverbs and adverbial expressions usually start a new
sentence, or follow a semicolon or dash ( - ), and are themselves followed by a
comma.

Contrast

however
My wife likes the mornings best. I, however, prefer the evenings.

on the other hand
The West coast is quite wet. On the other hand, it is also quite warm.





in contrast
The West coast is quite wet. In contrast, the east coast is much drier.
In contrast to the east coast, the west coast in quite wet.
Concession

nevertheless, nonetheless (more formal)
We'd seen the film before. Nevertheless, my wife wanted to watch it again.

however
I'd rather have watched the football - however, I agreed to watch the film.

even so
It was a quite good film. Even so, I'd have preferred to watch the football.

all the same
I quite enjoyed it; all the same, I prefer something a bit more lively.
We can also put however and nevertheless at the end of the second sentence or
clause.

My wife likes the mornings best. I prefer the evenings, however.

We'd seen the film before. My wife wanted to watch it again, nevertheless.
Tip
Advanced foreign learners no doubt already use however and on the other hand, but
if you don't already do so, now would be a good time to add nevertheless and in
contrast to your armoury. They are especially useful in academic writing.
4b Much as + subj + verb
We can use much as, to mean even though, with verbs like love, hate etc

Much as I like her, this is going too far

(even though I like her)

OK, I'll do the washing up, much as I detest it!
(even though I detest it)
See also the section on as ... as ...
4c. It doesn't matter / no matter how /what etc
We can use it doesn't matter how/what etc, or no matter how/what etc, instead
of even though.

It didn't matter how hard he tried, he just couldn't do it.

No matter how hard he tried, he just couldn't do it.

(Even though he tried very hard)
4d. however, whatever, whichever
We can also use however, whatever etc in a similar way to no matter how/what etc.

however + adjective
However tired she was, she always managed to cook a meal.

however + adverb
He just couldn't manage, however hard he tried.

however much / many
I'm not changing my mind, however much you ask me.
However many times you ask me, the answer will still be no!





whatever, whenever etc
We'll do it, whatever it takes.
Nobody talks to me like that, whoever they are!
I Will Be Right Here Waiting For You
Sung by Bryan Adams and written by Richard Marx. (hat tip to a commenter
at anglisci.pl)
Wherever you go, whatever you do
I will be right here waiting for you
whatever it takes, or how my heart breaks
I will be right here waiting for you
Exercise 4a
although · as · despite · however · matter · much · still · whatever · whereas
·wherever · whichever · whoever
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.
11.
12.

much she practised, she just couldn't get the hang of it.
The people were incredibly friendly, we went.
we had already eaten, we went for a pizza.
I've made my mind up, she says about it.

No how hard I try, I just can't open this jar.
We went for a long walk, the wet weather.
Tired we were, we managed to make it to the top of the hill.
we spoke to told us the same thing.
I've always been fairly relaxed, my sister gets a bit uptight.
as I love our holidays in Spain, I do like a change sometimes.
He did a lot of revision, but failed the exam.
We're going to be late, way we go.

4e. Adjective + as/though + subject + linking verb
Look at these two sentences:

Although the exam was difficult, he passed it easily.

Difficult though the exam was, he passed it easily.
In the second example, the adjective has been fronted and followed by though.
Fronting like this is sometimes used with adjectives and linking verbs such as be,
seem, appear, become, look, sound etc. This is done for effect or emphasis.
Note - in the fronted version we can only use though, not although or even though.
We can use as instead of though, but only in fronted constructions. (If we started
with as, it would suggest cause, not concession):

Talented though/as she is, she didn't get the first prize.
(even though she's talented.)

Smart though/as she appears, she was unable to answer the question.
(even though she appears smart)

Surprising though/as it sounds, I've never been to London.
(even though it sounds amazing)



In Section 6b, we look at less common forms of fronting, with other types of word.
See also the section on as ... as ...
Exercise 4b

Match the sentence halves, giving special emphasis to the adjectives
by moving them to the front of the sentence and adding though, as
in the example.

It sounds fascinating

He is rich

He was exhausted

He was outclassed

He is good

His answer was unlikely

It may seem strange

The train is fast

The food was delicious
eg.

Delicious though the food was , I couldn't eat another thing.


1.

, he hasn't had a holiday for years.

2.

, he isn't as talented as my brother.

3.

, it still took us most of the day to get there.

4.

, I think I'll give it a miss.

5.

, he's not exactly generous with his money.

6.

, it turned out that he was actually correct.

7.

, he managed to complete the whole course.

8.


, he still put in an excellent performance.

4f. But / yet (+ still / even so / all the same)
As we saw at the beginning, we usually use but to express simple contrast. We can
also strengthen the contrast of but by using it together with certain other words. It
can then give a sense of concession to the first clause, similar to even though.

but still
He ran his best race yet, but still managed to come almost last.
(even though he ran his best race yet)
The expressions even so and all the same can come immediately after but, or at the
end of the sentence.

but even so
There may be some problems, but even so, I think we should go ahead.
There may be some problems, but I think we should go ahead even so.
(even though there may be some problems)

but all the same
He made a big mistake, but all the same, I think we should give him a second chance.
He made a big mistake, but I think we should give him a second chance all the same
(even though he made a big mistake)
In more formal contexts (and) yet is sometimes used like but to give a concessive
meaning to the clause that comes before it:




The neighbourhood is only five minutes from the city centre; yet it is a haven

of peace and quiet.
(even though the neighourhood is only ten minutes from the city centre)

He put in his best performance to date, and yet failed to even win a medal.
(even though he put in his best performance to date)
More exotic ways of saying although / even though
5a. when
We sometimes use when with a concessive meaning. In this case, the when clause
always comes second.

He stayed out late when I specifically told him to be back by midnight.
(even though I specifically told him)

She did it all by herself when she could easily have asked for help
(even though she could have asked for help)

He brought me a white coffee when I'd asked for a black one.
(although I'd asked for a black one)
5b. if and if not
We can sometimes use if, usually followed by an adjective or adverbial expression, to
have a concessive meaning:

The salary is pretty good, if slightly less than I was hoping for.
(although (it's) slightly less than I was hoping for)

The flat is in a lovely area, if a bit far from the city centre.
(although (it's) a bit far from the city centre)

It’s possible, if difficult.
(although it may be difficult)

With the expression if not, however, there can sometimes be a bit of ambiguity. Take
the sentence:

She is very bright, if not a genius.
This could have a concessive meaning:

She is very bright, although not a genius.
But here, if not can also mean something like perhaps even.

She is very bright, perhaps even a genius.
In spoken language, the meaning is usually pretty clear from intonation - in the
second meaning we'd stress genius and our intonation would go up. But in written
texts there can sometimes be some ambiguity. For this reason, some commenters,
for example the Johnson language blog at the Economist and Bryan Garner, author of
Garner's Modern American Usage, suggest avoiding it in writing.
5c. ... may ... but ...

David may have passed with a higher grade, but Sally shows the better
attitude.
(Although David passed with a higher grade, Sally shows the better attitude)

Sally may not be the highest qualified, but she does have the most experience.
(Although Sally isn't the highest qualified, she does have the most experience)

It may be a demanding job, but at least it's not boring.
(Although it's a demanding job, at least it isn't boring)





The climb may have been a long one, but it was certainly worth it for the

views.
(Although the climb was a long one, it was certainly worth it for the views)
5d. albeit
You will occasionally come across albeit (pronounced as all be it) in printed texts. It is
rather formal and means although / even though / even if. It is not followed by a
clause, but usually by an adverb (especially of manner - and with rather a negative
meaning, such as reluctantly) or similar prepositional phrase, often
starting with or without.
In all these examples, albeit could be replaced by although (or concessive if - see 5c).
The albeitphrase always follows a verb, but can come between two verbs, as in the
first example:

They finally agreed, albeit reluctantly, to accept our offer.

They made their way up the hill, albeit rather slowly.

She finally accepted his idea, albeit with some hesitation.

He tried as hard as he could, albeit without much success.
5e. Contrastive emphasis with auxiliaries
In spoken language we can intensify contrast and concession by emphasising
auxiliaries. Remember that in simple tenses we need to add do / does / did

I don't like jam, although I do like marmalade.

We don't usually like his films, but we did like his last one.

They've never been to Paris, although they have been to France several times.


He can't snowboard, although he can ski quite well.
5f. As ... as ...
We've already seen fronted constructions with as, like 'Strange as it may
seem', 'Much as I regret having done it' and 'Hard as I tried'. These could all be
preceded by 'As' - As strange as it may seem', etc, and there is some evidence to
suggest that these constructions beginning with As are becoming more popular in
American English:
This seems to be more pronounced when we add the word 'may':
6. Some advanced points
6a Non-finite and verbless concessive clauses
Rather like with reduced relative clauses, we can sometimes form 'reduced'
concessive clauses with -ing forms, 3rd forms and certain verbless constructions
instead of a full clause with subject and finite verb.
We can do this with although, though, even though and while, but not
with whereas or when. The concessive clause usually comes first (especially
with while)
-ing forms - active meaning

While not wanting to offend him, she was nevertheless determined to be
frank.
(while she didn't want to offend him)

Although generally singing her praises, he could, at times, be quite critical.
(although he generally sang her praises)


3rd forms - passive meaning

Though given every chance, he refused to explain his actions.

(though he was given every chance)

Even though asked very politely, she still refused to help.
(even though she was asked very politely)
Verbless constructions
These usually omit the verb be and its subject:

While certainly a gifted musician, he was rather outclassed in this
competition.
(while he is certainly a gifted musician)

He is fitter than most fifty-year-olds though well into his eighties.
(though he is well into his eighties)
6b Fronting of concessive clauses
We saw in Section 5a how adjectives can be fronted with though or as to express
concession. Remember that with as, fronting is obligatory. The same is also
sometimes done with adverbs, and less commonly, with nouns and verbs.
Adverbs

Hard as he tried, he couldn't budge (move) it.
((even though he tried hard)
Nouns

Idiot though I may be, I'm not that stupid.
(although I may be an idiot)
Verbs
Note that with simple tenses, we need to add do/does/did.

Try as he might, he just couldn't find his keys anywhere.
(even though he tried very hard)


Fail though she did this time, she didn't give up hope of passing eventually.
(although she failed this time).
Fronting with that + be
We can do something similar with that and the verb be. Again, fronting is obligatory.
In American English only Noun phrases can be treated this way, but in British English
we can do it with adjectives as well.

Fool that I am, I nevertheless managed to get everything right.
(even though I'm a fool)

Confident as she was, she soon came unstuck in the interview. (British English)
(even though she was confident)
NB. Causal meanings
Note that fronted expressions with as and that (but not though) can also be used
with the opposite sense, with a causal meaning rather than a concessive one.

Late as I was, I decided to take a taxi.
(because I was late)

Smart as she is, she passed the exam with flying colours.
(because she is smart)

Fool that I am, I made a real mess of it.
(because I'm a fool)




Confident as she was, she sailed through the interview.

(because she was confident)
7. Yes, But arguing - claim | concession | counter-argument.
When we are using more structured language, in a presentation or in writing for
example, we use discourse markers to indicate to the listener or reader the general
structure of what we are saying.
One such way is by using Yes, But arguing, which uses a three part structure where
you:
1.
put forward a claim or argument
Dogs make the best pets for children
2.
concede there might be other arguments against your claim (= Yes)
Yes, cats are more independent and need less looking after, perhaps.
3.
return to your original claim, strengthening it (= But)
But dogs give children more sense of reponsibility.
We use concession markers to introduce the 'Yes' part, and contrast markers to
introduce the 'But' part

Yes - yes, it is true (that), admittedly, granted, of course, there is no doubt
(that), true, to be sure

But - but, however, nonetheless, even so, all the same, still
This is a particularly useful device, not only in more academic writing, but any time
that you have to put forward an argument, and discuss it. But it is important not to
use 'But' expressions in your concessionary part, or 'Yes' expressions in the return
part, or you might confuse your listener / reader.
There's a link at the end to a website for teachers where you can find more
information about Yes, Butarguments.



8. Bringing it all together
Exercise 8a

Complete the sentences by entering ONE word into each gap.


1.
2.
3.
4.
5.

She decided to take the job, even
she had hoped for.
No

what we talk about, she always disagrees with me.

She loves long walks in the country. Her sister, in
to spend her weekends visiting museums.

7.
8.
9.
10.
11.

13.
14.

15.

, you won't taste a better one.

We still felt quite energetic,

our long walk.

I know she speaks English quite well. Even
expecting her to make a speech.

, it's a bit much

Well I'm not going to his stupid party,

you say!

I'm not usually very partial to red wines, although I
Chilean Cabernet Sauvignon.

like

We're leaving in five minutes even
he hasn't turned up by
then.
We didn't particularly want to go to the function but we did so all
the

12.


, prefers

I just couldn't keep up with them,
hard I tried.
It does sound rather a long way to go just for an ice-cream. On the
other

6.

the salary was less than

.

We took a taxi but we
concert.

managed to arrive late for the

I'm afraid I have to go now,
pack.
You
comment.
Tell them I'm out,

as I would like to help you

well think that's the case, but I couldn't possibly
it is.



Exercise 8b Choose the word or expression that fits best by clicking on it.
1. She's very friendly, a little shy.
albeit - no matter - despite
2.

He doesn't have a lot of experience but they decided to offer him the job .
albeit - although - nevertheless

3.

they've known each other since they were children, it's only recently that
they've started going out together.
Nevertheless - Whereas - While

4.

I haven't bought the tickets yet, but I don't think there'll be a any problems, .
in contrast - although - though

5.

He earns quite a decent salary, his brother has to make do on very little.
whereas - in spite of - albeit

6.

He borrowed my bicycle I particularly told him not to.
when - albeit - however

7.


the number of red squirrels in Scotland is declining, the grey squirrel
population continues to increase.
Whereas - However - No matter

8.

Funny it may seem, I've never seen Star Wars.
even though - though - although

9.

The houses next to the park are quite expensive. Those a street or two away, ,
are a bit cheaper.
however - nevertheless - even so

10. The old house, somewhat delapidated, has a lot of charm.
if - as - when
11. I've always wanted a Ferrari. , it would be a bit impractical, but think of how
much fun you could have.
However - Still - True
12.

not having arrived at at a firm decision yet, we're increasingly inclined to
accept their offer.
- While - Whereas - When


Notes on while and whereas
Use and position of while-clauses

The vast majority of while-clauses on newspaper websites and at the BNC have the
time meaning, rather than one of contrast or concession, so it would take far too
long to find those I'm interested in. Accordingly, I've just looked at the example
sentences given in several (sixteen to be precise) online dictionaries:
In dictionary examples, at least, while-clauses expressing contrast usually come
second, and always come first when expressing concession. Furthermore, in the
entry for while at the Oxford Advanced Learner's Dictionary, there is a note that in
the sense of although or despite the fact that (in other words,
concession), while is 'used at the beginning of a sentence'.
Use and position of whereas-clauses
This table shows a breakdown of examples of whereas taken from various sources. I
have classified them as to whether I thought they were being used to express
contrast, concession, or ambiguous (where I wasn't sure), and as to whether
the whereas-clause came first or second in the sentence.
Some examples of whereas-clauses from the media and the BNC
Where they express pure contrast

The average London student pays £287 a week for essentials like
accommodation, food, study materials and travel - whereas Leicester students pay
just fraction of this weekly sum at £167.
(The Daily Telegraph)

They (women) see it (visiting the doctor) as a question of
maintenance, whereas men see it as a question of repair.
(The Guardian)

Part of the problem, he said, was that the climate sceptic lobby employed
communications professionals, whereas "scientists are just barely competent at
communicating with the public and don't have the wherewithal to do it."
(The Independent)


The more prestigious (private schools) such as Eton, Harrow and Winchester
can afford to charge annual fees in excess of £4,000 (more than $6,000 in 1983
terms), whereas some less prestigious day schools may charge less than £1,000 per
year.
(British National Corpus - NB these figures are much higher today!)

Whereas some Italian coaches are obsessed by formation, strategy and
shape, the Real Madrid manager has a more relaxed approach that concentrates on
maximising individual talent.
(The Guardian)
Where they suggest a strong element of concession

Whereas most modern performance cars encourage aggression through their
virulence, the Stag suppresses it while getting there just as quickly.
(British National Corpus)
Here, the writer is not simply contrasting the (Triumph) Stag - a British sports car
produced in the 1970s - with another sports car, but is suggesting that it was different
from most other 'modern' sports cars. In this way the information about the Stag is
slightly surprising or unexpected, so I think we can talk of concession here.




Whereas the French Ministry of Culture alone has 7,000 officials, the entire
European Commission has less than double (12,911) to deal with all policies.
(British National Corpus)
In this example, the concession comes from the writer's implying that the European
commission is surprisingly small when compared with national governments - the key
word here is alone.


Yet whereas US GDP stands roughly where it was just before the financial
crisis broke, the UK's GDP is some 4pc below. Why the difference?
(The Guardian)
I think there is concession here (strengthened by that opening 'yet') in that the writer
seems rather surprised that the UK's GDP is so low compared with that of the US.

Whereas only four per cent of people at any one time have major depression,
around one third suffer symptoms of the minor variety.
(The Guardian)
Considering how few people suffer from major depression, it is perhaps surprising
(concession) that as many as a third suffer from minor depression.

I think women in sport are perceived as being not very feminine, not very
girly, whereas we can be.
(The Guardian)
A rare example of a whereas-clause used for concession appearing in second position.
The information in the whereas-clause is contrary to the general perception
(although would fit here) - hence the concession.
Other (ambiguous) examples of whereas-clauses in first position

But whereas Bristol's A&E (Accident and Emegency) departments are filling up
by midnight with fight injuries, you rarely see as much as a scuffle in Bilbao.
(The Guardian)
Here, the writer is comparing alcohol use among young people in Southern European
with that of the British, the main subject of his article. The information in the main
clause contrasts with the general theme of his article - that (in Britain) alcohol and
violence often go together.

They ate dairy products, but whereas much of it in Jamaica was home-reared,

ours comes, less healthily, from mass production.
(The Guardian)
The author (a British journalist of Jamaican descent) is comparing what Jamaican
emmigrants ('they') ate back home in Jamaica with what they now eat in Britain. The
information in the whereas-clause is rather positive, whereas that in the main clause is
rather negative.
Reference
As there is very little about the exact uses of while and whereas in standard EFL and
ESL resources, I've relied heavily on A Comprehensive Grammar of the English
Language, by Quirk, Greenbaum and others.
However, although, though, despite, nevertheless, whereas all have a three star
rating at Macmillan Dictionary and are included in the The Oxford 3000 TM of most
common words.
Whereas, despite, nevertheless, nonetheless, albeit also appear in the Academic
Word List.



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