03 02 responding towards revision presentation (1)
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RESPONDING TOWARD REVISION
Project 1
Global/Large Scale
• Argument/Evidence
• Does the writer use Coyle’s own
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terms?
Writer’s own argument?
Integration of evidence?
Uses and limits of Coyle?
What did you learn from reading this
critical review? What questions
does it raise?
Organization?
Other strengths?
Other aspects that could be
strengthened?
Local/Smaller Scale
• Transition sentences?
• Paragraph unity?
• Opening?
• Closing?
• Scholarly system of
citation?
Proofreading/Grammar
• Look for patterns
• Prioritize and choose
one or two items to
suggest working on
• Point out one moment,
then ask writer to find
others
