Đề thi và bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 30/3/2017

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Đề thi và bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 30/3/2017
The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose,
and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any
relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Sample Answer 1:
It is a fact that advertisements are now widespread on mass media. Some people believe that these do not
serve any beneficial purposes and even spoil the society. There should be an advertising restriction to
hinder their negative impacts on customers. So everything has its own pros and cons and that is why
someone rightly said that all that glitters is not gold.
It is understandable that people want to remove advertisements from our lives because advertisements
can be disturbing, therefore the pumping out of advertisement on the internet is distractive when doing
research online and insertion of ads during TV dramas and movies is obnoxious. Moreover,
advertisements are sometimes misleading and cause impulsive purchase thus the exaggeration and
eye-binding techniques employed in the advertisement overshadow the true function of products and the
consumers, especially the young people, would fall victims to this intensive commercial completion.
On the other side, it is irrefutable that the proponents of advertisement argue that it is unfair to ban
advertisement because it is the only efficient and viable way to show their products. If the advertisement
is eradicated then the link between products and consumers would be cut off. Without advertisement,
companies would find it hard to reach out to their customers. Consequently, giant companies would
manipulate the market and small companies would never be known by the public. Furthermore,
advertisement provides more options to consumers.
To draw the conclusion, I pen down by stating that advertisement is disturbing now and then, there is
realistic need of it. The government should make them more trustworthy. Nowadays, the advertisement
is an inescapable and necessary existence.
(Written by - Sukhdev Gautam)
Sample Answer 2:
There is no denying the fact that advertisement plays a vital role in human life. The advertisement is the
backbone of commerce and industry. It is a source of information as well as the source of entertainment.
It is important for us. These days are the days of marketing. We cannot think of life without

advertisement. Without advertisements, life is like a fish without water. No businessman or industrialist


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can ever hope of tapping the market without proper advertisement. Advertisements are all around us - on
television, radio and newspaper.
Apropos to above parable about the conversation, many people hold the opinion that advertisement is an
important part of our life because the advertisement is the best way to educate the people. For instance,
they inform the people about new products, their uses, merits and other similar products available in the
market. Moreover, many advertisements are issued by the government agencies, NGOs, and social
welfare organisation which have great value in education the people. Furthermore, advertisements raise
the standard of living of the people.
On the flip side, those who disagree with this point of view mention that those advertisements have their
disadvantages because they distort and exaggerate reality. In addition to it, they aim at profits.
Furthermore, another objection is that many advertisements are bad for that they provide the wrong
information to the people. Besides this, the producers have become profit hungry. They throw the moral
values to the winds.
To conclude, I pen down by stating that advertisements put deep influence on the people’s mind. Some
advertisements advise people the direction of the right path. Good advertisements help the people to
choose the right products and make informed decisions.
(Written by - Sukhdev Gautam)
Band 7:
Advertising has great emphasis on the general public. Nowadays,the consumerism changed the
dynamics of shopping trends.The vast media and advertising go hand in hand.The numerous ways to
advertise the product hit the general attitude of buying the product. There is always clash of arguments
among people,some assert that the society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because
it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging while others presume that advertising plays a
crucial role in today's scenario. In my perception, advertising is the present and the future and it must not
be banned.
To begin with,one can not shun the fact that solely because of advertisement,an individual came to know

about the on going trends and the new better products available in the market. It has been seen that from
last one decade,advertisement substantially affect the industry. Advertisement should not be banned
because it attributed to numerous parameters. Firstly,convenience for public, an individual may learn and
aware about the new products and items in the market for example, television is the ultimate source to


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fetch information about the different product currently present in stores. Secondly, price list,one could
compare the prices of various products present in the market and could buy as accordance to his/her
pocket as for an illustration,there are countless food brands in the market,offering same item at different
rate such as potato chips etcetera. Thirdly, one can learn about the difficult schemes and offers in a
simple way because the company portrays their products in a most effective and easy way. With the
passage of time, everything is changed in the surroundings and advertisement is the ultimate result of
technological development,so it must be welcomed and one should enjoy the immense benefits from the
advertisement.
Moving further,as everything that glitters is not gold,sometimes the faux people portrays their product in
a wrong way for an example the fairness creams and lotions which offer skin fairness in 4 weeks and
pragmatically it is not possible. The general public is very innocent and struck in the traps of the leading
companies. Some advertisement serves no useful purpose. The monopoly of the leading companies,
largely harm the public. These are the reasons because of which the good products also seems to be fake.
There are some herbal products which has got no severe harm but an individual never believe on it
because of bad experiences in the past. Moreover, the companies target children because they are most
innocent and largely influenced customers. In addition to this,companies offers different perks to
children as for an example,a free toy with a chocolate or any food item. An individual must not trust the
advertisement blindly and must take care of the plagiarism.
To recapitulate,I would like to say that advertisement is an essential need of today. One must enjoy the
benefits of advertisement and keep himself/herself updated and should also take care of the faux
products.