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Đề thi và bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 21/1/2017
Task 2: Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear
that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in.To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
Model Answer 1:
In recent years, the change in spending money to buy people's needs has occurred dramatically. As a
result, it always will be a controversial topic whether it is a bad or positive trend relating to the
shopping habit which has become a routine task and even a hobby. This essay, as my point of view,
leads to, will try to come up with several considerations as I believe that an intermediate position can be
taken relating to this issue.
Shopping, that contradicts the topic regards, is a "nightmare" because the impacts which are dire &
inevitable. Consumerism, in some ways, contributes bad things to the society as well as the civilisations.
People who overcapitalize their money can spend their revenues in nothing and as a result, they suffer
in managing their funding and try to borrow a big amount of money for just their basic needs.
Psychologists argue that addiction in shopping which creates consumerism behaviour can lead to
several criminal dire effects such as robbery and stealing.
However, without shopping and its relating things governments will face the problem in controlling the
economy. The thing which can grow the Gross Domestic Products indicator is expenditures, especially
the private one. Without increasing in this indicator, there will be severe implications which the
economist called unemployment. The improvement of spending money indicates that people in the
country are wealthy and also projects the prosperity of the nation which influences the corporations to
produce products in high quantity as well as high quality. Throughout this trend, the employers will try
to provide immense chances for people to get their job in the corporations. As consequences, spending
in buying products, even it is a hobby or not, with larger portions helps economy matters indirectly.
To sum up, having considered the discussion above, I believe it will always create both positive and
negative impacts, but shopping habit can be useful if the shoppers expend their money wisely.
[ Written by - Angga Cool ]

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Model Answer 2:
People used to go shopping only because of a daily needs, while recently it changes to be a kind of
hobbies for people. Some state that shopping is an activity which can reduce boredom, thus it is great
for people to do so. I personally believe that going shopping is not only for spending money, but you
can find some benefits by doing this kind of activities. Therefore, through this essay, I will support my
view with some considerations.
The first idea is that people love shopping because it can refresh their minds. By going shopping round
you will be able to forget the things which burden you. For instance, young adults prefer to do the
shopping after having the final examination. They will try to entertain themselves by buying something
which is interesting and they will obtain a satisfaction at the time. As a consequently, they directly
forget about the difficulties encountered during the exam.
In addition, going shopping is not only the case of buying something such as clothes, bags or even
accessories. Shopping also means amusement in which people visit some shopping places to gather
with family or friends. They just tend to spend their time in the lovely places which provide a lot of
entertainments, thus they can enjoy their leisure time with full of joy and fun.
To sum up, go shopping could be a bad habit that can addict people to do so. However, Shopping is a
great hobby which can help people overcoming their stress or even anxiety. It occurs because doing
shopping will make them more relax and forget about their problems.
[ Written by - Tuty Starlet ]
Model Answer 3: Band 7
Many argue that the time youngsters spend on shopping malls is too much currently, and this trend can
adversely affect the young and the community in the future. Personally, I completely agree with this
opinion for some reasons.
On the one hand, young people nowadays often spend a huge amount of money in a shopping mall.
One of the reasons is that they might be obsessed with buying things such as luxurious clothes or
jewelry, which are expensive and not essential to spend money on. For example, many young girls are


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willing to pay 2000 dollars for a T-shirt that is made of a famous brand only to show it to her friends.
Furthermore, the money they have spent is not what they have earned but their parents’ money.
Another reason why many malls are attractive to the young is that there are a rising number of fast food
restaurants in them where they sell loads of unhealthy food. Having these kinds of food for a long time
contributes to the degradation of people’s health.
On the one hand, younger people has spent several hours for shopping and gathering eating in the mall
centres, which is considered a waste of time. The more time they use for that kind of entertainment, the
less precious time they have for other activities studying or travelling. For instance, young people often
have no time doing volunteering but a greater amount of time for shopping with their friends at
weekends. It is more sensible for each young individuals spending more time for their families and
improving their own knowledge by reading books or learning another languages rather than wasting it
in shopping malls. Society absolutely gain nothing and cannot make a progress if there are future young
generations who are not hard working and lack effort into enhancing the quality of their own lives.
In conclusion, I believe that the young should spend less their time for shopping malls because it can
have a negative impact on them as well as society as a whole.
Model Answer 4:


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