SPEAKING IELTS TOPIC UNIFORM

Frankly speaking, I don't like to wear uniform. But I think wearing uniform while you're at school
is really important. There are some reasons that will make you understand more about this
issue. Firstly, wearing uniform helps create the school's identity. Whenever the teachers see
you, they will know that you are their students, not other school's students. Moreover, when the
whole school takes pictures together, it will look better than each students, each clothes.
Second , something that we can call it " peer pressure ". Certainly, not every students in your
school has good living conditions. Someone has expensive and nice clothes but the others even
may not have enough clothes to wear. So instead of wearing their own clothes, wearing uniform
will make students not feel uncomfortable or embarrassed.besides, you can get starstrucks by
somebody because they wear short skirts , crop top or something likes that to school. For these
reasons, I absolutely agree with the idea of wearing uniform at school.
- Vì đây là bài viết, nên chị nghĩ em không nên dùng c ụm “ Frankly speaking” – th ẳng
thắn mà nói và từ “really” cũng thế. Em nên thay b ằng “completely, absolutely, totally,
extremely,…” và viết như thế này.
From my perspectives, wearing uniform while you are at school is extremely important.
Firstly….it helps create……
- Em nên thay “Whenever” = For example/ For instance. Nh ưng mà câu đó nên vi ết nh ư
sau.
The fact that, it is easy for the teachers to recognize their students through the uniform
especially through the school’s logo.
….
Nhưng mà nói tóm lại, bài của em thiên về văn nói nhiều hơn văn viết.
Tham khảo bài chị nhe.
There is a multitude of merits when students wear uniform to school. First and foremost,
uniform gives students a sense of belonging to a particular school and creates an
indentity for their school in the community especially through the logo. In addition, it is
much easier for the teachers to recognize their students in the crowd. Second, by
wearing uniform, the learners look completely the same, therefore, no one may be left out
by the way they are dressed, which helps them not being distracted from others and
focuses on their studies in an effective way. Furthermore, school uniform has gradually
become the symbol of international culture these days. For these reasons, I totally agree

with the idea of wearing uniform to school.