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38. The devout Catholic family hung Jesus’ picture on the wall.
a. Jesus’ picture on the wall.
b. Jesus’s picture on the wall.
c. Jesuses’ picture on the wall.
d. the picture of Jesus’ on the wall.
e. the picture of Jesus’s on the wall.
39. Plainly visible from the lawn of the White House, we could see
the president.
a. we could see the president.
b. the president was seen by us.
c. the president saw us.
d. the people saw the president.
e. the president and the people saw each other.
40. Flipping bac
k and forth in the water, we saw the dolphin hav-
ing fun.
a. Flipping back and forth in the water, we saw the dolphin hav-
ing fun.
b. As we were flipping back and forth in the water, we saw the
dolphin having fun.
c. We saw the flipping back and forth in the water, the dolphin
having fun.
d. The dolphin flipping back and forth in the water, we saw him
having fun.
e. We saw the dolphin having fun, flipping back and forth in the
water.
41. Unable to attend classes, the notes were given to the b
oy.
a. the notes were given the boy.

b. the boy had notes given to him.
c. the boy was given the notes.
d. the notes were taken for the boy.
e. the notes were giving the boy.
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42. Because he was incapacitated by injury, the player sat on the
bench.
a. Because he was incapacitated by injury,
b. Because incapacitated by injury,
c. Because he had incapacity by injury,
d. Because he was being in capacitated by injury,
e. After he had incapacitated by injury,
43. He whom has squandered has lost
his gift of success.
a. whom has squandered has lost
b. who has squandered has been lost
c. whom have squandered have lost
d. who has squandered has lost
e. whom has squandered will have lost
44. The class champion from last year plays the game the most
smarter of all.
a. the most smarter of all.
b. the most smartest of all.
c. the most smartly of all.
d. the most of all smart.
e. the smartest of most.

45. T
o win, to succeed at all one attempts, and have never given in
make dreams come alive.
a. To win, to succeed at all one attempts, and have never given in
b. To win, to succeed at all one attempt, and to never give in
c. To win, to succeed at all one attempts, and to never give in
d. To win, to succeed at all one attempts, and to have never give in
e. To win, to succeed at all one attempts, and having never given in
46. Bought on credit is not wise
.
a. Bought on credit is not wise.
b. To be bought on credit is not wise.
c. To bought on credit is not wise.
d. To buy on credit is not wise.
e. To have been buying on credit is not wise.
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47. Walking along the creek sure beats living in the city, commut-
ing to work, and being trudging around in traffic all morning.
a. commuting to work, and being trudging around in traffic all
morning.
b. commuting to work and having been trudged around in
traffic all morning.
c. commuting to work and having been trudging around in
traffic all morning.
d. commuting to work and trudging around in traffic all morning.
e. commuting to, working, and trudging around in traffic all
morning.
48. I was thrilled, relieved, sad, and overjoyed

—all at once.
a. I was thrilled, relieved, sad, and overjoyed
b. I was thrilled, relieved, sad, and joyful
c. I was thrilling, relieved, sad, and joyful
d. I was thrilled, relieved, saddened, and joyful
e. I was thrilled, relieved, saddened, and overjoyed
49. I think it was Mr. X whom said that
1 + 1 = B.
a. whom said that
b. who he said that
c. whom he said that
d. who said that
e. who it was that said
50. The people were down-trodding, cast down to nothingness,
defeated beyond hope.
a. down-trodding, cast down to nothingness, defeated beyond
hope.
b. down-trodding, casted down to nothingness, defeated
beyond hope.
c. downtrodden, cast down to nothingness, defeated beyond hope.
d. down-trod, casted down to nothingness, defeated beyond hope.
e. down-trod, cast down to nothingness, defeated beyond hope.
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51. Because you have annoyed me constantly, have asked me for
the car repeatedly, and have begged me for money daily, I have
decided to expel you.

a. I have decided to expel you.
b. I am expelling you.
c. I have expelled you.
d. You are expelled.
e. You have been expelled.
52. The distinguished senator greeted the audience and thanked
their attendance.
a. thanked their attendance.
b. them for attendance.
c. them attendance.
d. them for attending.
e. their attending.
53. I hate you talking with your mouth full
.
a. you talking with your mouth full.
b. your talking with your mouth full.
c. your talking with your full mouth.
d. you talking with your full mouth.
e. your talk with your mouth full.
54. The man asked would we move our car
.
a. would we move our car.
b. if would we move our car.
c. if we would move our car.
d. if could we move our car.
e. if we could have moved our car.
55. The man asked point blank what would we do
.
a. what would we do.
b. what we would do.

c. what we could do if.
d. what would we be doing.
e. what would we have done.
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56. I would rather have been defeated than to have given up.
a. have been defeated
b. be defeated
c. be in defeat
d. been defeated
e. have been being defeated
57. If I had took the pen
, would I still be here?
a. If I had took the pen,
b. Had I took the pen,
c. If I had taken the pen,
d. Have I taken the pen,
e. If I had’ve took,
58. T
he best-wrote poem is always clear and concise.
a. The best-wrote poem
b. The best-written poem
c. The best-writ poem
d. The better-written poem
e. The better-wrote poem
59. Had he went to the military
, he’d be a man by now.
a. Had he went to the military,
b. Had he gone to the military,

c. If he had went to the military,
d. If he would have went to the military,
e. If he had’ve went to the military,
60. W
e reported the incident on the bridge to the captain.
a. We reported the incident on the bridge to the captain.
b. We reported on the bridge the incident to the captain.
c. We reported the bridge on the incident to the captain.
d. We reported the captain to the incident on the bridge.
e. We reported the incident to the captain to the bridge.
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