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n Lesson 1, the word friendly was used to describe the “general reader.” It’s important to think of your reader
this way, because when you write for a friendly audience, you won’t be tempted to employ an unnecessar-
ily adversarial or defensive tone. But friendly doesn’t mean that the reader will accept everything and any-
thing you say. Unsubstantiated assertions will be questioned, and evidence will be required.
An essay is an explanation, not just of what you think, but of why you think it. The why comprises many
types of support, including evidence, examples, and details. Most types of support are in one of six categories:
1. specific examples
2. facts
3. reasons
4. descriptions and anecdotes
5. expert opinion and analysis
6. quotations from the text
LESSON
Providing
Support
LESSON SUMMARY
Your thesis is as important as the evidence that supports it. This les-
son describes six different strategies for supporting your assertions.
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The boundaries of these categories are not absolute; an anecdote is often an example, and a reason can also
be a fact. However, the categories are useful for discussing types of support and illustrating how to substantiate
your assertions in a variety of ways.
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Specific Examples
Specific examples comprise the broadest category of evidence. Such an example offers something tangible to the
reader; it is a person, place, or thing that exemplifies your idea. Let’s examine the following statement:
Movies often portray the American suburb as a place of false happiness and hidden misery. But this is an unfair and
inaccurate depiction.
This thesis has two ideas that need support: the portrayal of the American suburb as a place of false happiness and

hidden misery, and that this depiction is unfair and inaccurate. You could cite films such as American Beauty and
The Ice Storm as specific examples.
But examples can’t simply be mentioned. To support your thesis, you’ll need to demonstrate that both films
portray the American suburb in precisely this negative way. You could begin this demonstration with a summary
of the plot (remember, you shouldn’t assume that a general reader has the same knowledge as you), and then offer
the following specific examples as evidence:
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the Burnhams’ home and neighborhood
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Mrs. Burnham’s obsession with appearance
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the breakdown of the Burnhams’ marriage
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Mr. Burnham’s rebellion against the status quo
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Jane Burnham’s hatred of her parents
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Mrs. Fitts’ comatose state
Specific examples like these provide concrete evidence of your assertions. They make your claim “real” for your
reader.
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Facts
The next form of support must be differentiated from opinion.
A fact is:
something known for certain to have happened
something known for certain to be true
something known for certain to exist
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Statistics may seem like the most uncontestable kind of fact—after all, numbers are objective. But numbers can

be, and often are, manipulated in many ways, including being taken out of context. Alert readers will want to
see the source of your statistics to be sure the figures are unbiased. We’ll explore this issue further in Lesson 11.
An opinion is:
something believed to have happened
something believed to be true
something believed to exist
Facts are what we know; they are objective and therefore do not change from person to person. Opinions are what
we believe; they are subjective and debatable, and they often change from person to person. Because facts are objec-
tive, they’re particularly valuable as evidence in an essay, especially when your thesis is controversial.
Facts include statistics, definitions, recorded statements, and observations. For example, a writer is draft-
ing an essay assessing the flat tax from her outline (Lesson 6). Here is her thesis:
A flat tax would be good for the government and for citizens.
To support it, she could include the following facts:
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The IRS publishes 480 different tax forms.
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The IRB publishes 280 different tax forms to explain those 480 tax forms.
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The body of the tax law has 7.05 million words—ten times the number of words in the Bible.
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The cost of income tax compliance is over $1.3 billion a year (some sources estimate the cost as high as $2
billion).
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Practice 1
Choose one of the essays for which you developed an outline in Lesson 6 or 7. List at least four supporting ideas
for your thesis. Include at least one specific example and at least one fact.
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A Note about Statistics
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Reasons
For many essays, the best way to support your thesis is to explain why you think the way you do. That explana-
tion will lay out your reasons—some will be facts, others will be opinions. The key to this type of support is logic.
Your reasons must be based on evidence or good common sense. That is, they must be logical.
To meet that standard, many reasons need considerable support. They can’t simply be stated with an expec-
tation that the audience will believe them. Here is another thesis:
School officials should not be allowed to randomly search students’ lockers and backpacks.
For support, the following reasons could be used:
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These searches violate the right to privacy.
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Searches should not be done randomly, but only when there is a suspected violation.
Both of these reasons are opinions, and they need support to be convincing. The writer must use evidence to
show that these opinions are logical and reasonable. To support the first reason, he could define the right to pri-
vacy (a combination of specific examples, facts, and description); he could provide an example or describe a cer-
tain situation where a search led to a violation of privacy (specific example, anecdote); and provide expert opinion.
To support the second assertion, he could explore the idea that “random searches” can lead to profiling of
who is searched, and that without a suspected violation, everyone then becomes a suspect unless otherwise
cleared of a violation; and provide expert opinion.
Of course, people’s reasons for believing certain things are often very personal and highly debatable. While
it’s fine—and often effective—to use emotional arguments to convince your readers, the more logical your rea-
sons, the more effective they will be as support.
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Description and Anecdotes
Evidence and support can also come in the form of short stories or descriptions that illustrate a point. Descrip-
tions and anecdotes are effective evidence—especially in essays about people—because they help the reader
form a picture that illuminates your ideas. In the following thesis, the writer addresses a college application essay
topic:
The person I admire most is my sister. I call her Wonder Woman. A professional who copes daily with the most
stressful and potentially depressing situations, she is the strongest person I know.

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The best kind of support for this essay will be description and anecdote—a series of “snapshots” and stories that
illustrate the sister’s strength. Here’s an example:
Amy’s job with the Division of Youth and Family Services is incredibly stressful. Every day for the past five years,
she has visited families who are struggling with addiction, abuse, poverty, and hopelessness. One family has been
“in the system” for a decade, cycling through the same problems without resolution. But instead of burning out,
Amy’s compassion and resolve have increased. She visits this family weekly, and is available to them almost 24
hours a day if a crisis arises. Once, she was awakened at three in the morning when the teenager in this family
failed to come home. She got in her car and drove to their apartment, then called the police and helped them
file a missing persons report. And this is just one family under her watch.
Similarly, to support the assertions that searches of students’ lockers and backpacks should not be allowed,
you could describe a search in which a student was unfairly accused and blamed for a crime. The following descrip-
tion appeared in a law journal article about such as case:
Wearing an orange prison jumpsuit and flip-flops, Sam Mazza looked dejected as he made his first court appearance.
He was facing three years in prison for a crime he says was intended as a private joke. His spirits appeared to lift, how-
ever, when his attorney carefully laid out his case: The search of every locker in the school was unconstitutional. When
Mazza’s principal ordered the search, he was in violation of the “reasonable suspicion” component of legal searches.
Since the note about a bomb threat (Mazza contends it was a joke) was found during an illegal search, the case had
to be dropped. Mazza sat taller in his seat and smiled at his parents when his attorney concluded his remarks.
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Expert Opinion and Analysis
During a trial, lawyers often call upon expert witnesses to help them make their case. These witnesses were not
involved in the crime, but they have expertise that can help the jurors determine the guilt or innocence of the defen-
dant. Similarly, in many essays, and particularly in research papers, much of your support will come in the form
of expert opinion and analysis. The experts you call upon can help you demonstrate the validity of your thesis.
You can collect expert opinion and analysis in two ways: by interviewing sources yourself (primary research)
or by finding print or other recorded sources of expert opinion or analysis (secondary research). Sources of sec-
ondary research include the Internet, periodicals, journals, books, and transcripts.
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When writing a college application essay, remember that regardless of the topic, the essay needs to reveal some-
thing personal about you. Writing an essay about your sister in response to the prompt “Indicate a person who
has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence” is fine. However, you need to avoid the
common pitfall of that prompt, which is to write about the person, and not about yourself. The writer of the sis-
ter essay needs to relate her sister’s story to herself, not simply explain why her sister is the person she
admires most.
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