thi ielts essay 5 luyện thi

Multi-cultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples,
bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree
or disagree?

In recent years, it has become far more common to witness the fact that the
multiculturalism community becomes ubiquitous world-widely, in which there is a
blend of various non-native folks. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to
whether the overall effect of this propensity has been positive or negative. While
there are certainly valid arguments to the tendency, it is my personal belief that this
trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
On the one hand, it is an undeniable fact that the multi-cultural society could
be seen as favourable for the following reasons. To begin with, multiculturalisms
can attract tourists to many culturally featured places by using different art forms,
diversity of gastronomy, and new languages from various nationalities. That also
helps boost the country's economy and increase more job opportunities for people.
For instance, the 54 ethnic groups in Vietnam have attracted millions of visitors per
annum, reported by a recent survey. Additionally, living with people from diverse
region will enable us to become more understanding and tolerant. It leads to
building more open-mind societies which are based on respect and preserving
different cultural identities. As a result, they can access different customs and
beliefs in different cultures easily.
On the other hand, this trend could also be viewed as unfavourable. First of all,
ethnic minorities or migrants find it difficult to adjust, adapt to and can not
assimilate into the culture of other ethnic groups. Consequently, that will lead to
some problems in life and cause conflicts between ethnic groups. For example, if
people do not know the local language, it is more difficult for them to become a
part of the community and expand their view of the world. Second, specific sorts
of criminal cases have been on a rise in multicultural countries. Because of a lack
of education, lack of contact with the outside community, and poorer-wealthier
group gaps based on ethnicities are becoming more deteriorated. For example, in
New York, some ignorant ethnic groups may have thought that they are superior to

others, and as a result, they misjudge others from various cultural and religious
backgrounds and perpetrate hate crimes.


By way of conclusion, once again do I reaffirm my position that the
multicultural environment can have both favorable qualities and detrimental effects
on individuals and on the society.