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DEVELOPING SENTENCES: AVOIDING AND CORRECTING FRAGMENTS I
A
fragment
is a group of words that has been incorrectly punctuated as a
complete sentence. But a fragment is only
part
of a sentence.
EXAMPLES: Hatch in the spring.
(no subject)
The colorful hummingbird.
(no verb)
When the bird swoops and soars.
(incomplete thought)
A.
Write C for complete or F for fragment beside each item below.
1. _____ Each day hummingbirds drink twice
their weight in nectar.
2. _____ Fly to tropical climates for the winter.
3. _____ Attracted to the colorful flowers in
our yard.
4. _____ Did you know that hummingbirds
can be mean?
5. _____ Weigh about as much as a nickel.
6. _____ The tiny birds regularly explore
new habitats.
7. _____ Some species migrate 500 miles

from their summer home.
8. _____ Lay eggs the size of a pea.
B.
What does each fragment need to become a complete sentence?
Circle subject or verb.
1.
( SUBJECT
/
VERB ) Attack each other like little dive bombers.
2. ( SUBJECT
/
VERB ) Chicks in their nests on the tree branches.
3. ( SUBJECT
/
VERB ) Feeds the chicks with her four-inch bill.
4. ( SUBJECT
/
VERB ) Need to keep feeders out year around.
5. ( SUBJECT
/
VERB ) Can best be seen hovering at dusk.
CHALLENGE: On the back of this sheet, rewrite two fragments from Part B
as complete sentences. Underline the subject and verb.
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DEVELOPING SENTENCES: AVOIDING AND CORRECTING FRAGMENTS II
Fragments

are not complete thoughts. Most fragments are
missing either a subject or a verb.
A.
Each item below contains a fragment. Rearrange the
words (or change the punctuation) to make a complete
sentence. You may need to add or remove some words.
1. Thinking she might miss the bus. Jane hurried faster.
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2. She stumbled on the curb. Also dropped her books.
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3. Got on the bus. Jane saw her friend.
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4. When I travel by bus. Can read or sleep.
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5. Jane pulled the buzzer. As the bus approached her stop.
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B.
Rewrite each fragment below to make a complete sentence.
1. Boarded the tour bus carrying his heavy bags.
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2. Looking for an empty seat by the window.
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3. The woman sitting behind him snoring loudly.
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4. At the strange group of passengers getting off.
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5. Wondered why he liked riding buses so much.
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CHALLENGE: On the back of this sheet, write a complete sentence that asks
a question about public transportation. Then write a complete sentence

that answers the question.
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DEVELOPING SENTENCES: RUN-ONS I
A
run-on
is two separate sentences incorrectly written as if they are
one. Beware of this sentence error in your own writing!
EXAMPLES:
RUN-ON: The first moving pictures were in black and white
and had no sound, today’s films have come a long way.
C
ORRECT: The first moving pictures were in black and white
and had no sound. Today’s films have come a long way.
A.
Correct the following run-ons by writing separate
sentences. The first one has been done for you.
1. Willis O’Brien made a life-sized bust of King Kong it was a fearsome sight.
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2. The huge model was built of wood, wire, cloth, and metal it was covered
with 40 bearskins.
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3. Audiences screamed as King Kong descended upon New York they
believed he was real!
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B.
A second way to correct a run-on is to use a comma and a conjunction.
Correct these run-ons by adding a comma and one of these conjunctions:
and, or, for, but. The first one has been done for you.
1. King Kong was mechanical modern monsters move by complex electronics.
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2. Models contain sensors the technicians activate them by remote control.
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3. The operators can make the model monster look sad they can make it
look fierce.
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Willis O’Brien made a life-sized bust of King Kong.
It was a fearsome sight.
King Kong was mechanical, but modern monsters
move by complex electronics.
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DEVELOPING SENTENCES: RUN-ONS II
A.
Read the following paragraphs. Underline any run-ons you
find. Hint: In all, you should underline four word groups.
Bigfoot: Legend or Fact?
For over 150 years there have been sightings of

a mysterious creature known as Bigfoot. Reports of
the ape-like beast come from around the world they
seem to come mainly from Pacific Northwest forests.
According to observers, Bigfoot is 8 feet tall he appears
to weigh about 500 pounds. “He looked like a large human
being in a gorilla suit,” one hiker explained. Many people claim to
have spotted the creature itself others report seeing his giant footprints.
Researchers think Bigfoot travels at night. His diet, they believe,
consists of plants, small deer, mice, and fish. There has been, however,
no solid proof that Bigfoot exists. Did people really see a bear were their
eyes fooled by tree stumps or shadows? Was the sighting a prank? Is
Bigfoot a real being or just a legend?
B.
Correct each run-on you underlined in Part A. Rewrite the word group
as two complete sentences. Do this by adding a capital letter and an
end mark or by adding a comma and a conjunction.
1. ____________________________________________________________________
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2. ____________________________________________________________________
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3. ____________________________________________________________________
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4. ____________________________________________________________________
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CHALLENGE: On the back of this sheet, write a paragraph describing a strange
creature. It can be a creature you’ve read about, seen in a movie, or merely
imagined. Check your writing and correct any run-on sentences.
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DEVELOPING SENTENCES: PARALLEL ELEMENTS
If your shoes don’t match, people might think you’d made a mistake.
Just as shoes should match, elements, or parts, of a sentence should
match. They should be
parallel
in form.
EXAMPLES:
NONPARALLEL FORM (mismatched sentence parts): At work I like helping
customers, designing stock displays, and to solve problems.
P
ARALLEL FORM (parts match in form): At work I like helping customers,
designing stock displays, and solving problems.
O
R
:
At my job I like to help customers, design stock displays, and solve problems.
A.
Each of the following sentences ends with a group of similar ideas.
One idea in each group is expressed in a form that does not match
the others. Underline the idea whose form doesn’t match. The first
one has been done for you.
1. Karen thinks her friend Angie is (honest), (loyal), and
(
a humorous person).
2. The new puppy began its life in our house by (chewing the table legs),
(he barked all night), and (jumping on the furniture).
3. While the cat is away the mice will (play), (eat), and (be making a mess).
4. The students agree that their school should (be offering art classes),

(build a new gym), and (improve lunches).
B.
Correct the following sentences by writing the similar parts in parallel forms.
1. The cat scratched the burglar, and he was bitten by the dog.
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2. Great music and how good the decorations looked made the party a hit.
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CHALLENGE: Answer the following questions on the back of this sheet.
Express the elements of your sentences in parallel form.
1. What are three of the best (or worst) ways to spend a Saturday?
2. What are four qualities you look for in a friend?
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DEVELOPING SENTENCES: INVERTED SENTENCES
In an
inverted
sentence, the verb comes before the subject. When you write
an inverted sentence, you must be clear about whether the subject is
singular or plural. Remember that the subject and verb must agree.
EXAMPLES: On the grass were piles of leaves.
(Correct)
On the grass was piles of leaves.
(Incorrect)
A.
Circle the verb that correctly completes each sentence.

1. Enclosed ( is / are ) the directions to my house.
2. On the corner ( are / is ) a large supermarket.
3. Across the street ( is / are ) some apartment houses.
Some inverted sentences begin with an adverb such as
what
,
why
,
where
,
here
, or
there
. These adverbs are
not
the subject. The subject is a noun or
pronoun that appears later in the sentence.
B.
Underline the subject in each sentence.
1. Why don’t you go trick or treating on Halloween?
2. There are many reasons for staying at home.
3. Where is the bag of candy you bought?
4. Here comes another big group of children.
C.
Circle the verb that correctly completes each inverted sentence.
1. From our house ( come / comes ) eerie sounds to scare people.
2. There ( is / are ) the biggest pumpkins I’ve ever seen.
3. Why ( do / does ) some holidays seem more fun than others?
CHALLENGE: Write three inverted sentences on the back of this sheet.
Begin the first sentence with the word why. In the second sentence,

use a singular subject and verb. In the third sentence, use a plural
subject and verb.
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DEVELOPING SENTENCES: ACTIVE AND PASSIVE VERBS
Authors usually write in the
active voice
. That means the subject of the
sentence performs an action. When the action is done
to
the subject, the
verb is in the
passive voice
.
EXAMPLES: The animal trainer used a special collar to control the cheetah.
(active)
A special collar was used by the animal trainer
to control the cheetah.
(passive)
Active verbs carry a stronger, clearer message. Try
to write most of your sentences in the active voice.
Each sentence below has a passive verb.
Rewrite the sentences, using an active verb.
1. April 8, 1974, will never be forgotten by baseball fans.
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2. That night baseball history was made by Hank Aaron.
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3. Until then, the major league home run record had been held by Babe Ruth.
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4. The sign for a fast ball was given by the catcher.
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5. The ball was smacked hard by the mighty Aaron!
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6. The fence was cleared by the ball!
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7. A major moment in baseball history had just been witnessed!
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CHALLENGE: Improve the following paragraph by using active-voice verbs.
Rewrite the paragraph on the back of this sheet.
Many strong earthquakes have been suffered by Mexico. In 1985,
Mexico City was rocked by violent earth movements. Nearly ten thousand
people were killed by the quake. Even more homes and lives were taken
by fires after the earthquake. It is, however, a fact well-known by all
Mexicans that another big one could hit at any time.
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LAUGH OUT LOUD! MALAPROPISMS (LUDICROUS MISUSE OF WORDS)
As you read the following passage, notice the words written in italics.
All of these words have been misused, and some might just make you
laugh out loud! Draw a line through each word error. Then find the
correct word in the word box and write it above the crossed-out word.
Context clues and the sound of the word can help you.
accuse conceal crumbling evidence hovel
figment private condominium hesitation ideal

revolver satchel suspected detective
THE CONDO CAPER
Primate eye Mickey Malloy respected that Bosco
was the killer. Malloy could not, however, abuse
Bosco until he had some hard eminence. Malloy
went to Bosco’s pandemonium—a miserable shovel. He noticed
the plaster bumbling from the walls and thought, “These
cracks are an idle place to congeal a murder weapon!”
Without a moment’s hibernation, Malloy began ripping
away at the wall. Sure enough, there was the weapon—a
pearl-handled revolter. Malloy pulled the gun from its hiding
place and put it in his sandal.
Suddenly, there was a sound at the door. Malloy froze.
Could it be Bosco? Had the defective really heard something,
or was it just a pigment of his imagination?
CHALLENGE: Read the corrected paragraph one more time. Then use your
imagination to describe what comes through that condominium door! Try
to involve at least two senses (sight, smell, etc.) in your description, and
watch your word choices! Write your paragraph on the back of this sheet.
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DEVELOPING SENTENCES: REVIEW
fragment run-on non-parallel structure passive voice
A.
To complete the puzzle, match the clues with the words in the box above.
1.______ – ________________ __________________
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2. __ __ __ – __ __
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3. __ __ __ __ __ __ __ __
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4. __ __ __ __ __ __ __ __ __ __ __ __
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CLUES:
1. when parts of a
sentence do not
match in form
EXAMPLE: The mountain
shook, rumbled, and
was steaming before
the eruption.
2. two complete sentences
that are incorrectly
written and punctuated
as if they were one
sentence
EXAMPLE: The people left
the town they moved
inland to safety.
3. a word group that is incorrectly written
and punctuated as a complete sentence
EXAMPLE: The rumble of the lava within
the mountain.
4. when the action of the sentence is done
to the subject rather than by the subject
EXAMPLE: A warning was broadcast by all
the TV and radio stations.
B.
Each item below has a writing problem. Find the type of problem
listed in the box at the top of this sheet. Write the problem before the
sentence. Then improve the item by rewriting it on the back of this
sheet. The first one has been done for you.
PROBLEM

1. _________________ Most of North America was covered by sheets of ice.
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2. _________________ Moving ice fields, known as glaciers.
3. _________________ Glaciers picked up rocks, carried them hundreds of
miles, and were carving out valleys and lakes.
4. _________________ The climate of Earth warmed the glaciers melted.
Sheets of ice covered most of North America.
passive voice
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DEVELOPING PARAGRAPHS: STATING THE MAIN IDEA
The first sentence in a paragraph often states the main idea. We call this the
topic sentence
. All the details in the paragraph relate to the main idea.
A.
Underline the topic sentence that states the main idea of this paragraph.
The ancient Maya had some unusual ideas about beauty. They thought
that sloping foreheads were lovely, so they strapped cradle boards against
a baby’s forehead. Pressure from the boards molded the infant’s soft skull
bones almost to a point. The Maya also found crossed eyes attractive.
They would hang a bead from a lock of hair between a child’s eyes. As a
child focused on the dangling bead, its eyes would cross.
B.
Read each list of details. Then circle the letter of the sentence that best
states the main idea.
1. Details:
• Benito Pablo Juarez was born

in 1806.
• He came from a poor family and
worked hard to get an education.
• Juarez became the president of
Mexico in 1861 and again in 1867.
• He once said, “Let the people and
government respect the rights of all!”
Main idea:
a. Benito Pablo Juarez was one of Mexico’s greatest leaders.
b. Education is important for success.
c. Mexico has had many great leaders.
2. Details:
•
When we began our garage sale at 9:00 A.M.,
customers were lined up and waiting.
• By noon, all the biggest items had been
sold.
• We sold some things for more
than our asking price.
• By evening, we were exhausted,
but $600.00 richer!
Main idea:
a. There are many different ways to raise money.
b. Our garage sale was a huge success.
c. There are many good ways to spend $600.00.
CHALLENGE: The paragraph below is lacking a topic sentence. On the back of
this sheet, write a topic sentence that states the paragraph’s main idea.
Lola does her chores cheerfully. She has something good to say
about everybody—even our grouchy boss at Burger World. A smile
constantly lights her face.