Writing Task 2 Sample 9

Writing Task 2 - Sample 9: Education Cost (Band 8.5)

Topic: Educating children is expensive and in some countries the government
pays some or all of the costs. Do the advantages of the government paying for
children's education outweigh the disadvantages?
Investing in education is investing in human intellectual capital, which in turn is
vital to the creation of high-skilled workforce and the long-run development of a
nation, however the question arises as to who should pay for this. To be more
specific, should the government subsidise some or all of the costs or should we
leave the cost to be funded privately?
Some people claim that partial or completely subsidised primary and secondary
school education, if it is entirely funded by the government, may diminish the
incentive for students to strive harder. However this is not the case, as low cost or
free education in fact offers significant opportunities for children from low-socioeconomic groups or from rural areas, whom might not have access to academic
schooling otherwise. There are numerous benefits stemming from this, namely
bridging the gap between urban and rural areas, the rich and the poor, along with
bringing more equal opportunities for people and creating a larger more highly
qualified workforce for our society.
On the other hand, there are some that allege that government subsidised public
schools tend to be of poorer quality, both in facilities and teaching staff compared
to private schools, and that they may suffer to a greater extent in an economic
downturn, when the government needs to cut spending. This argument becomes
quite lacking in the face of evidence of a consistently good level of quality public
education in many countries over long periods of time. Although private education
may provide a better educational environment on the whole, people still have the


freedom of choice, from both tiers of private and public schooling, based on their
finances and the type of education they need for their children.
Taking all the views above into consideration, publicly funded education has
overwhelming advantages as it makes learning available to the more disadvantaged

groups in our society, hence contributing to equality of opportunities and
utilisation of human resources in an economy. Therefore, it can be argued that the
cost is justified in the light of present and future benefits.