2009 essay example for leanning english

Scoring Guide for Long Writing Topic Development
Section VI Opinion Question 1

Code
50


Scoring Guide for Long Writing Topic Development
Section VI Opinion Question 1

Annotation:
A clear and consistent opinion is developed with sufficient specific supporting details (each
paragraph is developed with specific details and this is explained in the first paragraph). The
organization is logical (First of all…Secondly, along with experience…Finally…In conclusion).


Scoring Guide for Long Writing Topic Development
Section VI Opinion Question 1

Code
60


Scoring Guide for Long Writing Topic Development
Section VI Opinion Question 1

Annotation:
A clear and consistent opinion is developed with sufficient specific supporting details that are
thoughtfully chosen (movie, out to dinner with a friend, certain type of clothing, a more
expensive brand). The organization is coherent, demonstrating a thoughtful progression of
ideas in each paragraph and in written work as a whole, with each paragraph building on the

preceding one.