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Halsey Intermediate School 296
New York City Dept. of Education
Brooklyn, New York

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Sarasota, Florida

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McFarland Unified School District Newcomer School
Ontario, California
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Bedichek Middle School
Austin, Texas


Barbara Ishida

Gary Bechtold
New Boston Pilot Middle School
Dorchester, Massachusetts

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Palm Beach Central High School
Wellington, Florida

Maria Celis

Barbara M. Linde

Lamar High School
Houston, Texas

YorkTown, Virginia

Downey High School
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North Plainfield High School
North Plainfield, New Jersey
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Franklin High School
Seattle, Washington
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Western Middle School
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2 Describe Your

'III
Informational
an
survey
informational
Writing

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Descriptive Writing:

page
t-amlly
13 anu riome

- Spatial Order:

』.

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Practice Pages
Units 1 & 2

sentences and proper
Capitalization:
nouns
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-seniejices
Group Writing

page 25

page 25

3 Explain How to Do

Technical Writing:

Sequential Order:

Punctuation:

Something

a recipe poster

organize using
sequence words

using end punctuation


Expository Writing:
a celebration poster

Order of Importance:
organize by priority

Sentence Combining:
using signal and
connecting words

page 27
4 Write about a

Holiday or Celebration
page 39
Practice Pages

Group Writing

Units 3 & 4

page 51

page 51
5 Persuade Your

Classmates

Persuasive Writing:
a persuasive paragraph


page 53
6 Describe a Favorite

Descriptive Writing:

Place

a descriptive paragraph

Main Idea and Details:
organize by connecting
to main idea
General to Specific:
organize by level

Paragraphs: writing a good
paragraph
Spelling:
correcting spelling errors

of detail

page 65
Practice Pages
Units 5 & 6

Group Writing

page 77


page 77

7 Write a Message to

Writing a Friendly

Letter Form:

a Friend

Letter or E-mail: a message

page 渺

about last weekend

organize the parts of
a letter

8 Invite People to
an Event

Writing a Formal

page 91

Letter:
a formal invitation


Practice Pages

Chronological Order:
organize by time

Style:
mailing addresses
Planning:
form, audience, topic,

purpose
Group Writing

Units 7 & 8

page 103

page 103
9 Tell a Story

Personal Narrative: tell a

page 105

story about a trip you took

10 Summarize

Information


Writing a Summary:
read a story and write

page 117

a short summary

Practice Pages

Units 9 & 10
page 129

lv Table of Contents

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Group Writing
page 129

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statements with be

searching the Internet

' adjectives
. numbers 1 to 20


subject pronouns

with keywords

' simple present tense

' home and family
(singular/plural)
' adjectives
● action verbs

citing Internet sources

. have/has
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' possessive form
Timed Writing

Self-Check

page 26

page 26

foods
action verbs

imperative statements
count and noncount nouns


. celebration words
· months and ordinal numbers
' countries and nationalities

' wh- questions and answers
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page 52

things in a neighborhood

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sensory adjectives

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' object pronouns
· adverbs

. activities

expanding a keyword
search
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Timed Writing

page 52

' descriptive adjectives
' location phrases

narrowing a keyword
search

finding maps online

comparing online
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Timed Writing

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page 78
simple past tense with regular verbs
simple past tense with be and have

' days of the week
· free-time activities

sending an electronic
message

' time expressions

' feelings and moods
. event words

' future tense with be going to
' formal requests and invitations

' time expressions

finding local events

' comparative adjectives
Self-Check

Timed Writing
page 104
' travel and transportation words
● syn onyms and antonyms for
adj ectives
Life events

page 104
Simple past tense of irregular verbs
wh- questions with the past tense
review of simple verb tenses
review of subject-verb agreement

tam ily
Timed Writing
page 130


finding specific Information

finding Reliable Sources
Self-Check

page 130

Table of Contents V




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numbers 1 to 20

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Francisco's School
Francisco Garcia is a student. He is fifteen years old.
He is from Los Angeles, California. Mrs. Moore is his
English teacher. Mrs. Moore is a good teacher. She is
kind and friendly. Francisco and Mrs. Moore are in the
classroom now. They are in an English class. They are
busy. Francisco is at a desk. Mrs. Moore is not at a desk.
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English class

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board

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They are in an English class.

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student

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The classroom is in a large building.

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3. Francisco and Mrs. Moore are in an

4. Francisco and Mrs. Moore are in the
now.


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6. Francisco is at a
The classroom is in a large -



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four

nineteen

six

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eleven


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seven

ten

twenty

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nine

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Negative

Francisco is a student.

Mrs. Moore is not a student.

Francisco and Mrs. Moore are in English class.

Francisco and Mrs. Moore are not in Spanish class.

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aren't = are not

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Francisco Garcia (1) -- 'S-- a student. He (2) - titteen years 01G. i-ie

(。) -

from Los Angeles, California. Mrs. Moore (4) - his English teacher. Mrs. Moore
(5) - a good teacher. She (6) - kind and friendly. Francisco and Mrs. Moore
(7) - in the classroom now. They (8) - in an English class. They (9) busy. Francisco (10) - at a desk. Mrs. Moore (11) - not at a desk. She
(12) - at the board. The classroom (13) - not a big room. It (14) - a

small room. It (15) - clean and colorful. The classroom (16) - in a large
building.

Unit 1 Give Information about Yourself 5


Name / Nour

Subject Pronoun

He is a student.

Francisco is a student.

Mrs. Moore is a teacher.
Francisco and Mrs. Moore are busy.
The building is large.

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She is a teacher.
They are busy.
It is large.

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and affirmative sentences. Use a contraction and a subject
pronoun in the second sentence.

1 . Francisco is a teacher.
Francisco is not a teacher. He's


。 student.

2. Francisco is nineteen years old.

3. Mrs. Moore is a bad teacher.

4. Francisco and Mrs. Moore are in a Spanish class.

5. Francisco is at the board.

6. Mrs. Moore is at a desk.

7. The classroom is a big room.

8. Francisco and Mrs. Moore are in a small building.

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.

about Mrs. Moore. Some

information is about the
classroom.

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about each topic in the chart.
Francisco
Francisco Garcia is

。 student.

Mrs. Moore

Classroom

Mrs. Moore is an En 뎨 i sh

The classroom is not

teacher.

room.


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Rewrite the information. Capitalize the correct words.

francisco's school
francisco garcia is a student. he is fifteen years

old. he is from los angeles, california. mrs. moore is

He is fifteen years old.
' names of people and places
Mrs. Moore is from California.
' languages
They are in English class.
' important words in titles
The title of this book is Step-

by-Step Writing.

his english teacher. mrs. moore is a good teacher. she

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the classroom now. they are in an english class, they
are busy. francisco is at a desk. mrs. moore is not at a
desk. she is at the board. the classroom is not a big
room. it is a small room. it is clean and colorful, the

classroom is in a large building.

Francisco Garcia is a stuc1en1. He is ,

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Unit I Give Information about Yourself 7


Informational Writing
Informational



gives information about a topic.

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examples of informational writing.

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My School
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Shi-Mei

First Name: (1) _,

Last Name: (2)

name: (3)

Age: (4)
City/State:

English

_


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Teacher: (6)

Tea(her DeSC ription:

Scho이 Name:

(7)

(8)



Scho이 Address: (9)

Scho이 Desc ription:

(10)



Unit I Give Information about Yourself 9


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Purpose: Give Information about Yourself

WRITING PROMPT

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Fil- out your own informational survey.
Give information about yourself, your
English teacher, and your school.
Describe your English teacher and





I read the prompt carefully.

I understood what the prompt
asks me to do.

your scho 이.

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Look at Shi-Mei's information notes. Think about the information you need for your
informational survey. Write notes for your survey.

S hi-Mel's lnformaiion Notes
Name: Shi-Mel LA/el

Nickname: May
English Teacher: Mr. Alvarez
Pescription: kind? funny?


School Address: 5rooklyn. (What street 긴
School Pescr 槍 tion: ???

STEP 2 Organize
Look at Shi-Mei's information organizer. Categorize your notes into topics. Copy the chart or
make one on a computer. Complete the organizer with information about you, your teacher,

and your scho 이.
S hi-Mel's Information Organizer
me

thy teacher

my school

shi-Mel wei

M ㄷ 시 vs rez

Everton

76

kind and .

7히 North Avenue

5rooklyn,


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D Practice. Look at Shi-Mei's first draft. How can she improve it? Answer the questions.

s hi-MeiS Hrst WafD
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First Name:

.

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Lβs 右 Name:(2)?
Nicknanie:

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(5) New York

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Ieacher 〃escription: 。: 171g ai-i 材 djean

Ei-iglish Ieacher: (6)

-

Shi-Mei move to answer 2?

School Nanie:
School Aclelress:
School
Lescription:
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A Shi-Mei

-

(&) Everlot-i High School

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76


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BMei

exchange?

A 7 and 10
B 8 and 9

C 8 and 10
D 9 and 10

OWei
D May

2. What information is missing in answer 5?

4. What information in answer 9 is incorrect?

A Wei,

B Everton,

D


A 166
B North Avenue

C School,

C Brooklyn

D Brooklyn,

D New York

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Draft. Write a first draft for your informational
survey. Use your notes from Steps 1 and 2.

디 My information is correct.

Revise. Read your first draft. How can you improve it?

Look at the revision checklist. Revise your writing.

U My information is in the correct
place.
디 ㅣ included information about me,

my teacher, and my school.

디 - described my teacher and my

scho 이.



Unit 1 Give Information about Yourself 1 1


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at the sentences. Choose the best substitute for the underlined words. If
correct, choose "Make no change."

4. Pedro and Martin is nice and kind.

1. Mr. Jones is 뜨 English teacher
A English teacher
B an English teacher
C a teacher English

A Pedro and Martin are
B Pedro and Martin is not
C They is

D Make no change.

D Make no change.

2. Jennifer is c 으1으rful.

5. Mr. lee is from Dallas, texas.

A student
B kind

A Mr. lee is from Dallas, Texas.
B Mr. Lee is from Dallas, texas.
C Mr. Lee is from Dallas, Texas.
D Make no change.


C teacher
D Make no change.

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nice.
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CHis

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editing checklist. Edit your writing.

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about the draft. Look at the

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used articles, numbers, and
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Rewrite your informational survey in your best handwriting
or on a computer. Look at Shi-Mei's information survey on
page 9 for ideas. Add a photograph or drawing if you
want. Present your informational survey to the class.



口I


pronouns correctly
used correct spelling,

punctuation, and

capitalization

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Write down the school address. Do this for three schools.
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Francisco's Family

and Maria's bedroom. They aren't big bedrooms. They are
small. They are clean and comfortable. The Garcia family is
very happy in their home.


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use sentences T rom tne reaaing.

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Francisco and his family live at 145 Oak Street in
Los Angeles, California. They do not live in a house. They
have a nice apartment. Their apartment has three bedrooms, a
living room, a kitchen, and a bathroom. Mr. and Mrs. Garcia's
bedroom is next to the living room. Maria's bedroom is next
to their room. Francisco's bedroom is across from Maria's
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work. They go to Oak Street School. They are good students.
They study every day. After school, Francisco plays baseball.
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are Berta and Miguel. Francisco does not have a brother.
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