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Writing task 2: ESSAYS
1. Template viết bài bài dạng"Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" (Trích xuất
từ IELTS Simon ).
Introduction: It is true that _(giới thiệu topic)__. While I accept that ___ can sometimes have a
positive effect on the user, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.
Body I: On the one hand, ___ is beneficial in some ways. Firstly,…Secondly,…Finally.
Body II However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks.
Firstly,…Secondly,…Finally…
Conclusion: In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of ___ are more significant
than the possible benefits.
Ví dụ áp dụng:
TOPIC: Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool.
Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play
them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
ANSWER:
It is true that many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I
accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe that they are
more likely to have a harmful impact.
On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Firstly, users, or gamers,
are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-life
pastimes. From an educational perspective, these games encourage imagination and creativity, as
well as concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside
the gaming context. Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve
users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such as flying a plane.
However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Gaming can be
highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep
them playing. Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a
game or to get a higher score than their friends. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from
lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the

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computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sedentary
lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming addiction.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant
than the possible benefits.
(Written by Simon Ielts Examiner, 258 words, band 9)
2. Template viết bài dạng "What are the advantages and the disadvantages?"
Introduction: It is true that __(giới thiệu topic)__. This essay will shed some light on the merits and
demerits of this prevailing trend.
Body I:.Benefits arising from ( topic) are tangible Firstly,…Secondly,…Finally.
Body II However, the drawbacks of XXX are numerous. Firstly,…Secondly,…Finally…
Conclusion: From the points enlisted above, XXX could be both benefited and detrimentally affected.
In my opinion, I think
Ví dụ áp dụng:
TOPIC: The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language
in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken
globally.
What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?
ANSWER
It is true that the rapid growth of tourism has made English become the most popular language in
the world today, potentially leading to the eventual disappearance of other languages. This essay will
shed some light on the merits and demerits of this prevailing trend.
Benefits arising from having one global language are tangible. It would aid greater understanding
among countries, which would promote learning, the flow of information and ideas. For instance,
with all people speaking the same language, anyone wanting to study and work abroad does not need
to worry about language barriers and culture misunderstanding anymore. Doctors, economists and
scientists could effortlessly understand difficult English terms in their field, hopefully resulting in
new inventions, technological advances or even healthier world economy. Moreover, individuals
would have great opportunities to expand their social networks by making friend with people all over

the world.
Despite the positive aspects, its downsides also persist. Firstly, nobody could deny that language
is an essential part of every culture; if a language disappear, a whole way of life may disappear with

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it. The ubiquitous spread of English could be the culprit of the loss of cultural diversity. Secondly, it
would result in the collapse of tourism because hardly would people have interest in travel for pleasure
if all countries had the same language and similar cultures, thereby affecting negatively many
countries’ economies which rely on tourism as a source of income.
From the points enlisted above, having one language worldwide could be both benefited and
detrimentally affected. I strongly believe that preserving local languages is an admirable objective
because it plays a vital role in our cultural heritage.
3. Template viết bài dạng "Do you agree or disagree?" “What is your opinion?”
3.1. Cách viết thứ nhất: Hoàn toàn đồng ý/ Hoàn toàn không đồng ý
Introduction: These days, it is true that (giới thiệu topic) While some may argue that…, I completely
agree/disagree with the idea/ think that…
Body 1: (First reason)
Body 2: (Second reason)
Conclusion: In conclusion, I fully support/oppose with the view that (paraphrase the given idea)
Ví dụ áp dụng:
TOPIC: When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is
pointless to try and keep them alive. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
ANSWER
These days, it is true that the technological revolution and their rapid and wide applications are
having a great influence on a nation’s traditional skills and ways of life. While some argue that it
is pointless to preserve conventional skills and custom values, I completely think that protecting
connections with our past is an admirable objective and we all have responsibilities to do this.
First of all, I agree that with the development of technology, people could work together from long

distances by using state-of-the-art devices. However, there are some traditional views and values
which we should not cancel, especially in today’s competitive job market like working hard, doing
one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional
are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into
contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat
others with respect.
Furthermore, although the technology is developing rapidly, the traditional skill used products are
still having a high position in the marketing field. For example, France perfumes gain a huge

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popularity all over the world, making a huge money for this country. Many foreign tourists come to
Hoi An ancient town, Vietnam to buy handmade clothes, shoes and cards, proving that traditional
products still stand up till now.
In conclusion, I fully oppose to the view that traditional skills and lifestyles should not exist, and
I believe that we should do everything to protect them.
2.2 Cách viết balanced: Đồng ý/ Phản đối một nửa
Introduction: It is true that/ it is sometimes argued that ___. While I agree that ____, I believe that
Body 1: On the one hand, I agree that ____ (support the statement)__.
Body 2: On the other hand, I believe that __(give examples or arguments to point out that the
statement is wrong)___.
Conclusion: In conclusion, while_(restate the statement)___, I do not believe that___(you reject
the statement in some cases)__.
Ví dụ áp dụng:
TOPIC: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent
do you agree or disagree?
ANSWER:
It is true that many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. Personally, I
disagree with the idea that money is the key consideration when deciding on a career, because I

believe that other factors are equally important.
On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs. For
example, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. Most people
consider it a priority to at least earn a salary that allows them to cover these needs and have a
reasonable quality of life. If people chose their jobs based on enjoyment or other non-financial factors,
they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for
choosing a career path that they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money to
live comfortably and raise a family.
On the other hand, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in our
jobs. Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely important when
choosing a job. Having a good manager or friendly colleagues, for example, can make a huge
difference to workers’ levels of happiness and general quality of life. Secondly, many people’s
feelings of job satisfaction come from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the

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position they reach, rather than the money they earn. Finally, some people choose a career because
they want to help others and contribute something positive to society.
In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect people’s choice of profession, I do not believe that
money outweighs all other motivators.
(Written by Simon Ielts Examiner 275 words, band 9)
4. Template viết dạng bài "What are the effects? What are the solutions"
Introduction: It is true that (giới thiệu topic). Although there will undoubtedly be some negative
consequences of this trend, XXX can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
Body 1: As ___(something happens)___, several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue
is that ___. Furthermore, ____
Body 2: There are several actions that XXX could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly.
Secondly. Finally.
Conclusion: In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to

arise as __(something happens)___.
Ví dụ:
TOPIC: In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause
for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing
populations.
ANSWER:
It is true that people in industrialized nations can expect to live longer than ever before. Although
there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to
mitigate these potential problems.
As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older, several related
problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that there will obviously be more people of
retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of younger, working adults
will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of
the population. In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for working
adults. Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare, and the fact young adults
will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives.
There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above.
Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from

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65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working
life. A second measure would be for governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the
number of working adults who pay taxes. Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken
from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising
numbers of older citizens.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as
the populations of countries grow older.
(Written by Simon Ielts Examiner ,265 words, band 9)

5. Template viết bài dạng "What are the reasons? What are the sollutions".
Introduction: These days, A has become a hot issue discussed everywhere because it has haunted
human beings and caused detrimental effects on XXX. This essay will investigate the underlying
causes and offer some practical measures to address the problem.
Body 1: There are several reasons why this is the case. The main culprit is that ___. Furthermore,
Body 2: There are several actions that XXX could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly.
Secondly. Finally
Conclusion: In conclusion, there are many reasons making A a headache for human beings in the
modern society, I believe that we can join hands to lessen the harmful consequences.
6. Template viết bài dạng "discuss both views and give your opinion".
Introduction: It is true that ...(giới thiệu topic)... While it can be argued that ...(view A)..., I believe
that ...(view B)....
Body 1: There are several reasons why (view A)... Firstly. Secondly. Finally.
Body II: Despite the above arguments, I believe that ... (view B)...
Conclusion, In conclusion...(view A)..., but ...(view B).
Ví dụ áp dụng:
TOPIC: Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small
numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these
languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
ANSWER:

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It is true that some minority languages may disappear in the near future. Although it can be argued
that governments could save money by allowing this to happen, I believe that these languages should
be protected and preserved.
There are several reasons why saving minority languages could be seen as a waste of money. Firstly,
if a language is only spoken by a small number of people, expensive education programmes will be

needed to make sure that more people learn it, and the state will have to pay for facilities, teachers
and marketing. This money might be better spent on other public services. Secondly, it would be
much cheaper and more efficient for countries to have just one language. Governments could cut all
kinds of costs related to communicating with each minority group.
Despite the above arguments, I believe that governments should try to preserve languages that are
less widely spoken. A language is much more than simply a means of communication; it has a vital
connection with the cultural identity of the people who speak it. If a language disappears, a whole
way of life will disappear with it, and we will lose the rich cultural diversity that makes societies
more interesting. By spending money to protect minority languages, governments can also preserve
traditions, customs and behaviours that are part of a country’s history.
In conclusion, it may save money in the short term if we allow minority languages to disappear, but
in the long term this would have an extremely negative impact on our cultural heritage.
( Written by Simon Ielts Examiner, Band 9)

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The most common mistakes in IELTS Writing
Using contractions (for example ‘I don’t think’ or ‘We can’t say ) instead of the full form (‘I
do not think’ or ‘we cannot say.’) Never use contractions in academic writing.
Writing too few words. If you write much less than the required word count, the examiner has to
reduce your score, even if your essay is good quality. You should count the number of words in your
essay after each paragraph and keep a continuous total; this way, you can be sure of reaching at least
250 words in 40 minutes.
Writing too many words. The examiner is paid to mark on an ‘essay per hour basis,’ and so will not
read the end of an essay if it exceeds the minimum word count by more than about 100 words. This
means he or she will not see the end of your argument, and your score will reduce considerably.
Remember: 250 words minimum, and about 350 words maximum in Academic Task 2 writing.
Having handwriting that is difficult to read. IELTS is still a handwritten exam, and the examiners
will not spend time trying to understand your writing. You must make sure that your handwriting can

be read quickly. You should focus on writing clearly when you do your practice essays. Ask friends
or other students to give you an honest opinion about whether your writing is easy to read.
Using informal words (for example ‘a nice idea’ or ‘a silly thing to do’) instead of academic words
(for example ‘a positive idea’ or ‘a regrettable thing to do.’) Remember that academic vocabulary is
different from the language you would use in English when talking to friends.
Giving personal opinion in an IDEAS type Task. Check if the Task is asking for your opinion or
not. The first question you should ask yourself is ‘Is this an OPINION or an IDEAS Task?’
Telling stories about your personal history, friends or family. The Task tells you to use ‘examples
from your own experience,’ but this does not mean describing stories from your life or people you
know! It means describing examples of things in the world that you know about, have studied or have
learned about in the media.
Giving evidence which is too detailed or specific to a subject. You may be an expert in a particular
social or scientific field, but the examiner probably has a different specialty. You need to make your
ideas and examples accessible to a general reader. For example, if the Task topic is about money and
you are an accountant, do not use specialized accounting terms.
Being emotional or too dramatic when giving your opinion in an OPINION Task. You may feel
strongly about issues such as animals or crime, but academic writing must be unemotional. So avoid
phrases such as ‘a disgusting idea’ or ‘I detest this concept.’ It is much better to say ‘an unacceptable

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idea’ or ‘I disapprove of this concept,’ which is more impersonal and academic; similar to the type
of writing that people use in business reports or university essays.
Not following the basic structures presented in this book. The examiners want to see a clear, wellstructured essay that is easy to read. They are accustomed to seeing the structures we have presented
in this book, and they will feel more positive about your essay if they can recognize these structures
in what you write. Give the examiners what they want, and they will reward you with a high score,
even if there are some grammatical mistakes in your English.
(IELTS Cambridge Consultants)

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