Writing paragraph: One child or more than two children is better?

One Child Is Good – Right or Wrong?
Nowadays, many people believe that each family should have only
one child; however, from my perspective, I am of the opinion that having
more children is better for many reasons. First, having only a child may be
dangerous. If there is only a child in the family and parents do not have
appropriate education methods, they easily overprotect the child and he or
she can be spoiled. The child often takes everything for granted and then,
they gradually do not obey and respect their parents anymore. Besides, it is
recommended that a child should have one or more siblings. The children
cannot be autistic.(why?) Due to being the same generation, they easily
understand and trust each other, so they can share their feelings, secrets, or
something that is difficult to tell the parents. Finally, the more children a
family has, the more burden they can share with their parents. Children can
be effective assistants of their parents in doing household chores. This not
only gives them some basic skills for the future life, but also teaches them
how to live responsibly. My aunt’s family is an example. They did not let
their unique son do anything when he was young. Therefore, until now
when he is 16, he doesn’t know how to sweep a house or wash his own
clothes. In conclusion, it is suggested that a family should have two or more
children for these mentioned reasons. There is no denying the fact that
having one child is bad, but having more children is definitely good for not
only themselves but also their family.
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