WRITING PORTFORLIO WRITING SKILL 3 topic 1 module 2 one of the most important events in your life

HANOI UNIVERSITY OF INDUSTR
FACULTY OF FOREIGN LANGUAGES

WRITING PORTFORLIO
WRITING SKILL 3
Class: NNA3B
Student’s name: Ph ạm Mạnh Cường
Student code: 2020606653
Teacher’s name: Ms. Dinh Ngoc

Hanoi, 2021


Topic 1 Module 2: : One of the most important events in your life
Outline:
Introduction:
Hook: A superbly crucial event is a neccessity in our life.
Background information: At the end of grade 12, I had an intensely essential entrance
exam.
Thesis statement: I had distracted from studying and had a big problem.
Body:
Topic: Grade 12 was a meaningful year for me, but I was just letting it go for a while and
getting into a real trouble
Setting: At the first semester of grade 12, I truly did not concentrate on my learning
course and played a lot.
Climax: At the end of that semester, when I received my final result of the test, I was
completely stressful and worried. Consequently, I fightened and scared to be failed in my
entrance exam.
Solution: I was determined to learn everything again in such a thoroughly short time and
also trying to make use of my friends assistances.
Conclusion: Luckily, I had passed my entrance exam with a really high score. After this

event, I realized that everything happened in a abosolutely hard way. If you did not care
much about it, you would be a failure.
‘Ver 1:
A superbly crucial event is a neccessity in our life. At the end of grade 12, I had an
intensely essential entrance exam. I had distracted from studying and had a big problem.
Grade 12 was a meaningful year for me, but I was just letting it go for a while and getting
into a real trouble. Grade 12 was a meaningful year for me, but I was just letting it go for
a while and getting into a real trouble. Because I did not realize how important my study
was, I had just ignored what my teachers adviced and what my parents said and played.
At the end of that semester, when I received my final result of the test, I was completely
stressful and worried. Consequently, I fightened and scared to be failed in my entrance
exam. For this reason, I was determined to learn everything again in such a thoroughly
short time and also trying to make use of my friends assistances. In such a short time, I
noticably seen my improvements through my effort. As a result, at my second test, I had
got a reall good result which was made a suprise achievement in my entrance exam.
Luckily, I had passed my entrance exam with a really high score. After this event, I
realized that everything happened in a abosolutely hard way. If you did not care much
about it, you would be a failure. So taking care anything or you waste lots of time.


CHECKLIST
Questions

Answers

Suggested
correction

1

Does the essay havethree
Yes
paragraphs?
Yes
2
Does the introduction include the
hook, background information and
thesis statement?
Yes
3
Does the body contain enough
background information and specific
details? Do they support the topic
sentence of the body paragraph?
4
Does the body include the topic
Yes. It is: “Grade 12 was a
sentence? Which one?
meaningful year for me, but I
was just letting it go for a
while and getting into a real
trouble”
5 Does the essay include time adverbs
and subordinating conjunctions?
6
Are all the verbs in the correct
forms?
7 Does the conclusion explain what
you learned from the experience?

Yes
Yes
Yes

Ver 2:
When it comes to a crucial event of my life, my entrance exams suddenly springs to
mind. To this day, I still remember vividly that at the end of my grade 12 I had the
entrance exams to offer a place at university. I had distracted from learning and gotten
into a immensely big trouble.
Grade 12 is absolutely important and meaningful to everyone to decide whether keeping
motivating or not. I did not exception previously, but I had left things behind and done
whatever I wanted. I had just ignored what my teacher adviced and what my parents said
as I did not realize how important learning was. Then at the very end of the first semester,


without any sustained effort, I received my dreadful results which was utterly deserted.
Consequently, I started to feel frighten and scared to be a failure in the last final tests or
the entrance exams. At the same time I deeply understood the idiom “ No pain no cure “
and decided to try all over again. In such a thoroughly short time, I emphasized on
praticing the knowledge by doing the test as much as possible and also learned more
deeply over what I was learned. Noticeably, I seen my improvement constantly. After a
couple of months, I finally did the entrance exams and what I acquired was literally
astonishing.
Luckily, I had realized the matter early enough to start a sustained effort. And finally I
had passed and offered a place at a reputable university – Ha Noi University of Industry.
Through the event, I obtained a substantial lesson by all means about the effort.
Everything is born to let me down if I do not find the way to overcome, I will be a failure.
Taking care or wasting your time meaningless
Topic 2 Module 2: My most memorable memory.
Outline:

Introduction:
Hook: Having a prodigious vacation at least once before leaving everything behind or
your life will be boring.
Background knowledge: I had a gripping trip to HCM city with my lovely family.
Thesis: A hideous issue happened.
Body:
Topic sentence: I was astonished and ecstatic as soon as I knew that I would have a trip to
Ho Chi Minh city.
Descriptive details: + Was picked up late
+ Flight deferred
+ Arrived on time
Conclusion: I was definitely scared of being late and missed the flight at such an
appalling moment. On the other hand, it will always in my memorable memory that I
never forget.

Ver 1


Narrative essay
Having a prodigious vacation at least once before leaving everything behind or your life
will be boring. Last summer vacation, I had a gripping trip to Ho Chi Minh city with my
lovely family. Conversely, a hideous issue happened then.
I was astonished and ecstatic as soon as I knew that I would have a trip to Ho Chi Minh
city. Consequently, I prepared lots of things carefully for it. Everything would be brilliant
if a hideous issue did not happen. On the day I went, the driver who picked me up to the
airport was 30 minutes late. Luckily, my flight was deferred about an hour due to the bad
weather. For this reason, I still arrived at the airport on time for the flight. It took me
about two hours to get to Ho Chi Minh city. When I got there, I was extremely stunned by
the vibrant scenery. Indeed, Ho Chi Minh City always has a profound effect on me, so I
really enjoyed the trip.

I was definitely scared of being late and missed the flight at such an appalling moment.
On the other hand, it will always in my memorable memory that I never forget.

CHECKLIST
Questions
1
2

3

4

Does the essay have three
paragraphs?
Does the introduction include
the hook, background
information and thesis
statement?

Answers

Suggested
correction

Yes
Yes

Does the body contain enough yes
background information and
specific details? Do they

support the topic sentence of
the body paragraph?
Does the body include the topic Yes,
sentence? Which one?
Topic sentence: “I
was astonished
and ecstatic as
soon as I knew
that I would have

The hook is ok,
but i think it
should be a
question to
make this
information
more attractive.


5

6

Does the essay include time
adverbs and subordinating
conjunctions?
Are all the verbs in the correct
forms?

a trip to Ho Chi

Minh city”
yes

yes

Ver 2:
It is widely known that having a prodigious vacation at least once before leaving
everything behind or you life will be boring. Last summer vacation, I had a gripping trip
to Ho Chi Minh city with my lovely family. Conversely, a hideous issue happened then.
I was extremely astonished and ecstatic as soon as I knew that I would have a trip to Ho
Chi Minh city. As nothing more than a consequence, I meticulously prepared several
things for it. Everything would be perfect if a heinous incident did not occur. The driver
that picked me up from the airport was 30 minutes late on the day I traveled. Luckily, my
flight was deferred about an hour due to the bad weather. Hence, I got at the airport on
time for my trip. By aircraft, it took me roughly two hours to reach to Ho Chi Minh City.
When I got there, I was extremely stunned by the vibrant scenery. Indeed, Ho Chi Minh
City always has a profound effect on me, so I really enjoyed the trip.
I was definitely scared of being late and missed the flight at such an appalling moment.
On the other hand, it will always in my memorable memory that I never forget.
Ver 3:
There is a saying goes a prodigious vacation at least once before leaving everything
behind or your life will be boring. That was the reason why I had a gripping trip to Ho
Chi Minh city with my lovely family. Conversely, a hideous issue happened then.
I was extremely astonished and ecstatic as soon as I knew that I would have a trip to Ho
Chi Minh city. As nothing more than a consequence, I meticulously prepared several
things for it. Everything would be perfect if a heinous incident did not occur. The driver
that picked me up from the airport was 30 minutes late on the day I traveled. Luckily, my
flight was deferred about an hour due to the bad weather. Hence, I got at the airport on
time for my trip. By aircraft, it took me roughly two hours to reach to Ho Chi Minh City.
I was absolutely gobsmacked by the vivid surroundings when I arrived. Indeed, Ho Chi

Minh City always has a profound effect on me, so I really enjoyed the trip.
I was definitely scared of being late and missed my flight at such an appalling moment.
On the other hand, it will always in my memorable memory that I never forget.


Outline
Topic 3 module 2: A misunderstanding between you and your friend?
Introduction:
Hook: Have you ever had a misunderstanding between you and your best friend?
Background information: In my best friend’s 18th birthday party, I wanted to make a
surprise for her, but things didn’t like I thought
Thesis statement: I definitely make a big mistake
Body:
Topic sentence: 23/04/2020 was my best friend’s 18th birthday, which was really
meaningful with me, so I decided to astonish her.
Descriptive details: + Planned what I should do
+ Explained with my friends
+ Prepared things
+ Made mistake
Conclusion: After such a horrible experience, my relationship with my bestfriend
absolutely is being gone on. Conversely, with this experience I could know that
everything should be prepared carefully. A small mistake makes a big misunderstanding
between us.
Ver: 1
Have you ever had a misunderstanding between you and your best friend? At my best
friend's 18th birthday party, I honestly wanted to make a surprise for her, but things did
not happen as I thought. I definitely made a terrible mistake.
April 24th, 2020, was my best friend's 18th birthday, which was thoroughly meaningful
to me, so I decided to do something to astonish her. Before her birthday party happened, I
had planned a couple of weeks to surprise her. Consequently, I explained my intention to

my friend to prepare carefully. Thinking about what I ought to do first was
unquestionably a hard portion of my intention. Besides, I altogether finished it without
any mistakes. Things would happen directly and superbly if I did not lie to her that I had
to go to another party. Since I needed to take the birthday cake from another position, I
had to lie to her. As a result, she was immensely sad and disappointed due to waiting too
long for such an important event. And her best friend did not come and share with her
happiness. Luckily, I got there after beginning a couple of minutes. She went to me,
hugged and complained if I did not make things complicated. Apart from her tear, I saw
the happiness in her eyes as the most incredible moments in my life.


After such a horrible experience, my relationship with my best friend absolutely is being
gone on. Conversely, I could know that everything that is prepared carefully will
remarkably be superb, but do not try to make things complicated. A small mistake makes
a big misunderstanding between us.
CHECKLIST
Questions

Answers

Suggested
correction

1
2

Does the essay have three paragraphs?
Yes
Yes
Does the introduction include the hook,

background information and thesis
statement?
3
Does the body contain enough
Yes
background information and specific
details? Do they support the topic
sentence of the body paragraph?
4 Does the body include the topic sentence? Yes. It is “April 24th, 2020,
Which one?
was my best friend's 18th
birthday, which was
thoroughly meaningful to
me, so I decided to do
something to astonish her.”
5 Does the essay include time adverbs and
subordinating conjunctions?
6 Are all the verbs in the correct forms?

Yes

7

Yes

Does the conclusion explain what you
learned from the experience?

Yes

Ver 2:
Have you ever had a misunderstanding between you and your best friend? At my best
friend's 18th birthday party, I honestly wanted to make a surprise for her, but things did
not happen as I thought. I definitely made a terrible mistake.
April 24th, 2020, was my best friend's 18th birthday, which was thoroughly meaningful
to me, so I decided to do something to astonish her. Before her birthday party happened, I
had planned a couple of weeks to surprise her. Then, I explained my intention to my
friend to prepare carefully. Thinking about what I ought to do first was unquestionably a


hard portion of my intention. Fortuitously, I altogether finished it without any mistakes.
Things would be happened directly and superbly if I did not lie to her that I had to join
another party. Since I needed to take the birthday cake from another position, I had to lie
to her. As a result, she was immensely sad and disappointed due to waiting too long for
such an important event. And her best friend did not come and share with her happiness.
Luckily, I got there after beginning a couple of minutes. She went to me, hugged and
complained if I did not make things complicated. Apart from her tear, I saw the happiness
in her eyes as the most incredible moments in my life.
After such a horrible experience, my relationship with my best friend absolutely is being
gone on. Conversely, I could know that everything that is prepared carefully will
remarkably be superb, but do not try to make things complicated. A small mistake makes
a big misunderstanding between us.

Topic 1 Module 3: TV is bad for children. Do you agree or disagree?
Outline:
Introduction:
-Hook: With the rapid technological developments, many incredible devices were
invented include TV.
-Background information: Some research has shown that there is nothing detrimetal in
watching TV, but others have not.

-Thesis statement: I strongly believe that spending too much time on TV has a negative
effect on children due to three main reasons.
Body paragraph:
-Topic sentence: It is widely known that TV has a several of impacts on children.
-Examples/reason: + Affecting eyes.
+ Containing cruel content.
+ Being addicted.
-Counter-argument: This may be true; otherwise, this evidence does not mean that TV is
not crucial.
-Refutation: It simply demonstrates that we ought to let children contact positively by
supervising the time they could watch the TV.


Conclusion: Watching TV is literally harmful for the children who is not in control of
their abilities due to its effect on their eyes, its cruel content, and its addiction.
Version 1:
With the rapid technological developments, many incredible devices were invented
include TV. Some research shown that there is nothing detrimetal in watching TV, but
others indicated that TV has a deleterious impact on children, and try to prevent their
child from watching TV. Personally, I strongly believe that spending too much time on
TV has an adverse effect on children due to three main reasons, which I will mention
below.
It is widely known that TV has a several of impacts on children. First of all, spending in
front of TV set more than a couple of hours daily could make children meet some vision
problems easily than others. UV radiation, which is contained in TV light, can
temporarily damage their cornea and the conjunctiva after exposuring regularly. As a
result, children will simply be nearsighted. Additionally, TV might be involved violent
content, political matters or even adult content, if children consistently disturbs these kind
of contents, they will be distorting their mind. Nowadays, smart TV is well received with
the intelligent and convenient contact leading to the booming era of social media such as

Youtube, Facebook, and Tiktok. Hence, being contained negative content is not excepted
through all the social network normally, and children will meet the cruel content easily
and grow their mind in a really negative way. Finally, being addicted to TV is currently
engaged. Because of busy and stressful lifestyle of the parents, they tend to ignore and
leave their children behind the TV screen. Subsequently, children is addicted the
interesting thing in the TV. Gradually, they will be lost the social contact with thier
friends, less active and energetic than others. This may be true; otherwise, this evidence
does not mean that TV is not crucial. It simply demonstrates that we ought to let children
contact positively by supervising the time they could watch the TV.
Watching TV is literally harmful for the children who is not in control of their abilities
due to its effect on their eyes, its cruel content, and its addiction.

1
2

3

Questions
Does the essay have 3
paragraph?
Does the introduction
include a hook and a
thesis?
Does the body paragraph
have a topic sentence?

Answers
Yes
Yes.

Yes

Suggested correction


4

5
6

7

8

Does the body paragraph
give reasons and
explanations that support
the topic sentence?
Does it give a counterargument and refutation?
Does the conclusion refer
to the main idea of the
essay?
Are quantity expressions
used to avoid
overgeneralizations?
Are connectors used to
show the relationship
( opposition or support)
between ideas?

Yes

Yes
Yes

Yes

Yes.

Version 2:
Many fantastic inventions, such as television, have been developed as a result of rapid
technical advancements. Some studies have found that watching TV frequently has a
positive effect on children, whereas others have observed that it has a negative influence
on children and strives to keep their children from watching TV. Personally, I strongly
believe that spending too much time on TV has an adverse effect on children for three
main reasons, which I will mention below.
It is widely known that TV has several impacts on children. First of all, spending in front
of TV set more then a couple of hours daily could make children meet some vision
problems easily than others. UV radiation from the TV light can temporarily damage their
cornea and the conjunctiva after exposuring regularly. As a result, children will simply be
nearsighted. Additionally, TV might be involved in violent content, political matters or
even adult content; thus, children's minds will be distorted if they are continuously
approached these content. Nowadays, smart TV is well received with its intelligent and
convenient contact leading to the booming era of social media such as Youtube,
Facebook, and Tiktok. Importantly, due to the busy and stressful life, parents tend to
ignore and leave their children behind the TV screen. Subsequently, children will be
addicted to the interesting programmes on the TV and will lose social interaction with
their pals and become less active and enthusiastic than others gradually.
Conversely, television gives children the opportunity to learn and experience what they
can not be learn from the book by supervising the time they could watch the TV.

Otherwise, this evidence does not mean that TV is crucial. For example, we ought to let


children contact positively with the social life that they would pick up interpersonal skills
and become more confident. I think it is the best solution.
In conclusion, parents currently tend to break the rule that a child should not watch TV
more than 40 minutes successively and not more than 2 to 3 hours per day. Unfortunately,
this could be consequences of losing social interaction, appoaching inappropriate content,
and making eyesight problems.

Topic 2 Module 3: Is it a good idea for university students to have a part-time job?
Outline
Introduction:
It is acknowledged that the expeditious [rapid] development in social and economic is
remarkably leading to the increase of university students who have a part-time job during
school time. Some pretend that students have to face certain disadvantages. Others
dispute that having a part-time job gives students a superb opportunity to improve
themselves. Individually, I am truthfully convinced that students should have a part-time
job for three reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
Body:
-Topic sentence: Generally, having a part-time job emerges to be more persuasive that
the advantages students acquire during the job prevail the disadvantages.
-Reasons: + Become financially independent
+ Gain practical skills
+ Expand networking opportunities
-Counter-Argument: Last but not least, some people suppose that wasting lots of time
for a pittance makes student distract from study.
-Refutation: Conversely, students could contact with others regularly. So that, they keep
learning interpersonal skills and gaining experiences to make their customers pleasant.
Also, it compels students to manage their time effectively.

Conclusion:
In conclusion, it is surely noticeable that students can acquire several benefits while
having a part-time job. Apart from being independent on finance, gaining actual
experiences; students could properly expand their networking opportunities. Moreover,
they will know how to balance between work and study.
Version 1:
It is acknowledged that the expeditious [rapid] development in social and economic
is remarkably leading to the increase of university students who have a part-time job
during school time. Subsequently, it has turned to one of the most contentious
[argumentative] problems among students. Some pretend that students have to face


certain disadvantages. Others dispute that having a part-time job gives students a superb
opportunity to improve themselves. Individually, I am truthfully convinced that students
should have a part-time job for three reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
Generally, having a part-time job emerges to be more persuasive that the
advantages students acquire during the job prevail the disadvantages.
Firstly, thanks to a part-time job, students can earn a certain amount of money to
spend on daily expense. Normally, there is variety of budgets need to pay for at least
three years at university. So that, having a part-time job helps students reduce financial
burden on their parents. Additionally, students could acquire practical experiences for
their future business. Training at university only provides students basic background
information. Meanwhile, having a part-time job let student reinforce their knowledge at
university and set a good foundation for the future business. Thirdly, students are
encouraged to expand their networking opportunities. While working for a company or a
group, students have to contact with lots of people. Therefore, it is a superb chance for
them because several employers might take their eyes on them.
Last but not least, some people suppose that wasting lots of time for a pittance
makes student distract from study. Conversely, students could contact with others
regularly. So that, they keep learning interpersonal skills and gaining experiences to make

their customers pleasant. Also, it compels students to manage their time effectively.
In conclusion, it is surely noticeable that students can acquire several benefits while
having a part-time job. Apart from being independent on finance, gaining actual
experiences; students could properly expand their networking opportunities. Moreover,
they will know how to balance between work and study.
CHECKLIST
1
2

3
4

5

Questions
Does the essay have 3
paragraph?
Does the introduction
include a hook and a
thesis?
Does the body paragraph
have a topic sentence?
Does the body paragraph
give reasons and
explanations that support
the topic sentence?
Does it give a counterargument and refutation?

Answers
Yes

Yes. You have a
good hook!
Yes
Yes

Yes

Suggested correction


6

7

8

Does the conclusion refer
to the main idea of the
essay?
Are quantity expressions
used to avoid
overgeneralizations?
Are connectors used to
show the relationship
( opposition or support)
between ideas?

Yes

Yes

Yes, you use a
variety of
connectors in
this essay.

Version 2:
It is acknowledged that the expeditious [rapid] development in social and economic is
remarkably leading to the increase of university students who have a part-time job during
school time. Subsequently, it has turned to one of the most contentious [argumentative]
problems among students. People pretend that students have to face certain
disadvantages; meanwhile, others dispute that having a part-time job gives students
variety of improving opportunities. Individually, I am truthfully convinced that students
should have a part-time job for three reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
Generally, having a part-time job emerges to be more persuasive that the advantages
students acquire during the job prevail the disadvantages.
Firstly, thanks to a part-time job, students can earn a certain amount of money to spend
on daily expense. Normally, there is variety of budgets need to pay for at least three years
at university. So that, having a part-time job helps students reduce financial burden on
their parents. Additionally, students could acquire practical experiences for their future
business. Training at university only provides students basic background information.
Meanwhile, having a part-time job lets student reinforce their knowledge at university
and set a good foundation for the future business. Thirdly, students are encouraged to
expand their networking opportunities. While working for a company or a group, students
have to contact with lots of people. Therefore, it is a superb chance for them because
several employers might take their eyes on them.
Conversely, some people suppose that wasting lots of time for a pittance makes
student distract from study. It is quiet accepted, but students could contact with others
regularly while woking part-time. So that, they keep learning interpersonal skills and
gaining experiences to make their customers pleasant. Also, it compels students to

manage their time effectively.


In conclusion, it is surely noticeable that students can acquire several benefits while
having a part-time job. Apart from being independent on finance, gaining actual
experiences; students could properly expand their networking opportunities. Moreover,
they will know how to balance between work and study.

Topic 3 Module 3: It is said that school uniforms should be obligatory at high school.
Do you agree?
Outline:
Introduction:
It is apparent that wearing uniforms is impelled at high school. Some people assume that
wearing uniforms grants pupil lots Of benefits; others, in contrast, consider a quaintly
old-fashioned uniform truly as a nightmare. As for me, I am firmly convinced that pupils
should put their uniforms on during school-time due to three reasons
Body paragraph:
Topic sentence: In general, the advantages of wearing uniforms prevail over the
disadvantages
Reasons
+ Manifest students’ respect and politeness
+ Be cost-effective
+ Focus on their study
Counter-argument: Wearing uniforms is mind-numbingly tedious and prevents students
from expressing themselves
Refutation: + Uniforms recently seem to be more fashionable and suitable
+ Against separation between the rich and the poor students
Conclusion:
In conclusion, wearing uniforms encourages pupils to pay attention to the lessons, save
up money, and imdicate their politeness. Apart from that, they can also stay away from

the discrimination at school. Parents should diffuse these advantages of uniforms to their
child in order to help them love it.

 Paragraph ver 1
It is apparent that wearing uniforms is impelled at high school. Some people assume that
wearing uniforms grants pupils lots of benefits; others, in contrast, consider a quaintly
old-fashioned uniform truly as a nightmare. As for me, I am firmly convinced that pupils
should put their uniforms on during school time due to three reasons, I will explain
below.
In general, the advantages that students acquire while wearing uniforms prevail over the
disadvantages.
Firstly, uniforms manifest pupils’ politeness and respect for their teachers majestically.
Some stubborn pupils, for example, tend to wear inappropriate casual clothes to school
such as crop-top and shorts. So that, with the compelling of wearing uniforms, it could be
restricted easily and lets pupils build up a formal attitude to their teachers. Furthermore,
the uniforms normally have an affordable price. It literally is a good sign for parents, who
have a low-income totally, to save their money up. Specifically, a casual outfit might
approximately cost around 20$; meanwhile, a uniform only costs about 10$. Last but not
least, pupils can concentrate on their study effectively. For instance, thanks to wearing
the same uniform, they would not afraid of being old-fashioned or being distinguished.
Subsequently, they would be able to focus on their learning without hesitation about their
clothes.
Conversely, several imply that wearing uniforms is mind-numbingly tedious and
prevents pupils from expressing themselves. However, the uniforms recently seem to be
more fashionable and suitable. It could also against the differentiation between the rich
and the poor pupils. Consequently, they are strongly bonded with each other and
obviously not being bullied.
In conclusion, wearing uniforms encourages pupils to pay attention to the lessons, save

up money, and imdicate their politeness. Apart from that, they can also stay away from
the discrimination at school. Parents should diffuse these advantages of uniforms to their
child in order to help them love it.
PEER CHECK
( Vũ Tường Thụy Chương)
Questions
1

Does the essay have 3 paragraphs?

Answers
Yes

Suggested
correction


2
3
4

5
6
7

Does the introduction include a hook and a thesis?
Does the body paragraph have a topic sentence?
Does the body paragraph give reasons and
explanations that support the topic sentence?
Does it give a counter-argument and refutation?

Does the conclusion refer to the main idea of the
essay?
Are quantity expressions used to avoid
overgeneralizations?
Are connectors used to show the relationship
(opposition or support) between ideas?

Yes
Yes
yes

Yes
Yes
yes
yes

Ver 2
It is apparent that wearing uniforms is impelled at high school. Some people assume that
wearing uniforms grants pupils lots of benefits; others, in contrast, consider a quaintly
old-fashioned uniform truly as a nightmare. As for me, I am firmly convinced that pupils
should put their uniforms on during school-time due to three reasons, I will explain
below.
In general, the advantages that students acquire while wearing uniforms prevail over the
disadvantages.
Firstly, uniforms manifest pupils’ politeness and respect for their teachers majestically.
Some stubborn pupils, for example, tend to wear inappropriate casual clothes to school
such as crop-top and shorts. So that, with the compelling of wearing uniforms, it could be
restricted easily and lets pupils build up a formal attitude to their teachers. Furthermore,
the uniforms normally have an affordable price. It literally is a good sign for parents, who
have a low-income totally, to save their money up. Specifically, a casual outfit might

approximately cost around 20$; meanwhile, a uniform only costs about 10$. Last but not
least, pupils can concentrate on their study effectively. For instance, thanks to wearing
the same uniform, they would not be afraid of being old-fashioned or being distinguished.
Subsequently, they would be able to focus on their learning without hesitation about their
clothes.
Conversely, severals imply that wearing uniforms is mind-numbingly tedious and
prevents pupils from expressing themselves. However, the uniforms recently seem to be
more fashionable and suitable. It could also against the differentiation between the rich
and the poor pupils. Consequently, they are strongly bonded with each other and
obviously not being bullied.
In conclusion, wearing uniforms encourages pupils to pay attention to the lessons, save
up money, and indicate their politeness. Apart from that, they can also stay away from the


discrimination at school. Parents should diffuse these advantages of uniforms to their
child in order to help them love it.


Table of Content
Topic

Version
1

1. An importance event
or experience in your life

v

v

2. A memorable memory

v

v

3. Time –writing:
A misunderstanding
between yourself and
someone else
1. TV is bad for children.
Do you agree or
disagree?

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2. Is it a good idea for
university students to
have a part-time job?
3. Time-writing:
It is said that school
uniform should be
obligatory at high school.

Do you agree or
disagree?

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Module 1
Narrative
essay

Module 2
Opinion
essay

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