IELTS writting bar chart

*Task 1:
The bar chart illustrates information about the proportion of male and
female teachers in 6 different types of educational setting in the UK in
2010.
As can be seen from the chart, female teachers made up a particularly
large ratio of the nursery and primary group (approximately 90- 95
percent)
Men and women were more equally represented in teaching at
secondary and college levels. Specifically, in the secondary school,
the proportion of women was slightly higher than men, with 55% and
48% respectively. Especially, there was the same percentage of male
and female teachers in college (50%).
The highest position for men’s figure was roughly 68%, at university,
By contrast, there were only 30% women teaching here. In the private
training institute column, the proportion of men was 58%, 4% higher
than that of women.
Overall, the bar chart shows that women have a significant presence
in teaching young children while men predominated in the higher
status teaching role of a university lecturer.