PPT
PPT
Module
Module 77
Positive
PositiveEmphasis
Emphasis
McGraw-Hill/Irwin
©2007, The McGraw-Hill Companies, All Rights
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Positive
Positive Emphasis
Emphasis
♦To learn how to
Continue building goodwill.
Emphasize the positive.
Use positive emphasis ethically.
Begin to choose an appropriate
tone.
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Positive
Positive Emphasis
Emphasis
Start by answering these questions:
How do I create positive emphasis?
What’s the best way to apologize?
Why do I need to think about tone,
politeness, and power?
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Some
Some Negatives
Negatives Are
Are Necessary
Necessary
♦To build credibility
when giving bad
news.
♦To help people to
take a problem
seriously.
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Some
Some Negatives
Negatives Are
Are Necessary
Necessary
continued
continued
♦To deliver a rebuke with
no alternative.
♦To create a “reverse
psychology” to make
people look favorably at
your product or service.
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To
To Create
Create Positive
Positive Emphasis
Emphasis
♦Avoid negative
words.
♦Focus on what the
reader can do.
♦Justify a negative—
give a reason or link
it to a reader
benefit.
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To
To Create
Create Positive
Positive Emphasis
Emphasis
continued
continued
♦Omit unimportant
negatives.
♦Put the negative in
the middle and
present it
compactly.
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Some
Some Common
Common Negative
Negative Words
Words
♦ Afraid
♦ Bad
♦ Careless
♦ Delay
♦ Delinquent
♦ Deny
♦ Difficulty
♦ Error
♦ Fail
♦ Fault
♦ Loss
♦ Misfortune
♦ Mistake
♦ Neglect
♦ Never
♦ No
♦ Problem
♦ Reject
♦ Sorry
♦ Terrible
♦ Trivial
♦ Wrong
♦ Unfair
♦ Unfortunate
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Positive
Positive Emphasis
Emphasis Examples
Examples
♦ Lacking: We have failed to take
inventory.
♦ Better: We will be finished taking
inventory Friday.
♦ Lacking: This exercycle is not
guaranteed for life.
♦ Better: This exercycle is guaranteed for
10 years.
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Positive
Positive Emphasis
Emphasis Examples
Examples
continued
continued
♦ Lacking: Now Crispy Crunch tastes
better.
♦ Better: Now Crispy Crunch tastes even
better.
♦ Lacking: If you are not satisfied with
Interstate Fidelity Insurance, you do not
have to renew your policy.
♦ Better: Omit the sentence.
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Tone
Tone and
and Politeness
Politeness
♦Both are issues of power.
♦Tone is the implied attitude of the
writer toward the reader.
♦Don’t use the same tone with a
superior as with a peer or
subordinate.
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To
To Achieve
Achieve Good
Good Tone
Tone
♦Use courtesy titles for people
outside the organization you don’t
know very well.
♦Be aware of the power
implications of words.
♦When you must give bad news,
consider hedging your statement.
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Apologizing
Apologizing
♦If you must, apologize
Early.
Briefly.
Sincerely.
♦Be aware that apologies have
legal implications.