Writting for a small exercise in high school

I have liked coffee since I was a young child, and one day I
hope to open a small café with my pets. So, once I've finished
my education, I want to start my own coffee business.
Firstly, I'm going to start by renting a place at Nui Sap,
which is immediately next to the middle school and high school
I went to. Additionally, since the rent in residential
neighborhoods is less expensive than the market rate, it will
allow me to save money. I will mostly target locals and
students because of the location's convenience.
Secondly, my store will have a soft antique aesthetic that
will provide children a sense of comfort after a long day at
school. As a result, it will be constructed primarily out of wood,
along with numerous ornamental trees and flowers. The
restaurant's space will be adjacent to the outdoors and will be
divided into three areas: the terrace, the first floor with air
conditioning, and the ground floor. In addition, the store will
feature additional canine and feline buddies, which will serve
as a draw for customers.
And finally, there will be a wide variety of drinks on the
menu. Along with other marketing initiatives to draw clients,
the pricing will be affordable for students. In order to promote
the shop's reputation on social media platforms like Facebook,
Instagram, Tiktok, and others, I will hire reviewers.
In conclusion, I'm hoping that this strategy will be effective
in the future and help me realize my idea. And when my
students visit my shop after long school days, they can relax
and enjoy some comfort. I'll put in a lot of effort and gain more
experience to finish this strategy as soon as possible.