Formal email aaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the cancellation of my trip to the science
center.
As you know, we have prepared everything and equipped with the necessary knowledge
to enjoy the trip fullest. Not being able to go to the science center made me and many
friends in the club feel very disappointed. Besides, my study and work schedule is
completely busy and I have almost no free time next month. So it is nearly impossible for
me to take part in the up coming trip and that is a loss for me and my money.
Can I recommend you some alternatives? The first solution is that we would be very
grateful if you could convince the rest of the members to sign up. Another one is that
you can organize the tour somewhere else, with a reasonable scale.
I look forward to your feedback if my suggestions are accepted.
Yours faithfully,
Thuong

Nhật My
Dear Sir/ Madam
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service I received. While I understand that the
number of participants is not enough to organize the trip, the changes you have introduced are, I
feel, unwarranted.
The sudden change was unexpected as me and my friends were looking forward to this trip. I
was very disappointed to read the new notice about this change. The reason you have raised is
not convincing sufficent for us to wait, I suggest you to reconsider this so that it is more
reasonable to everyone and the quantity of your club. I spent a good deal of time with you going
through the details of service I wanted to receive as well as I settle a lot of money to provide best
privileges
I would appreciate if you could keep the old date, otherwise I hope you will take action and
resolve this issues .
Respectfully,
Nhật My
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Duc Manh and I have been involved in this club for several years. I am
writing this email to express my dissatisfaction with the announcement that the trip to
the science center to see the robotics display has unfortunately been canceled.
I tried to save and earn money to be able to join this trip because I am a big fan of the
robot. And next month I also have an appointment with my family and I can't reschedule.
As fas as I know , the club's president has also committed to the members that they will
not change the schedule.


I think you'd better refund the amount paid by the members for the trip. Then you have
to consult each member to change the time for the trip.
I look forward to receiving your response as soon as possible if my requests are
approved.
Yours faithfully,
Duc Manh

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this email to express my dissatisfaction due to the fact that the trip to the
science center to see the robotics display has unfortunately been canceled.
Firstly, I, along with those who have pre-registered, had been waiting for a long time.
SPECIFICALLY, trying to arrange a schedule to be able to see this robotics display so I feel
disappointed when I receive this email.
Secondly, we also spent a lot of money to attend this robotics display. We're mostly
college students so it's hard to save money.
Therefore I recommend the club organized a smaller show for us. If that's not possible,
give us a full refund and hold our spot for the new date for free for making us wait so
long.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Kim Thư

Nhat Quang Pham - 2192253
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction due to the trip to the science centre to see the robotics
display was delayed and especially the lack of professionalism in the way you work. You should
have surveyed the number of people who signed up to participate before you made an official
decision and charged the participation fee.
It is worth noting that I spent several weeks arranging my work and I even had to cancel all
previous appointments with the clients to be able to attend the upcoming event.


I demand a full refund and a public letter in which apologizes to people who were looking
forward to attending such an the trip to the science centre.
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours faithfully,
Nhat Quang

Nguyễn Bích Phượng
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I'm writing this email to express my dissatisfaction due to the fact that the cancel of the robotics
display at the science centre.
I spent several weeks trying to save up money for the covering of the event. I also invited my
brother, who is studying technology.
It's a disadvantage to me to look forward the episode on next month. I'm have no free time next
month and my brother also have a midterm test.
I demand a full refund of the fee. I would like contact later if I am able to participate on the next
event.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,