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GIAI THUdNG "SINH VrEN NGHIEN CUU KHOA HOC"
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THUC
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VE THE THUC, MAU TRINH BA.Y
VAN BAN HANH CHINH
TRONG cAc CO QUAN, DOANH NGHltp
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D~ tai "Thvc trl;lng va giiH phap v~ th~ thuc, m~u trlnh bay
van ban hanh chinh trong cac cd quan, doanh nghi~p" bao
g6m b6n ch1fdng:
~ Ch1fdng 1. Ph~n dftn lu~n (trinh bay Iy do chQn di tai,
phr;zm vi nghien cau, Ijch sa win di, mf!,C dfch, yeu cdu ,
phucJngpMp nghien cau va nhilng dong gop clla di tai).
~ Ch1fdng 2. Thvc trl;lng trlnh bay th~ thuc van ban hanh
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chinh trong cac lOl;lihinh cd quan, doanh nghi~p (dua ra cdc
mdu van bdn himh chfnh clla cdc C(Jquan quan Iy nha nude,
c(J quan hanh chfnh, sT! nghi~p, cdc doanh nghi~p va chi ra
cdc I6i sai
v€
thi thac tTznhbay cdc Ior;zivan bdn nay).
~ Ch1fdng 3. Giai phap v~ vi~c t5 chuc thvc hi~n m~u trlnh
bay th6ng nha't (trznh bay mQt s6 mdu hoan chinh nen dU(1C
dp df!,ng tTong cdc c(Jquan, doanh nghi~p).
~ Ch1fdng 4. Ph~n ke't lu~n
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Chlidng 1. Phdn din lu~n
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1.1.Ly do ehQn d~ tai
Trong cd che'thi tru"ongngay nay, nhieu cong ty, nha may, xi nghi~p vdi quy mo,
ho~t dQng, chItc nang, nhi~m ~, hlob thItc san xu~t khac nhau da ao ~t ra doi va tie'n
len vUdai ~nh tranh quye't ~t. Toy nhien, lam the' nao di cae cd quan, doanh nghi~
phat triin vii'ng m~nh, ho~t dQng mQt each chuyen nghi~p trong ~t ca eac m~t ho~t
dQng cua mlnh la clu hoi gay khong it kh6 khan cho cacnhil Uinhd~o. Ben ~nh vi~c
~p trung van ch~t Itiquang cao, ..., b~t ky cd quan, doanh nghi~p nao cling phii d~e bi~t chu y tdi ho~t dQng
hanh chinh van phOng - ho~t dQng thl}'chi~n t6 chItc, dieu hanh mQtcach Cl}thE ~t ca
cac ho~t dQng cda mQt cd quan hay doanh nghi~p. Vi~c chu trQng cii tie'n va tieu
chuin h6a cac ho~t dQng nghi~p ~ trong van phOng cd quan, doanh nghi~p nhti: cong
tac rong van gi~y to (gQi chung la rong tae van ban), rong tic t6 chl1'eI~p va btu trUhd
sd, cong tae Ie tan, ... deu mang I~i hi~u qua thie't thl}'echo toan bQ ho~t dQng cua cd
quan (doanh nghi~p) do, ddng thoi cdng thE hi~n dtidQng cua mlnh - ye'u t6 khong thE thitu dE bao dam sl}'tdn ~i, tinh c~nh tranh va quan
ba sIte m~nh ciia mQtcd quan (doanh nghi~p).
M~t khac, xet tren cd sd ph~m vi ho~t dQng hanh ehinh van phOng cua mQt co
quan hay doanh nghi~p, vdi hang lo~t cae rong vi~e ciia van phong (hay phOng hanh
chinh I), cOng tac t6 chItc bien ~p va xU'Iy van ban (to' so~n thao dtn ban hanh van
bin hanh chinh) Ia mQttrong nhung nhi~m VI} quan trQngva ehinh ye'u nh~t vi van bin
Ia phtiong ti~n thitt ytu (g~n nhti duy nhit) dE giao titp, trao d6i thong tin, truyen d~t
me;:nhl~nh trong cae cd quaD,doanh nghie;:pva t6 ehIte xa hQi.Nhti v~y, cO thi th~y £0
vlln ban hanh chinh co anh htiong trl}'ctie'p de'n hi~u II}'cva hi~u qua ho~t dQng cua cd
quan (doanh nghie;:p).Chinh vi v~y. vie;:equan tam dung mIte di nang cao ch~t ltiViJi cO'quan 000 va \'ira van phong dlt'!c t6n ~i dltiJi hlnh thli'c t8 chli'c phOng hay ~ pMn
chfnh • qwln ~ hay Hanh chfnh - td cbU'c.
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moo chinh.
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va hi~u qua clla van ban hanh chinh se g6p phffn tich clfc vao vi~c tang cuong hi~u
llfc quan 1:9' clla cac dip Hinh d,!-Ova hO'!-tdong chung clla co quan (doanh nghi~p).
Cac van phOng hi~n d,!-ingay nay m~c dil dii du<;lctrang bi nhil'ng phuong ti~n
di~n til' hi~n d,!-igiup cho vi~c trlnh bay van ban Mnh chinh nhanh han, dyp han voi
nhi€u kha nang chQn llfa thOng tin han; song tren thlfc te", cong tac bien so,!-nvfrn con
t6n dt nhi€u thai gian, cong suc thl moi t'!-o ra dU<;lC
mot van ban mang de"n hi~u qua
t6t nha't. D~c bi~t, M th6ng van ban hanh chinh trong cac co quan (doanh nghi~p)
khong VI the" rna chuin mlfc han, chuyen nghi~p han. Y thUc du<;lCtffm quan trQng clla
cong tac so,!-nthao van ban Mnh chinh, nhi€u nam qua nhil'ng mon hQc lien quan de"n
nghi~p vv nay dii dU<;lC
quan Him dung muc va dii trd thanh b~t buoc d6i voi mQi lo,!-i
hlnh dao t'!-o.D~c bi~t, til' khi c6 "Lu~t ban hanh van ban quy ph,!-mphap lu~t" ngay 12
thang 11 nam 1996, cong tac nay ngay dng
dU<;lCdua vao n€ ne"p, kh~c phvc dU<;lC
'fl'
nhi€u nhu<;lcdi~m truoc day. Tuy nhien, hi~n nay vfrn con nhi€u van ban quan 1:9' nha
nuoc n6i chung, d~c bi~t la van ban Mnh chinh thong thuong con c6 nhi€u khie"m
khuye"t nhu: van ban trai thim quy€n, van ban thie"u m,!-ch l,!-c,van ban sai v€ th~ thUc
va thll tvc ban Mnh ... Nhil'ng van ban nay dii va se gay nhi€u kh6 khan cho cong tac
liinh d,!-otrong cac co quan, doanh nghi~p.
Thlfc tr,!-ng tren la do nhi€u nguyen nhan khac nhau gay ra, trong d6 khong th~
khong k~ de"n tinh thffn trach nhi~m trong lao dong clla mot so' can bo, cong chuc nM
nuoc d6i voi cong tac ban hanh va quan ly van ban, d~c bi~t la slf ye"ukern, tinh khong
chuyen nghi~p v€ trlnh do so,!-nthao van ban clla hQ.
VI nhil'ng 1:9' do tren, toi dii quye"t dinh chQn d€ tai: "TmjC T~NG
V A GIAI
PHAP VE TIm THUC, MAU TRINH BAy VAN BAN HANH CHINH TRONG
cAc CO QUAN, DOANH NGHmp"
lam d€ tai nghien cUu khoa hQc clia mlnh.
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1.2. Ph:.tm vi nghi~n CUll ella d~ tili
f)~ tAila bltdc d~umo ti v~ lln1c tr~ng va dlta fa nb~n xet v~ vi~c ap d~ng the!
thItc van bin hanh chinh trong cac cd quan, doanh nghi~p hi~n nay. Mau trlnh bay thl!c
tt cua
nbung IOl;livan ban nay dii dlteJcWikhao sat va thu th~p tl;licae cd quan quan ly
nba nltdc (UBND Qu~n I, UBND Qu~n Thu BIte, BQTai chinh, BQGiao d~c va Bao
tl;lo,cae Chi c-qcttlUt), cac cd quan hanb chinb (Sd Tttphap, SdLao dQng-Thltdng binb
xii Mi, Sd Thltdng ml;li,S
sa
Bja chinb-Nha dit), cac cd
quan Sl!nghi~p (Trung tim Rang-Ham-M~t, Troong B~i hQc Lu~t Tp. H6 Chi Minh,
Tntong THCS Chu Van An, Vi~n nghien cItu cao su Vi~t Nam), cac doanh nghi~p
(Ngftn hang TMCP
A CMu, Cong ty Vi~t Nam Ky ngh~ suc san, C6ng ty d~t Phong
PM, Cong ty Bi~n Il!CThu BItc, Cong ty cOng nghi~p Tan
A va Cong ty B~u tlt -Xay
d'1DgBinh Chanh). Tir thl!c te'trlnh bay van bin hanh chinb giiJa cac cd quan (doanh
v
nghi~p) tren, toi dii dlta ra nhung giiHphap cho vi~c thl!e hi~n mAutrlnh bay van bin
th6ng nhit trong tit ca cae lo~i hinh cd quan, doanh nghi~p hi~n nay.
1.3. Lieh sO' va'n d~
Ngay nay, m~e du khong ai c6 the phd dinh t!m quan trQng eua rong tae hanh
chinb van phOng nhltng ho~t dQng nay vAnehlta dlteJcquan tam dung mIte. Tntde day,
vi~c thl!c hi~n nghien eItu khoa hQc v~ cae mang d~ tili thuQc linh Vl!cnay cOn ra"tit,
ntu c6 thl chi la nhung d~ tili dlteJcnghien cItu kha
sd
sai vdi nQidung nho, hCfP,khong
nAm Mt dlteJcnhil'ng thong tin mdi, khong dap ltng dlteJcyen c!u cua ngl!
cac trl!ong ~i hQcc6 chuyen nganh hanh chinb van phOng, nhi~u sinh vien dii bAtdiu
quan tim dtn nganh hQc nay va dii tbl!c hi~n dlteJccac d~ tAinghien cU'ukhoa hQckha
mdi me v~ nQi dung, phu heJp vdi cae yeu c~u bIte thitt cua xii Mi, vdi sl! diu
tli
nghien cItu kY cang, c6 ehQn lQC.Toy nhien, s6 IlteJngsinh vien nay cOn rit it, win
hlnh la tl;litrl!eJDgd~i hQc Huflit s6 sinh vieD lam DghieDcItu khoa hQc v~ cac d~ rai
chuyen nganh hanh chinb van phOng dlteJcth6ng ke vdi ktt qna nhn' sau :
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Nam 1997 : c6 05/126 sinh vi~n theo bqc ngAnh hAnh chinh van phOng.
_ Nam 1998: c6 04/80 sinh vien theo hQc nganb hanb chinh van phong.
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Nam 1999: c6 03/117 sinh vi~n theo hqc nganh hanh cbinh van phOng.
1.4. M\lc dich va y~u cdu clla d~ tai
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tAi nay dut;$cthJ!c hi~n nhhm m~c dich
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th6ng boa nhung kitn thltc dii hQc
v~ cong lac so~n thao cae lo~i van ban hanb chinb deSap d~ng van thJ!c tien. B6ng
thiJi, tr~n cO sd thJ!e tr~ng c6ng lac so~n thao va trlnh bay theSthltc van ban hanh cbinh
eua cae cd quan (doanh ngbi~p), so sanh cach trlnb bay van ban hanh chinb theo cae
quy djnb hi~n hanb cua cac cd quan chlte nang cua nba nudc deSphan tich nbung dieSm
khac bi~t ho~e nbung dieSm trlnb bay khong dung. Tir d6 dua ra nhung giai phap v~
vi~c t6 chltc thJ!c hi~n m~u trlnb bay th6ng nhift trong tift ca cae cO quan (doanb
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ngbi~p).
1.5. Phtfdng phap nghi~n cuu
Trong su6t qua trlnb thJ!c hi~n d~ tAi nay, wi luon lify 19 thuytt lam n~n tang deS
c6 Cd sd so sanh, d6i chitu vdi thJ!e
tt, dam
bao tinb khoa hQc va
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th6ng cua bai
lu~n, cling nbu tranb xa riJi vdi n()i dung cua d~ tAi. Cac phudng phap duc;fcsU'd~ng
trong d6 tAi nghien cltu nay g6m:
Phtfdng phap phan tich:
Bay la phltdng phap dltc;fcsd' d~ng dAu tien deSphan tich nbting dn li~u dii thu th~p
nbIim hieSuro ban chift cua d6i tltc;fngnghien cltu cua d6 tAi : theSthac va milu trlnb bay
van ban. Vdi phltdng phap nay, toi phan tich, xU'19 cac thong tin tren cd sd mIu van
ban dang duc;fCsU'd~ng trong cac cd quan (doanh nghi~p), tir d6 xac djnb nbnng thong
tin cAn thitt cho n()i dnng nghien et1'ocua minh.
Phtfdng phap so sanh:
Vdi phU'dng phli.p nay, toi pban bi~t dltc;fCnhnng dieSm gi6ng va kbac nbau gilla
nbnng quy djnb hi~n hanb cua cac cd quan ehae nang va c6 thim quy6n eua nha nltde
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va thtfc
tt ciia cac
lo~i van ban hanh chlnh dE tir d6 c6 thE dlta ra nhfi'ng giai phap
nhAm hl,ln che' va hOflDthi~n cong tac so~n thao van ban trong cac cd quan, doanh
nghi~p. Tit nhfi'ng 16i g~p trong cac van ban d6, toi c6 thE cung c6 l~i kitn thac ciia
mlnh v~ nhfi'ngdi~u dli dltQchQc tren 19thuye't
Phudng phap tang hQp:
Phltdng phap nay dung dE t6ng ktt nhfi'ng nQi dung thong tin dli pMn tich, so
sanh tir thl1cte' nghien cau gifi'aquy djnh hi~n hanh ciia nha nU'dcva thl1C tt thl1Chi~n
trong xli Mi ciia thE thac va mlu trlnh bay van biin hAnhchlnh, tir d6 dU'ara nhfi'ngktt
lu~n c6 tinh nguyen tAc,khuon mlu cho vi~c t6 chac so~n thao, trlnh bay va ban hanh
van ban hanh chinh trong cac cd quan, doanh nghi~p hi~n nay.
Phudng phap dlu true - h~ th6ng:
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La phU'dngphap dU'Qcwi ap d~ng dE M th6ng hoa tit cii cac van bin hanh chlnh
dU'Qcphep sit dq.ng theo tham quy~n, tren cd sd mlu quy djnh cua cd quan chac nang
nhA nU'dc,bAng phU'dngphap nay xay dl1ngmQt M th6nghoan chinh mlu cac lo~i van
ban dU'Qcphep sit dq.ng trong cac lo~ hlob cd quan hanh chlnh, sl1nghi~p, cd quan
quan IS' nhAnU'&:va doanh nghi~p.
1.6. Nhung dong gop eua d~ tai
1. BU'&:dAuc6 nhfi'ng~
xet c~ thE v~ thl1ctr~g oong tac so~ thao, trlnh bay
va ban hanh van ban hanh chinh cua cac lOl;lihlob cd quan, doanh nghi~p ~i Tp. Hd
Chi Minh.
2. Xac ~p nhfi'ng gw phap nhAIDhoan thi~n oong tac so~ thao van ban trong cac
cd quan, doanh nghi~p theo mQt thE thac th6ng nhit tren cd sd cua cac quy djnh
hi~nhanh.
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Chudng 2. Thtfc tr~ng trlnh bay th~ thuc
van ban hanh chinh trong cac lo~i hinh cd quan, doanh nghi~p
2.1. Th1;ictr~ng cong tac so~n thao va ban hanh van ban trong cac cd quan
quan
ly nha m/oc.
Cd quan quan 19 nba nudc la lo~i hlnh cd quan hanh phap - cd quan 1uon mang
tfnh chulin m,!c clla mQt n~n hanh chinh qu6c gia. Tuy nhien trong th,!c
tt, lo~i cd
quan nay vin ban hanh nhii'ng vlln ban c6 nhi~u sai ph~m v~ thi th«c va khuon mAu
rna Chinh phd cac
cd
cd
quan hanh phap cao nha't ban hanh. V~ thlim quy~n, van ban clla
quan quan 19 nha nude dudi day d~u dUQcban hanh dung.
v~thE th«c va miu
trlnh bay l~i ph~m kha nhi~u 16inhu : khong dUQcin d3.m,in nghieng, trlnh bay sai vi
tri. sai v~ cach th«c in hoa, in thu<'Jng,sai v~ so', k9 hi~u, ten lo~i.. Vila cac
cd
quan
quan 19nha nudc, cd quan hanh phap nen cac 16i sai nay se c6 anh hudng ra't Idn dtn
uy tin, tfnh chulin m,!c va chuyen nghi~p clla mQtn~n hanh chinh qu6c gia. Sau ddy la
cac van ban clla lo~i hlnh cd quan nay di dUQctoi thu th3.Pva phan tich:
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Ndi nh~n phili trlnh bay thap hdn so
voi th€ thuc ky IDiit dong.
XI
Duong ke
phili dai
b~ng
"DQc I~pTl,I'doH~nh
phuc".
9
I
Qu6c
hi~u phili
du<;1cin
di).m.
Ten cd quan ban hanh
van biln phili M<;1cin di).m
cONG HO.-\ XA HOi C:.,(:
~GHiA \'!::"T ?JAM
D6:: lap - .: r.1"c - H3p2. p~~
56, ky hi~u
trlnh bay
sai.
Qg tha.r
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Ngay
phili vie't
tay.
'fH6NG TV
Trich ye'u
noidung
phili trlnh
bay biing
chii'in
thuang.
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di).m.
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quan chil
quiln phili
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in thuang.
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Ndi nhi).n
phili trlnh
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hdn so
voi tht\
thuc ky
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AI
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ky phili du<;1c
trlnh bay
biing chii' in
thuang.
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SAO Y KINll G Dl
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phili dai
biing "Doc
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phtic".
10
Quilc
hi~u phai
du'<;icin
dam.
Ten cd quan ban himh van
ban phai du'<;iC
in dam
sil, ky
hi~u van
banlrlnh
bay sai.
J
Ngay
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lay
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trlnh bay bang chIT
in d~m .
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bay thllp hdn so vdi
the' thuc ky mQt
dong.
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Trlnh bay
sai.
Phai trlnh
bay bang
chITin
thuang.
13
2.2. Tht1c trl;lng cong tac sOl;lnthao va ban hanh van ban trong cac cd quan
hanh chinh.
Lo~ hlnh cd quan nay la cae sd nganh - cd quan ehuy~n giup vi~e eho UBND
thanh ph6 (nhiYngcd quan e6 vi tri r~t quan trQng trong hOl!-tdQng ella bQ may eong
quyc!n ella e~p tlnh. thanh ph6 ~e thuQetrung Il'dng).ehi6m s61u'<1ngr~t ldn trong h~
th6ng bQ may nha nll'de,thll'(Jngxuyen ti6p xue vdi c6ng dan va the hi~n til'each pMp
nhin eua m1nh trttde xa hQi thong qua hlnh thlte van bin hanh ehfnh. Vi v~y nhiYng8ai
s6t trong the thlte trlnh bay van hiln - eong e~ giao djeh ella lol!-ihl.nhcd quan nay - e6
inh hll'dng khong nhi) wi uy tin ella cd quan va uy tin ella ca n~n hanh ehfnh qu6c gia.
C6 the li~t ke 16ima cae lol!-icd quan nay ml1ephii nhll' sau :
1. L6i trlnh bay thanh phA.ntae giii.
2. L6i trlnh bay thanh phlln ten lol!-iva trieh y6u nQidung.
3. L6i trlnh bay thanh phin ngay thang nam.
4. L6i trlnh bay thanh phan s6 k9 hi~u.
5. L6i trlnh bay thanh phin ndi nh~n (hao g~m ca phin kinh gd'i).
6. L6i trlnh bay thanh phlln the thlte k9.
Nhlt vlJ-y,e6 wi 06109 thanh phin b~t bUQephld c6 ella the thae mQtvanhiln hanh
ehfnh 1 e6 nhiYngsai ph~m mang tfnh pM bi6n. Dll'diday la cae van hiln ella lo~i hlnh
cd quan oay bao hanh dii dlt<1ethu thlJ-pva phan tieh ro tirng 16i ph~m phai ella tirog
thanh phlln de th~y ro mite dQva sf!th~t ella tlnh trl!-ngnay.
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quan chu
qmin phai
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bang chIT
indij.m.
cOt'G
sCi TmJ<1NG~l
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indij.m.
r-@>
BAG CAO.
sal.
Ky hi~u
\" Ii;: I' NA:ft
QUyE'T DlNHE:(;A SO THlJdN"G MAijU'.
CHi~1L\H
V/v thltnn hlp b{l phfin Illllilllg trlfc t6 chuc HOi chQ' td~ll I,i '"
hang Vi~l Nam xuit kluiu Dam 2001
,IGlAYI J:)6c sd
Ndi nhij.n
phaidu<;Ic
tflnh bay Cf
vi tri d~u
mili ten.
CRU I';GHiA
)>.~.~c\l1.p
- To! do - II\!J;lh pink
56:
Ten lo').i
l').i bao
gam ca ten
cd quan
ban hanh
van ban.
H(IA X;\ 1101
Nlii uh61l ..
. Th.nh uy. UBt'DfTl' } EJe bao 00"
IBl Mo c.1 0
. 1J~ Thu0ng m.i
. Ban Giaml'Joc
. Lw,VT,
sCJ TH\ICN
'
~T
TP. H6 Chi Minh.
]lgd)'
0'(, tM,/S
I.Z. "tim 2001
S6,;.-U~4M.KllX~K
ldnh bay
sal.
KF:HO CH
~'~ ..~HaC TET NGUY~N DAN NHAM ~GO 20021
Trlch ytu nQi dung phai dI1<;1C
trlnh
ba y bling chIT in thuang.
15
Ten cd
quan chtl
qmin phai
tdnh bay
b~ng chIT
thuang va
in d~m.
Qu6c
hi~u phai
in d~m.
'QNll H()A X
L:Y 1l:\N 'II IA:-lI)i\N
HA:\H PH6 HO CHI
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tay.
s(t lAO
DQ:\G
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[H-A-O-C-j.,-O-C-o:-;r-C-r-A-'
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trlnh bay sai.
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l~i bao
g6m
trich ye'u
nQi dung.
ca
HQ ten nguai ky phai trlnh
bay b~ng chITin thuang.
Kh6ng co
ndi nh~n.
Qu6c
hi~u phai
in d~m.
Ten cd
quan chtl
quail phai
tdnh bay
b~ng chIT
thuang va
-
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l:Y I-IA!\
Dh DAN
T\1A!\{ r I'H6 H6 CHi MINH
I
CQ:-;C;IH)A
sO LAODQNG
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in d~m.
Ke HOACH
Sai dlu truc
diu (diu chi
co thanh
phh trang
ngIT".
XA HOI CHt ','mllA Vr(,T NA.\il
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TO CHilc
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'fRlIrftN" TH6'SG J.A ~ If • ~AM W02
Thiel uv.!c ld'chl1cCli~hllal a~0g rl1<)ng Irao ky ni~m oS;') n~ In ngay 'I'hlfdng binh-Li~t'l
(27nt1941 2mn.OO21 "I'a 57 nam ng:ay thanh l~p Jlg)mb l.an dQng - 'nUrling hinh vl Xii.
h(,j ;2~mI194.5 -'2X1lI8120lJ2~an giaID dii'c Soj1,:to d(\ng Thlltln,g hbh vA Xi! h9i co ke'
h(,~~htJ ~h\lcuQ't hOi thl- hl'lilhao lIon~ ,an bl)c6ng ~h1t~lh~{,cSl~Jt!M ~al1:
TM. EAN
TIj CHlJe
TRI.fONG nAN
ten nguai
ky phai du<;lC
tdnh bay
b~ng chITin
thuang.
HQ
TRAN TRUNG D(;NG
ca
g6m
trich
ye'u nQi
dung.
HQ ten nguai
ky phai du<;lc
trlnh bay
b~ng chITin
thuang.
16
Ky hi~u
tdnh bay sai.
56; 5,IUQD
TP.H~
QUYET IJ.JNHrCUA
eM Minh,
sa GIAO THONG
v~ duy~t :-i(ii dWlg Ht;lp ddng goi th'u
Ky hi~u
trlnh bay sai.
eung Ung v/jt tilling va phI,! ki~n
Sol. Ilh~n,
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CONG CHANHl
Tl'_HJ eM Mini"
Noi nhij.n phai tdnh
ba y thffp han so vCli
th€ thue ky mot
dong.
ngay~rJ tilting
1 ndm 2003
Ky hi~u
tdnh bay sai.
KEHOACH
HAJ'iHGlAO m()N
UANLY Dillu
Phai mnh bay
ten co quan
nh~n van ban
ngang hang
vCli"Kinh
Pbu~ vlJ SEA GAMES 22 • nAOll003 ~i Thanb pbu Ho Chi Min
Trich ye"u noi dung
phai dUQetdnh bay
bling chITin thuang.
q/
Kfnb~:
Ten
lo~i l~i
baa
g6mca
ten co
quan
ban
hanh
van
ban.
. Uy HIlD Nhdn
dAn tlWnh pM"Hd eM Minh.
- Thl1 trmhlg B~ GTVT Pb:j.rn rh€Minh - Tnt3ng
gui".
t1~u ban glao tll6nK phl,lc V1J Seageames.
Ten
Noi nh~n phai
trlnh bay thffphon
so vClith€ thue ky
mot dong.
TP.
BAO
r cO~G TRi~H
Noi nh~n phai
trlnh bay thffp
han so vClith€
thue ky mot
dong.
Kh6ng sll' dl)ng
til "trich ye"u".
j
tid
Chi .'
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cAo TIE~ DO TH1,;'C HI]J:N
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die\! hanh ke"hoiJ.ch pMt nien kinll
t€ - ,,[ bQi thAllh phil' ~1Il 2003.
'tr,Na
Ky hi~u
tdnh bily sai.
Tdnh
bay sai
vj tri.
17
Ten cd quan chu quiln phili trlnh
bi\y bling chil thuang va in d~m.
UY
CONG HOAXA HOI CHI] NGHTA VltT NAM
DQc l~p - T\l' do - H~nh phuc
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ri'lllg
va Klem tra viec rhlJ'c hanh
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I.
Cftu true
cau sai (chi
moi co
thanh ph~n
tr~ng ngil).
g 1 -lIB- 2lJij2
Li{hki€:m tmng vi~c nidi, \'i~c
va Ie hQi
mag
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hlln e(l
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quan so
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ki8m tra vi~c (hl!e hanh Li.:'l ki~m tTong "i
Giam Me Sa fJja
chfnh - Nhil.
da-r da chi doO nhu' sau:
De nghj Thu. IrLiilng de Phung, Ban cd quall So, Th,i Wong c~c
dcln vi trl!'c thuQc sa lang cui)og chi u;tn Va ki~rn tra, rJh~c Jlhd dn b'i
ding ch,tc vi~c lh\l'c hilnh li~l ki(:m lrung vi~c cli
El'l\ng lh~i, xem day Ii! m(jt llQi (h'ng quan !.(,)ng cua wOc v~n d,jng coAlI
Jlin doar\ k6t xily d\tng doi song v~n ho ••.
Thll'a l~nll Giam doc So, va-n phQng oS,) ~in Lruy'cJ) d\'t n(>i dung
chi d'i'0 nhtl tr~n di!' cae PhOng, Ban va (Jdn vj Ih.l'c hii;n,
lri.n IWng kfnh ch9.o,
Ndi M;Jn :
-NhU:l~n
-BGD (M b"u d,,)
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Nhin chung, van ban eua cae 00 quan hanh chlnh noi tr~n d~u du'~ ban hanh
dung vdi thim quy~n, song cling nhu' cae co quan quan ly nha nu'dc van ban cua hQ
cling ph~m nhi~u 16iv~ thcSthltc trlnh bay nhu': thie'u thanh phin "Noi nh~n", Wn lo~i
I~i bao g6m ca fIich ye'u nt)i dung, khong du'''c in d~m, in nghieng dung cach, trlnh bay
sai vi tri, sai v~ cach th1i'cin hoa, in thu'ong, sai do trUe cau, sCi,ky hi~n, Wn lo~i...
Nhung I6i nay co anh hu'ong r~t x~u khong chi Ia v~n d~ uy tin cua co quan ban hanh
van ban rna cOn thcShi~n
51!
thie'u nghiem Wc, khong chuyen nghi~p trong ho~t dt)ng
hanh chlnh cua co quan cong quy6n va d~c bi~t se gay kho khan hon trong ho~t dt)ng
quan ly, sO'd~ng van ban nhu' mt)t oong ~ giao tiEp hanh chinh chinh thltc..
2.3. Thl!c tr~ng c6ng tac so~n thao va ban hanh van b3n trong cac cd quan sl! .
nghi~p.
Vdi lo~i hinh 00 quan nay, sai ph~m cO thcSnai cOn n~ng hon r~t nhi~u. Nhung
8ai ph~m khOng chi dirng I~i 0 vi~c trinh bay th€ thltc theo tieu chuin 0 nhung thanh
phful kha phd biEn nhu' cac cd quan hanh chinh neu tren, rna sai plupn ca 0 nhUng
thanh phlln quan trQng khac, co tlnh bi€u tu'"ng nhu' "Qu6c hi~u", nt)i dung trinh bay
cacthanh phful clia van ban (th~m chi sai ca v6
y nghiava
ngil pMp). Nhltng 16i sai
dang cM y hon Ia nhung sai ph~m v6 thltm quy6n ban hanh van biin hanh chlnh. Vi~n
nghien eau cao so Ia Io~i hinh cd quan
51!
nghi('p nhu'ng ~ cho phep minh ban hanh
"chi thi ••- van hiln quy ph~m hay ca bi('t ma chi cO nhung co quan quan 19nha nu'de
(Thu tu'dng, Bt) trUong, UBDN cae dp) mdi du'Qcban hanh theo mt)t trinh tlf va thu ~c
Iu~t dinh
2
2.
Sau day Ia mt)t 56 van ban dii du'Qcthu th~p va phan tich:
L~t banh3nh van ban quy p~
pMp 1n4t,1996.
19
Ky
hi~u
trlnh
bay
sal.
CONG HQA XA HQI CHO NGH1Avl~r NAM
DQo 14p - Tl) do - Hl).nh philo .
. J3dY.TeTP. HO Chi Minh
TflUNG TAM RANG HAM MM
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....
Minh,
Ngay~t Ihl1119OJ nam ?OO
TP. He ChI
Thay
b~ng:
"Kinh
Iilith@': !cAe KJlOA • PH6l'lO
hi9n cong li\.c
Vlv Ihl/o
Ndj oM":
Ban Gram EJ6c
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Ten cd
quan chu
qmin pMi
in d~m.
Ten cd
quan ban
hanh van
ban phai
dUQc trlnh
bay b~ng
chu in hoa.
Khong co
thanh ph~n
ndi nh~n.
Khong co
thanh ph~n 55,
ky hi~u.
Ten lo~i
l~i bao
g6m ca
trich ye"u
nQi dung.
lUll
.)~ Y Tc H.I r" Chi \1111h
B~l\h
vi.;n
COn!! fjoa Xii 110i Chli ,\gll;., Vifll\alll
tlOc !~i'-7.Jilll'" H.,,!lill]~>
Rang H~rJ1M~l
Qu5c hi~u
phai in d~m.
Khong co
tnanh ph~n 55,
ky hi~u.
Elia danh,
ngaythang
nam trlnh
bay sai vi tri.
11101\6 BAO
7
Trich ye"u
nQidung
phaiduQc
in d~m.
ViV'
CI,.illl
gi:i di~~If!
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van ban phai
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thuong .
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8~NHVltN MNG HAM ~T
GONG !lOA xii. tlOI r.H~ NGfifA VllT NIIM
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trlnh bay
b~ng chu
in hoa.
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Ten cd quan chu quan phai dUdc
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Ngay phai
vitt tay.
b~ .
QUYETDlNH
ClIA mtll
Ndi nh~n
phai trlnh
bay tha'p
hdn so
voi thtS
thuc ky
mot
dong.
Ten cd
quan chu
quan phai
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